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    FOREVER I PROMISE: Chapter 62

    Story written on July 2, 2005 by OCD.
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    Fourth Of July Party
    Drama, sex, lies and more drama. Someone is shot?

     

    Hey you guys mind if I join you for a moment?  Whit asked.

     

    No come on in Whit.  Were done.  Bette said.

     

    Al, I just wanted to say how sorry I am about what happened.  Whit said

     

    Whit, it’s ok I’m fine really.  I wish everyone would stop worrying.

     

    Alice, were worried because Helena has you caught in a bad circle of abuse.  You know damn well I saw it at Christmas.  If it hadnt been for the explosion I would have stepped in sooner.  Ha, thats funny.  Stepped..  Well you know what I mean.  I’m sorry I wasnt there Al.  Ive seen it on the job so much.  I dont want to see you hurt any more or anyone else like Dana.  Please think about it and let us help you.?  Whit said.

     

    Look I appreciate everything youve both said.  I have no intention of going back to her, I promise.  Now we can go enjoy the party now that you two ole farts have lectured me.  Alice said laughing, dodging from both sides the smacks she knew were coming. 

     

    Tina, Dana and Doc had been talking in the kitchen.  Kit, Carmen, Charles, Joe and Shane arrived.  Alice Bette and Whit joined everybody, but moved the party outside when the kitchen became to small. 

     

    Josh and the twins were in the play area the Bette had custom made for her kids.  It is shaded and fenced in so they cant wonder off.  By the time the three little ones woke up for a nap it was time to crank the music up. 

     

    Carmen and kit of course went back and fourth about the different styles of music.  Compromising this time, to please the young and the older crowd.  Whit loved beach music so she threw her CDs in as well.  Carmen and Kit drew the line with Whits country music though. 

     

    After everyone had eaten they was all talking and having a great time.  Drinking, swimming, yacking and dancing. 

     

    At the sight of her beautiful wife, Whit felt her mouth go dry from watching her lithe body in the pool.  Staceys voluptuous bouncing ***** with hard nipples playing volleyball was more than Whit could take. 

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    1. Okay, maybe not hunted down, it turned out better than I expected(not that I didn’t think it would be awesome) Anywho, this was simply the best…as Tina Turner would say. Woo!

    4. OK TK I think you are setting us up again!! great about Whit but i won’t be happy until I hear more about bette’s bleeding!! There were no ad’s and the story was 8 pages and I love long posts

    5. you are a horrible person. But your story is so amazing. there are just not words to say how great your story is. It is the best story i’ve read. Im happy for whit. i hope things work out with her. I also hope that bette’s okay. they’ve gone through enough, they don’t need to go through anymore. post really soon please.

    7. please tell that Bettes bleeding is just stress..i cant take it another cancer..Geezzz this is L word fanfic or ERs? i can smell medical alcohol already…OMG i still cant breathe have i said that you are a very mean person..cuz you are..lol..amazing fucking chapter..ohh and for last..i hate Stacey atitude..love is not only good moments

    8. man oh man…gotta love all the drama. Helena needs to die a horrible death.
      Bette’s bleeding again…not good. She shouldn’t keep it hidden like she is. Best to get that looked at ASAP…but it IS Bette after all. It’ll be a lot worse for Bette if Tina happens to find a bloody tissue in the trash.
      Glad Whit is better…I can imagine the challenges that she’s going to face…with therapy and trying to get her life together again.

    12. Oooh, oohh! I…I…I am wading in blood!.
      What a roller-coaster of a tale is this one, OCD! The ups and downs and lefts and rights and all arounds have left me with a whiplash on my neck and a WICKED grin on my face. Let this ride go on forever PLEASE.

    15. OH this chapter was very great. I hope Bette will be OK. Yes Whit needs some help and I can understand why Stacey left her. Perhaps Whit can say to Tina she was sorry kissing Bette like she does ? They’re friends or like a family but only friends.
      Please post soon next chapter. Thank you.

    17. ….This is my first post on this story…not sure why though?!?….anyhowz that chapter was fantastic & I love this story & the drama.

    18. My God…such drama…loved it. Whit comment about hitting rock bottom — that was good. And Helena having a bit of humanity and doing the right thing…well, a surprise. But, now Bette’s bleeding again — damn…no more heartache. Loved it, please continue on.

    19. I have just spent a very long time getting caught up on all your chapters. Reba told me about you and you are awsome to say the least. I love the way you write. You put your heart and soul into every chapter. I find this very refreshing and hard to find on FF. Give me a shout on my email. I hear we are about the same age(i won’t mention the number) and we live very near each other. Great job on the writing. beachcatyello@yahoo.com

    20. Wow I thought you were going to kill Whit off THANKS FOR NOT DOING THAT…I don’t like that Bette was bleeding AGAIN..GREAT JOB PLEASE POST SOON……

    22. Oh holy shit, this is unbelievable amazing chapter. Damn I just don’t know what to said, just one word “Excellent”. Glad Whit ok and hope she will be able to walk soon. Bette is bleeding again and please don’t let anything happen to Bette. Please post soon, thanks!

    23. The drama was great I died when whit shot herself you brought me back to life now that she can feel her legs anain . pleas don’t let bette be really sick.Bette and whit BFL hang in their stacy Once again great chapter

    24. So far so good TK. When Bette startet to bleed out her nose, I really wantet to hunt you down…because I thought OH GOD HERE WE GO AGAIN. But I guess I´m going to have to wait until next time. Amazing update TK – but I know you have something installed for us in the next post. Can´t wait for more drama to come. You go girl.

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