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    Flower Power: Chapter 6

    Story written on February 7, 2007 by greentea.
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    Water, water everywhere….

     

    “Um, I’ve gotta go Bette.  Thanks for the drink.”  An uncertain smile displayed.

     

    “You’re welcome Tina.”  Bette smiled and extended her hand to take Tina’s empty glass.  Upon the brief exchange, Bette’s hand brushed Tina’s with the gentlest touch.  The brief contact caused a slight gasp from the blonde.  She looked down at her hand expecting to see some sort of evidence from the encounter.  Rising smoke, redness, swelling….something.  She realized there was indeed swelling, but it wasn’t her hand that was growing and pulsating with pain.

     

    An awkward exit was pre-empted by a comforting compliment.  “That color really looks good on you Tina,“  Bette smiled a subtle smile.   Her eyes danced along the neckline of a fitted off-the-shoulder top.   It was the same color as the sunset outside.

     

    “Thanks.”  Tina replied in a shaky whisper.

     

    Almost immediately, hazel eyes misted over.   Tina quickened her step and pulled on the door handle to leave.  Unable to look Bette in the eye, the distraught blonde looked elsewhere.   

     

    A confused Bette placed her hands above Tina’s and pushed the slightly opened door back to its previously closed position.   “Did I say something to offend you Tina?” 

     

    “Bette, I’ve been here what?  Thirty minutes tops?”  Tina sighed in frustration.  “Within that time you’ve fixed me a drink, listened to me, smiled at me, and complimented me.  You’re a fucking stranger and you just gave me your undivided attention without….

     

    Bette’s eyebrows creased as she tried to keep up with the words flying out of Tina’s mouth, “Without what?”

     

    Tina’s bubbly laugh contradicted the lone tear sliding down her face.  “Without asking what’s for dinner, “  Tina sniffled.  “Or, without needing to know if your favorite shirt is clean.”

     

    Clearly embarrassed, Tina’s eyes searched the ground below.  It was easier to view the plush carpet beneath her than the pair of empathizing eyes before her. 

     

    Bette used her thumb to rid the teardrop from a reddened cheek.  She placed her lips where the tear had been and remained a little longer than intended.   Tina didn’t seem to mind.  In fact, she closed her eyes upon feeling the softest lips in the world brush against her skin.  When she regained her sight, a small smile welcomed her back into the world.   

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    3. I have to agree with annieb69! While your writing is great I just can’t get on the Alice and Bette thing. Don’t get me wrong there are some moments but it’s not enough to say I want them to be togther. Psot soon!

    5. “No ‘mommy-body’ here. But it was without a doubt, a mother of a body.” You know I love the way you write greens. I also love the sound of JB’s voice, it is indeed yummy.

    6. ah angel what you do to us mere mortals with your words. this was just fucking fantastic. hmmm…. a choice between al and tina. well slap me silly. i know my choice. love the descriptions cutie. thanks.

    8. I have to admit Bette and Tina are hot. But I still don’t like that Bette cheats on Alice and Tina cheats on her husband. May be Alice needs her own Monday distraction. Get more balance in her relationship with Bette.

    9. hey greentea, thanks for the post. Bette is totally going to hurt poor Alice. It is also great to read that Tina has a life outside of her relationship with Bette. I think part of their downfall had to do with Tina losing herself in her partner. I like how she can stand on her on two feet in your stories. thanks for sharing your wonderful talent. I think you know by now that I love everything you write!!

    11. hey what a bomb of a story..gette needs to dump alice and have tina full time everyone can still be freinds and all. or is tina still married to beaverhead..p.p.s.

    12. Yes greentea, I am still laughing at the exchange between Alice and Jenny , referring to Monet. LOL! Loved the flashback of when Bette met Tina. These two are so sexy together add your writing talents and voila…Smokin’ HOT! I am always excited to read when you post a story. You never dissapoint. Post soon. Oh by the way…Tina as a florist= Flower Power. Clever!

    13. to paraphrase you: “You sound so yummy when you write. I just want to pull the words out of your pen and swallow them. Does that sound perverted?” LOL….such a wonderful delightful story…i think though that time is coming when Bette will have to make her choice…i hope it’s Tina, they seem to have deeper connection

    15. Greenie your writing is amazing, you know I think that :o)) I’m intrigued and captivated, but it’s also tough to read – this story is a mystery to me because of how it makes me feel!!! BTW it’s not only Bette’s voice that is YUMMY!!! LOL. Post soon…

    17. Bette is the playa’s playa – she has perfect balance. How does she do two women in a day? “Bette seized this moment as she did most others.” I love your writing. I love your Bette.

    20. Hey Green Tea, This is an extraordinary tale as both Bette and Tina are in committed realtionships with Alice and a husband however are drawn together as the moth is to the flame. They need and want the heat of their dalliances but know that is may cconsummed and destroy them. IT is possible to love two people at the same time however if you have to hide it and have weekly getaways to continue it then I do think that everyone will get hurt in the end. There will be tears. That siad it is a brilliant story with the charcters fleshed out and real. More please as soon as you can. Much gratitude from Your Loyal Fan.

    21. hello there my friend. i have been pretty MIA from the site due to work/baby and am just now catching up on some of my favorites, which you of course, are a leader in that pack.i hope alls well and please know that i am loving your story.

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