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    FOREVER I PROMISE: Chapter 62

    Story written on July 2, 2005 by OCD.
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    Fourth Of July Party
    Drama, sex, lies and more drama. Someone is shot?

     

    Bette, stop..  Yes, I started the surgery.  There was no one else to do it at first.  Dr. Berry and her team took over once they were scrubbed in.  Stacey said feeling her emotions catching up with her now. 

     

    Bette, what happened?  Stacey asked as she had to sit down now.  Her body visibly shaking, her eyes filled with tears.  Did I cause this Bette?  Did I push Whit over the edge?  I did, didnt I?  This is my fault I shouldnt have left her.  I should have seen this coming.  For her to try and take her own life.  My god what kind I wife am I to walk out on her when she needed me the most?  Stacey said crying into Bettes shoulder.

     

    Stacey, it’s not your fault.  We all saw it and ignored just how dangerously low Whit had fallen.  We all see her as our strength, but we failed her Stacey.  I am so sorry for letting you and Whit go through this all alone.  Bette said crying just as hard.

     

    Bette she left with Helena.  What was I suppose to think?  Stacey said.

     

    Helena called the house and told Tina Whit had her gun out Stacey.  I went over there to talk to her.  Try to calm her down.  She kept drinking and when I reached for the gun we struggled and it went off.  It’s my fault if it is anyones.  I couldnt stop her, I couldnt save my friend.  Bette said now becoming hysterical.

     

    Bette, stop.  Get control of yourself.  This is no ones fault but Whits.  Shes the one that pushed us away.  But, shes going to be ok.  The bullet only grazed her skull.  Shes going to live Bette.  You did save her.  Stacey said trying to regain her composure. 

     

    When can I see her Stacey?  Bette asked.

     

    In a few hours after she is put in a room.  Then you can all go see her.  Stacey said.

     

    Arent you going in with us Stacey?  Tina asked.

     

    No, I’m not Tina.  As much as I love Whit with all of my heart.  She needs help that I cannot give her.  Until she is no longer a danger to herself I will not bring Josh around her.  Stacey said standing to her feet.  Her expression hardened.  I’m sorry, I have to protect myself and our son.  If she gets help.  Well lets just take one step at a time.  Stacey said.   

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    1. Okay, maybe not hunted down, it turned out better than I expected(not that I didn’t think it would be awesome) Anywho, this was simply the best…as Tina Turner would say. Woo!

    4. OK TK I think you are setting us up again!! great about Whit but i won’t be happy until I hear more about bette’s bleeding!! There were no ad’s and the story was 8 pages and I love long posts

    5. you are a horrible person. But your story is so amazing. there are just not words to say how great your story is. It is the best story i’ve read. Im happy for whit. i hope things work out with her. I also hope that bette’s okay. they’ve gone through enough, they don’t need to go through anymore. post really soon please.

    7. please tell that Bettes bleeding is just stress..i cant take it another cancer..Geezzz this is L word fanfic or ERs? i can smell medical alcohol already…OMG i still cant breathe have i said that you are a very mean person..cuz you are..lol..amazing fucking chapter..ohh and for last..i hate Stacey atitude..love is not only good moments

    8. man oh man…gotta love all the drama. Helena needs to die a horrible death.
      Bette’s bleeding again…not good. She shouldn’t keep it hidden like she is. Best to get that looked at ASAP…but it IS Bette after all. It’ll be a lot worse for Bette if Tina happens to find a bloody tissue in the trash.
      Glad Whit is better…I can imagine the challenges that she’s going to face…with therapy and trying to get her life together again.

    12. Oooh, oohh! I…I…I am wading in blood!.
      What a roller-coaster of a tale is this one, OCD! The ups and downs and lefts and rights and all arounds have left me with a whiplash on my neck and a WICKED grin on my face. Let this ride go on forever PLEASE.

    15. OH this chapter was very great. I hope Bette will be OK. Yes Whit needs some help and I can understand why Stacey left her. Perhaps Whit can say to Tina she was sorry kissing Bette like she does ? They’re friends or like a family but only friends.
      Please post soon next chapter. Thank you.

    17. ….This is my first post on this story…not sure why though?!?….anyhowz that chapter was fantastic & I love this story & the drama.

    18. My God…such drama…loved it. Whit comment about hitting rock bottom — that was good. And Helena having a bit of humanity and doing the right thing…well, a surprise. But, now Bette’s bleeding again — damn…no more heartache. Loved it, please continue on.

    19. I have just spent a very long time getting caught up on all your chapters. Reba told me about you and you are awsome to say the least. I love the way you write. You put your heart and soul into every chapter. I find this very refreshing and hard to find on FF. Give me a shout on my email. I hear we are about the same age(i won’t mention the number) and we live very near each other. Great job on the writing. beachcatyello@yahoo.com

    20. Wow I thought you were going to kill Whit off THANKS FOR NOT DOING THAT…I don’t like that Bette was bleeding AGAIN..GREAT JOB PLEASE POST SOON……

    22. Oh holy shit, this is unbelievable amazing chapter. Damn I just don’t know what to said, just one word “Excellent”. Glad Whit ok and hope she will be able to walk soon. Bette is bleeding again and please don’t let anything happen to Bette. Please post soon, thanks!

    23. The drama was great I died when whit shot herself you brought me back to life now that she can feel her legs anain . pleas don’t let bette be really sick.Bette and whit BFL hang in their stacy Once again great chapter

    24. So far so good TK. When Bette startet to bleed out her nose, I really wantet to hunt you down…because I thought OH GOD HERE WE GO AGAIN. But I guess I´m going to have to wait until next time. Amazing update TK – but I know you have something installed for us in the next post. Can´t wait for more drama to come. You go girl.

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