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FOREVER I PROMISE: Chapter 54
“OH GOD YES! Bette, oh yes baby. Oh god yes, right there baby. I need you inside me, please baby. I need to feel you.”
Tinas hands pressing harder made it difficult for Bette to look at Tina. So she raised Tinas hips further into the air with her arms holding her there. Bette could now see Tinas eyes as she devoured and consumed Tinas center with her mouth, licking and gently sucking on Tinas ***** then Bette entered Tina with her tongue and pushed as far and deep as she could. Tina let go of Bettes head and grabbed the sides of the tub to steady her self. Her hips thrusting meeting the rhythm of Bettes tongue. Matching each thrust as she moaned and begged for more. Bette moved her tongue back to Tinas ***** and again sucked and licked it and she enter Tinas with her two fingers slowly sliding them inside of Tina.
As Bette felt Tinas body open and accept her fingers, Bette added yet another and began to move her fingers in and out of Tina. Slowly at first trying to be gentle, but the thrusting of Tinas center against Bettes hand forced her to thrust faster and harder to match Tinas rhythm. Their bodies having found their perfect rhythm. Their eyes completely locked upon one another. Bette felt Tinas velvet walls tighten around her fingers and she knew Tina was close. She felt Tinas body tense but as if Tina wanted her to stop. Tina closed her eyes. Bette quickly removed her mouth from Tinas center.
“Tina, I love you baby. Look at me Tina. Please baby, open your eyes for me. I need to see your eyes Tina.”
Bette said this as she continued to thrust her fingers inside of Tina. Tina opened her eyes and the moment she did Bette said, I love you baby and curled her fingers deep inside of Tina to her g-spot. Without any warning Tinas body erupted and exploded into the most powerful ***** she had ever felt with Bette. Bette pressed deeper and deeper hitting Tinas spot over and over again with Tinas body losing all control and now bucking against Bettes thrusting.
Tina calling out, “OH BETTE!!!!! OH GOD YES BABY.”
Tinas voiced now quivering she felt her state of ***** start to come down just as Bette reached as deep as she could once again and sent Tina completely soaring into the heavens. No words left her lips only moaning, whimpering as if it was just to much for words to come from her lips. There eyes only losing contact briefly before returning to lock again on each other. Tinas body now feeling the after shocks as wave upon wave of her ***** subsides. Tina now begging Bette to stop. As she could barely speak the words Tina burst out crying.
Bette lowered Tinas body back into the water as Tina reached up and grabbed hold of Bette pulling her against her chest. Tina is crying so hard she cant catch her breath. With her legs still wrapped around Bettes waist she held on tight not letting go not even if her life depended on it. As her pain, her feelings of guilt were all washed away with her tears. The part of her that she thought had been taken and destroyed had now been returned to her. Tina and Bette are holding on to each other so tightly and both are now crying. Through their tears they whisper I love you. I cant live without you. Their crying starting to slow, Bette lifts Tinas chin with her hand and wiped away some of her tears. Look into my eyes baby and let me look upon yours. Tell me my love, do you see it? Do you see you are home? Bette said with every beat of her heart. Looking into Bettes eyes, Tina whispered Yes.
In her attempt to show Bette, her love, how she felt as if Bette had reached in and touched her soul through her eyes, to show just how much Bette had mended her and what they had just shared meant to her, Tina tried to convey with one single kiss that yes, she was no longer broken…
…she was truly home.
Their healing had begun.
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(64 votes, average: 3.58 out of 5)
Oh, sweet mother of pearl, that was totally rocking TK. Totally! Heh. I got to read first, so that helped boost my opinion…j/k. Gotta love it. More soon, woo!
B.E.A.U.T.I.F.U.L…just it
Amazing…simply amazing. Great chapter.
Wow OCD…you’re good!!!
Damn this is awesome and amazing and lovely, love it. Beautiful chapter, post soon. Thanks!
I thank you with a ZILLION STARS! You did good :)
after the last two chapters, you’re offically on my fav authors list:)
Holy shit TK – that was so beautiful. Simply amazing. Do post soon…can´t wait for more to come and I know you have something up your sleeve for us.
Once again…simply amazing!.
Great!
Now let’s see how they deal with JT’s hearing loss.
amazing
K
That was so sweet and loving. Amazing chapter. Love it.
If thats what coming home is all about, somebody call me a f***in cab! I’ma goin home! Fabulous!
That was such a loving chp.
That was simply amazing!
That was really sweet