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Forever I Promise: Chapter Seven
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Ok, ok stay calm Alice said running into the house behind Tina. Dialing Dr. Bruchs office Tina got the answering service and left an urgent message. With in no time Dr. Bruch called Tina back. Hey Tina whats wrong. I got your message that it was an emergency. Tina explained that everything had been going great. They were having a welcome home party for Bette and she maybe drank several Long Island Ice Teas. Dr. Bruch started to laugh. I’m sorry Tina I know its not funny. Shes be ok. Just keep an eye on her. Skip her meds for the rest of the day. I’m certain she wont need any pain meds. Give me a call back if anything changes. Other than that she should be fine. Ill see you Monday ok.
Tina and Alice rejoined the gang outside. Only this time making sure everyone watched their drinks. Tina could tell that Bette was feeling no pain. She was up beside Kit singing her heart out. Something Bette never ever did.
Tina was helping Shane get the food off the grill. So Tina when are you going to tell everyone youre pregnant? Tina almost dropped the plate. Tina turned around and grinned at Shane. She knew Shane always had this way about her. The all knowing Yoda. Shane I havent even told Bette yet. Please dont say anything. I wanted her to get settled back into our home before I told her. I just dont know how. Tina Bette had a brain tumor removed. Shes not blind. Shes going to notice sooner or later that its not from eating. I know I know Tina said. I’m going to tell her tomorrow.
Later that night Tina was trying her best to get Bette into bed. First she was dancing, then she was bouncing on the bed. Next thing Tina knew Bette grabbed her and kissed her. Bette, what was that for? Because she said. Oh because huh. Tina noticed Bette blushing like a school kid having had her first kiss. Then she got hot and jerked her shirt off.
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great story, thanx for posting so soon
K
Great chapter, can’t wait for more.
great story…I am glad you are getting Bette back to her “old” self.
take your time, don’t feel rushed. I glad that you post more then once a day.
that chapter was so much better and i hope Bette could be healthy soon thanks ;-)
OK, I’m enjoying the story, am intrigued by the outcome; but I hate the facts that: 1) The affair is being blamed on the tumor — too easy, you’re taking the responsibility away from the person and ignoring how Tina and Bette were noncommunicative, way before the affair. 2) Tina and Bette should definitely not make love now! They are not ready. Bette needs more therapy and they need to deal with their communication issues. Yeah I know this is not my story but I like the idea of this story, so please don’t move too fast that you overlook the true story (Kind of how IC deals with the show).
luv4nrt I absolutely agree with you about most of what you said. I know I caved in to the pressure of my pears. But the story is really only a day old. Well maybe 2 now. I’ll get there. I just had to make Bette a bit older.
I love this story. Please continue.
I have just got to say I am so addicted to this story. Loving it!!
I am so happy she remembered..Can’t wait to see her reaction about the baby…
TK you’re doing a great job. Don’t rush on our account. Move at your pace and take us whatever direction you want to go. The many addicted readers will always continue to read!
Loved this ending. I am off to the next chapter.
Oh that is so sweet and glad she remembered. Ok post soon, thanks!