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FOREVER I PROMISE: Chapter 64
About an hour later Whit heard an alarm sounding. She looked up and saw the gate to the play area was open. Getting back into her chair she looked for the kids. Amy and Jordan were playing in the sand box but Josh was no where around. Whit locked the gate behind her.
Going over to the alarm pad Whit saw that it was the pool entrance alarm sounding. She felt her heart racing as she moved quickly towards the pool. Complete horror struck Whit as she saw that Josh fallen in the pool and he couldnt get out. Whit starting screaming for Shane but no one came. Moving her wheelchair next to the pool side Whit climbed down out of her chair and fell into the water.
Struggling to get to Josh since her legs couldnt help, her arms quickly tired. Whit finally grabbed hold of Josh trying to calm his crying. He was so frightened but started to calm down some in his Mothers arm. Treading water with her other arm Whit was fighting to get them back over to the wall.
Tina and Stacey arrived at the house at the same time. Entering the front door Tina heard the pool alarm sounding and ran towards the pool. Stacey didnt know what was wrong but followed close behind. As Tina got outside she saw that Amy and Jordan were in the play area but she did not see Whit or Josh.
Running through the pool gate Tina saw Josh laying on the side of the pool. As she got closer all she could see was an arm holding Josh still. As Stacey entered she saw Josh and ran to pick him up. Tina jumped into the pool seeing that Whit had gone under.
At some point Bette had arrived home and heard the alarm and yelling in the back yard. She ran outside and saw Stacey in the pool area. Racing over to see what was wrong, Bette saw Tina diving for Whit. Jumping in to the pool, together Bette and Tina were able to pull Whit up to the side and onto the deck area.
Stacey checked Josh finding that he was scared, but ok. She handed him to Tina and checked on Whit. Bette started dialing 911. Stacey started CPR on Whit when she got her to cough up the water she swallowed and her breathing was returning to normal.
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(40 votes, average: 3.90 out of 5)
Woo, I’m your babe? That’s sweet. Gotta love it. I love you story too. You are my babe too. LOL. More!
WOW!!! High Drama!! Please let Bette be alight!
Oh sure, leaving us hanging. Not even one clue regarding Bette’s doctors appointment. WTH!
Oh, you almost make me cry. I love this story. Thank you.
TK what’s up with you posting once a week now?? making us wait forever??
Geezz man..in your little mind for sure has a pandoras box..lol..cuzz you have the greatest ideas ever. man i´m shaking until now…amazing chapter but this is not a surprise..post soon why are you taking forever???? ;-(
Aah, finally, you’re back. Miss you THHHIIIIIIIISSSS much. Hope your arm feels better so you can write some more amaeffinzing fanfic. Always looking forward to your posts.
Damn awesome chapter and can’t wait to see about Bette’s drs appointment. Post soon, thanks!
excuse me, i believe that bette had a drs. appointment. leaving us hanging again. great chappy. but whit needs to not be such a man. post soon please.
K
Wonderful as always. So sweet yet sad for some and so hot for B and T :) Can’t wait for more.
Tank you, really happy you posted, Can’t wait for next post, update on Bette, Whit getting her wife back and Alice and Cruz. Lovin’ it
Great chapter, but what’s wrong with BEtte, I need to know NOW…LOL Please post soon
WOW,that was a GREAT CHAPTER…WHEN WILL BETTE TELL TINA ABOUT THE DOCTOR’S VISIT?THANKS GREAT JOB..
Shit TK – the drama you have in your story here. You´re killing us here. Now what is going on with Bette…do tell us in the next post. And I do hope Petlove can keep her hands to herself when you are writing an update for us. But do enjoy yourself. Post soon
OCD great story. Love the support they have for each other.
WOW…first, Bette & Tina “wake-up” and then Whit’s rescue. The drama is high, but much appreciated…but what about Bette? Is she alright? LOL…the saga continues.
what happened at the doctors – you’re such a tease!
damn thats good sweet move with Whit, oh yeah dont keep us waiting on whats up with Bette…Great stuff tho. Keep up the great writing
Nice to see my girls on the mend !!!!!!!! The doc how did it go!!!!!!!!!!