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Foolish Moves 45
Bette : Tee, whats wrong ? I leant forward to her as I asked.
Tee : Its, its just Bette, the rose is beautiful but the last one you left me was the one on the table at home with your wedding ring in. I understood that because you always bought a single red rose when you were truly sorry about something. Im not sure I understand now. Bette, are you trying to tell me something ?
Bette : I smiled, and she looked more confused Tee, yes, I am trying to tell you something, but not anything like that. Come look at the rose, so strong but so delicate, so rich in color but almost transparent, just beginning to open, it needs nurturing but will find its way. I could see Tee was beginning to understand. She squeezed my hand and pulled me in for a hug. Plus the other eleven are down in the cabin I struggled to get it out because I was laughing. Tee poked me hard in the ribs.
Tina Bette Porter, that is not funny !
Tee didnt look at me. I pulled the seat out and she sat down at the table. I said I would be back in two minutes. I hurried to get the entre, a prawn and crab dish I had selected, with dry champagne (non alcoholic of course). I rushed up onto the deck.
Bette : For Madame I placed it carefully in front of Tina and sat down.
This was going to be the most romantic night of our lives. Tee was thrilled with my choice of entre, we ate and laughed and an outsider looking in would never have known the pain wed been through. I asked about the girls back home, they were after all our family too. I spoke of my new found respect for Kit, how much I missed her. I didnt think about work, there were more important things now.
Bette : Tee, you look beautiful
Tina : So do you Bette
I could tell Tee really meant that she thought I looked beautiful. We finished our entre and since we had the whole night decided not to hurry the main course, I secretly hoped wed eat it in the dark, as romantic as it would be to eat with the sun setting, I had my reasons. One the last sun set Id see like this, the only things I wanted to be concentrating on were Tee and the magnificent colours in the sunset. I also hoped the dark might conceal my disappointment at not being Tinas wife again. We walked around the outside of the yacht, admiring its size and slickness.
Tina : Hey Bette, want to show me the bed ? as Tee was swiftly make her way into the cabin. Guess the days of shy, demure Tina are over ! I stood outside looking out. I wanted to show her a few things but not yet. I wanted to make love under the stars, on the rug, outside, not in the cabin. I start to make my way inside, Tee is lying on the bed, patting the bed, waiting for me to join her.
Tina : You know Bette, you have some good ideas
Bette : I do huh ? I ask playfully, warming up to the idea of making love down here. After all, a girl can do it more than once in a night, right ? We can do it again under the stars.
Tina : Yeah, you do as she gently places her hand under my top. I have an idea, lets make love between course, except dessert.
Bette : Why not dessert ?
Tina : If I know you Bette, dessert has chocolate and strawberries
Bette : Oh you know me well, as I gently push Tina back and begin to make love to her.
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welcome back!!! thanks for the update!!post soon please!!
I echo everyone’s sentiments!
Welcome Back!
Welcome back – you have been missed. Great updat but way to short. Please post soon
WELCOME BACK STRANGE..WONDERFUL CHAPTER THANK YOU!!!!!PLEASE POST SOON
Damn what a beautiful and amazing and so romantic night for Bette and Tina. They are so sweet and lovely couple. Man sad the story is an end and hope you will post soon. Thank you!
I don’t think I’ve commented before but first off Welcome Back! I hope Tina doesn’t turn down Bette’s proposal.
welcome back! been too long….been an avid reader of this chapter! thx for this great romantic..they are juz soooo sweet together. Is comin to an end ain’t it? FINALE PART I? wokie..do post soon…..!
unbeknown, I’m gonna buy a yatch and then I’ll invite you. that would be a special thanks for this special update ! I’m so very touched, merci beaucoup, I’ll keep waiting for Foolish Moves 46, You’re a star unbeknown !
I am so happy your back. Thanks for this it is everything I had hoped for. Thanks
Love your version of Bette & Tina! Thanks for continuing your story.
Hey Girl,
Happy to see you posting again.
Sad as this fab sotry comes to an end.
Please post more soon.
A fan.
So happy to see you are back…really missed this story.
K
Great chapter. Can’t wait for the next one.