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Forever Together
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She sighed and I felt her breath on my neck, ” yeah? And who’s place would that be?”.
I looked at her intently, ” our place Al”, she moved and looked at me with a confused gaze, ” I’ve been thinking, I’m never gonna be able to live without you Alice, maybe we could move in together ?”
She shifted and I smiled at her perplexed look, ” are you sure Dane, I mean that would be a big step for us?”.
All I had to do was smile, and she knew, and I was greeted with the most passionate kiss, and I knew, when I got out of here, I would forever be with Alice Pieszecki.
But days turned to weeks, and weeks into months, and within no time at all I had been here with her, for 7 months. Everyday was the same, the same medecine, the same routine, the same feeling. But as soon as I saw Alice, all I knewwas Alice.
For some reason, I feel so different today. My heart feels heavier, and I can not shake this sense that something is going to happen today. I really need to put my mind to something else. I look around the room at all these pictures we have up of our friends. We look so happy and so, care free. I miss those days, hours we spent at the Planet talking about nothing and everything at the same time. Then I look at Alice, and I know I have everything I could possibly need in my life. Her hair is so much longer now, and it looks darker, and yet she still looks like the Alice I fell in love with, because no matter what she is still so beautiful. But there’s something different today, she’s glowing. There’s this light beaming from her, she’s so bright and shiny. Why is she shining all of a sudden?
Suddenly I feel this urge to wake her up, I need her awake, I need to see her smile at me and touch me and kiss me. All of a sudden, I feel so scared. Why am I so scared right now?
“Alice? AL, baby, wake up, please wake up baby” I plead as I squeeze the hand that’s holding mine, and suddenly I start to cry. She wakes up.
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phew, heavy stuff. you made me cry. i want my danish to be happy. this was a sad way, but i still liked it a lot.
I never thought I’d be okay with reading Dana dying, but you just did it. If it does happen *nooooo*, let’s hope there’s a Danish heaven just like you described. I loved it, thank you!
That was amazing. I love the lineyou can always hold me I swear baby, I’ll feel you”.
That was sad, but so nice. I think we all know Dana and Alice are destined for one another. Great stuff. Love it.
Sorry got a little trigger happy and didn’t finish my thought…I just loved that line, it’s so Alice. You write Danish beautifully. This story makes me unbelievably sad for the end of S3 though. Please continue with your other story, we haven’t gotten an update from that in a while and I’m sure everyone could use some fluff! Great job!
It’s sad but Danish is together, this is one death I can get use to. Love the dream like feel of this story. Loved this!
wow – that was really sad. but so good. really well written.
SAD BUT BEAUTIFUL STORY!
A real tearjerker… Reading this story it made me think of the lyrics I will love you from Fisher. (And I’ll give my heart/Till the end of our time/Forever and a day/Till the stars fill my eyes/And we touch the last time/I will love you.)
So sad yet so beautiful. I loved it thanks