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Forever yours. Chapter 5.
“So Carmen, when are you going to have children?” says the old woman, with thick red lip stick.
Carmen looks like she got slapped in the face, “Tia, we will have children when Shane and I are ready.”
“Well, doesn’t Shane want children?” Another snoopy aunt says.
Carmen grids her teeth, guess Shane and her will be having that talk now.
“I would love to have children with Carmen,” Shane says, Carmen immediately snaps her head up to look at Shane, “when we’re both ready for that commitment.”
“So Chane,” Mercedes speaks up, glaring at her sisters, “how many children would you want when you’re ready? And who will be the um…”
“Well, Carmen would definitely be the mother, she’d look gorgeous pregnant.” Shane says smiling, then the table fake awe’s at them, and the boys wipe away fake tears, “As for number, I’d have to say one…”
“What!”One of the noisy aunts says. “This is Mexican family, there’s never 1 child. You better be given us like 10 into the family!”
The table laughs at Shane’s shock expression; maybe she should’ve taken the boy’s words seriously.
“Mom, tell them to be mind their own business,” Carmen says in whining voice, she loved, yet hated her family.
“They’re right! I want 30 grandchildren from you; you’ve made me wait long enough.” Mercedes says, giving in to the temptation of forcing them to conceive; it’d be easier with a man, least it could happen accidently.
Carmen sighs, being defeated. Who was she kidding, she’d gladly give her mother all the grandchildren she wanted, she just needed Shane to be there with her.
Shane looked over at Carmen, seeing the pain there, and found herself saying something she’d never thought she would say. “I promise I won’t make you wait long Ms.Morales.”
Carmen looks at her, and smiles, she knew from the Shane’s stunned eyes, it was another ‘did I really just say that’, which meant it came from her heart.
They finish up dinner, and head to their respective homes, after Shane’s response, no one brought up the subject anymore, haven gotten what they wanted.
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Carmen and Shane are both in their night clothes, Shane brushing her teeth, and Carmen laying in bed thinking.
When Shane comes out, seeing Carmen’s dazed staring of the ceiling, she goes over and lays next to her. She caresses Carmen’s face and moves it to face her. “What’s wrong?”
“Nothing babe, I’m just thinking about dinner.”
Shane sighs knowingly, “about that-“
“It’s okay I understand, I’ll wait as long as you need if you ever decide to go through it.” Carmen said, though the pain in her eyes deceived her.
“Okay,” Shane says, not knowing how to handle this. Shane lays her head down, and Carmen lays her own head on her shoulder. Shane begins to think of when will she be ready for children. She looks down into Carmen’s eyes and sees her with unshed tears in her eyes, and she curses herself for being too weak. She sighs, “Carmen, how many children do you want?” Shane asks nervously.
“Honestly?” Carmen asks, she feels Shane nod her head, “Ten.”
Carmen laughs at Shane bulging eyes, “Ten?”
“Yes, what can I say I’m Mexican, we’re best baby makers.” Carmen says teasingly, trying to lighten the mood to not scare Shane away from talking about this when she is ready.
“Well, in that case,” Shane says in a shaky voice, “maybe we should get started.”
Carmen looks up into Shane’s serious eyes, letting her own unshed tears fall down her face, Carmen kisses Shane passionately. She loved her family’s gossipyness.
Random question: What the hell happened to Shane’s yacht?
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wow!!! im the first fan to leave a comment!!! heehee.. loves it.. please post the next chapter real soon.. like today!!! hahaha.. about the question, i dont have a clue about what the answer is… god.. hahahaha.. lAtEr!!! hOtFoRsHaNe!!!
great story, keep it up.as for the question, shane never had a yacht. it was that gay guy’s (the one from the club who hooked her up with cheri jaffi) he let her have a paty there and that was it.
i meant he let her have a party there, not paty…. my bad…
The family dinner conversation cracked my ass up! Guess they HAD better get started!! PPS!
I am loving this story….. they should of never had Shane leave Carmen at the alter….. That would have been the best couple in the show…. but they broke all us Sharmen lovers heart….. Carmen having 10 kids lol…. Shane going to have her hands filled… please up date soon…. thank you ! :)
OMG! I love this chapter. I was bustin’ up big time. Although I’m not Mexican, I come from a culture very similar to the ways of the Mexican culture and that’s exactly how my aunts are. Love it! PPVS!
Wow it’s soooo sweet. Love to see how Carmen’s family terat Shane. Of course they like Shane a lot. Who dosen’t?? Carmen is cute when she told she wanted 10 babies. Thanks and PPS
lord! i was laughing so much throughout this chapter! soooo right abt the gossipy aunties! i have some in my family too! goodness.. but at least something good came out from their intervening.. 10 kids? sounds like a very carmen-thing to do.. i bet she’d be a great mom :) as for shane’s yacht, it was never hers! it was the guy from the gay mafia, right? :p hahaha..
Bloody great chap!! Right from the best way to get woken up…to the *gulp* 10 kid’s. Moose beat me to it, wasn’t his name Harry?