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FOREVER I PROMISE: Chapter 48
Tinas phone was ringing in the middle of the night. She sat up in bed grabbing for it since Bette was still in ICU.
Tina: Hello?
Nurse: My I speak to Ms. Kennard please.
Tina: This is she.
Nurse: Ms. Kennard I am calling in reference to Ms. Bette Porter. Ms. Kennard you need to get to the hospital right away.
Tina: Whats wrong with her? Did something happen?
Nurse: Ms. Kennard, Dr.
Tina threw the phone down screaming for Joe. Charles woke up running towards Tina.
Tina: Charles you have to drive me to the hospital. Something is wrong with Bette. Please, we need to go now. Joe can you stay with the twins please.
Joe: Certainly Tina.
Charles ran for his pants. He had been napping on the couch. He got them on just as Tina flew out the front door. Charles drove as fast as he could without getting them killed. The Hummer flew through the night heading to an unknown situation. The nurse didnt say anything other than come now and hurry.
Tina called Kit from her cell phone. She was on her way. By the time Charles parked Tina was already running into the hospital. Charles took off running after her. He caught up with her at the elevator doors and jumped in. As the doors to ICU floor opened Tina had to jump back out of the way. People were running toward ICU. X-ray machine Techs, EKG Techs and nurses running in and out of a room.
As Tina walked closer she saw that it was Bettes room. She started to rush in but Charles grabbed her up in his arms. Her legs kicking trying to make him put her down.
Tina: Somethings wrong with Bette! Charles put me down! I have to go to her!
Charles lowered Tina to her feet but held on. Just then Kit stepped off the elevator.
Kit: What is happening Tina? Have they told you anything yet?
Tina: The curtains are closed and we cant see in Bettes room… But KIT so many people are in there. Something’s wrong I can feel it.
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(48 votes, average: 3.42 out of 5)
Great chapter, you had me scared there in the bginning :) post soon
OMG..now its Dana and Alice drama time???..lol..youre killing me..ok i have no choice …post soon bye ;-)
You really had me going there…great chapter!
K
Great chapter although I had a slight heart attack at the beginning. Can’t wait for more.
I passed out at the begining nice twist with al dana post soon
i can’t believe it. you really got me. i thought bette was dead. thank god she isn’t. keep the stories coming. i love them.
Great chapter OCD not much drama,giving us a moment to breath lol. Thanks so much for this story it is great!
Good chapter. Damn you scare me man, I thought Bette is dead and thank god she’s not. Glad Bette and Tina have a good time now. Ok about Dana and Alice, they need to talk and see how is go. Post soon, thanks!
See, I told you that people would want to murder you after reading the first part, heh. It got better though. Glad Dana was talking with someone, it should be with Al, but anyone is good too. More!
OCD, you really had me in the beginning…I was lit. Finally, Bette & Tina are good. Your drama is killing me…but I’m enjoying it very much. Pls. keep posting. Great job.
OCD, for a minute I thought I was going have to shoot ya!!!! Now, Bette and Tina are good, but you need to fix Alice and Dana. Post soon.
I must say TK that I almost shoot you there when I read page 1. I was still in chock after your previuous chapter and I thought “here we go again”. You almost had me there – but glad you continued in a nother direction. Wonderful tallent you have TK. You are so damn good at this. So keep up the great work