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Forged in Fire: Chapter 30
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“Baby Girl, you will. But just like tying those laces, it will take time,” said Kit.
“You kept threatening to cut the laces off and get me more velcro,” said Bette.
Kit laughed. “You think that was a threat? It was more like a promise.”
The sliding glass door opened and in moments, Dylan appeared with a tray and two black, Asian style bowls. He handed one to Bette and one to his mother.
“Miso soup,” he said with a smile.
Bette grinned at him. “Smells amazing.”
“I hope you like it.”
Bette replied, “I know I’ll love it.”
Dylan removed the rest of their crudité and dip and promised them that dinner would be served in 15 minutes.
When he had closed the sliding glass door, Kit said softly, “Every time I look at him, I know that all the struggle was worth it. Sometimes it felt like I had to claw my way back from the dead. But I did it. Do I struggle every now and then? Yes. But never like before. I just know, I won’t go back.”
Bette nodded and silently made the same vow to herself.
I won’t go back.
8 Days Ago – Thursday
After work, Bette stopped by Alice’s condo. When no one answered, she let herself in, finding her best friend asleep on the couch. She nudged her gently so as not to startle her.
Alice’s dark brown eyes stared up at her. “Bette?” she asked.
“Hey Alice,” said Bette. She sat down near her friend, finally smelling the distinct odor of skunk weed.
Bette smiled. “Smells…. fragrant in here,” she said.
Alice pushed herself into a sitting position. “I’m sorry.”
Bette held up a placating hand. “Don’t be. It’s fine.”
When she looked more closely at her friend, Bette could see that Alice’s eyes were puffy and red-rimmed. She had obviously been crying. “What’s wrong, Al?” she asked.
Alice shook her head, but Bette wasn’t deterred. She sat down on the couch by her best friend and asked again, “What happened?”
The blonde’s shoulders were drooped and her posture was slumped. Her buzz was gone now, and her fingers itched to retrieve the joint in her ashtray. Bette followed her line of sight and smiled again before she retrieved the skunk weed and placed it to Alice’s lips. She held the flame of a purple, disposable lighter up to the joint until it glowed a fiery red-orange.
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WELL DONE!
Wow…. that explains a lot. The article was a diversion while the Hannity show was the main attack. I want to know the reaction from Steven Kennard. And now what happens to Daniel and Kaitlan? And where are Bette and Tina now? The plan was very well done. Peach Tea in the bottles. No wonder Bette could drink so much of it. And to act drunk, she just quit bathing and eating whatever she had available in the kitchen. That is really hunkering down and playing the role. The fact that Tina spent days just watching her on the cameras must have been hard as hell. And I love that Melvin help out with the plan and provided a place for Tina while they were waiting. This really reflects how much Melvin has changed and how much he cares for Tina as well as Bette and Kit. I am now officially a fan of this Melvin Porter.
This is a well done drama. It sure fooled me. Thank you for this chapter… I look forward to another when you can get it to us. Thanks.
WOW! I love it when it great plan comes together. Post as soon as you get a chance.
This does explain a lot. Love that Melvin came through for them. I still worry about Bette. That’s a lot to put her through. She needs to keep taking her meds and checking in with her therapist and Tina needs to deal with Henry’s murder once and for all. And…….. for God’s sake……. Bette needs to sever ties with Alice. Offering her pot!!! What is wrong with that woman???? I pray this has not been too much for Bette. Not all of those tears were acting. That she endured it all for Tina is amazing. What love! I also wonder if Bette on any subconscious level remembers her past or at a minimum senses something. I know she is not supposed to.
This is a thoroughly thought through plot, MTS! Very impressive. Unexpected twists, unexpected allies, great storyline with the time offset and the different perspective of the acting characters. Sublime.
I have to read it again to get all the details right.
First do exactly what Darth Kennard was expecting, then – bam! – bring on the girlfriend of the dead son-in-law and mother of his child and have her tell the story on a big news station. Tables turned! Great. But I still fear that Kennard remains a threat as long as he is alive.
Never thought that Melvin could be part of the plan but it seemd to be an excellent idea to refer to his expertise. I have to admit that he is getting in my good books again. Never would have guessed.
Will Bette tell Tina whether she visited the girlfriend? Will someone knock some sense into Alice until she finally understands Bette’s problem with drugs? What a friend would tempt an addict (who is still in acute treatment) with consuming themself under their very nose? Tina and Bette still have a lot to talk about. Too much holding back still.
Fantastic twist btw that Alice (of course) remembered Bette’s strange behaviour when she picked her up at LAX all those months ago. Could be an interesting topic for a conversation between Bette and Tina.
Thanks so much for posting, MTS. Throroughly enjoyable chapter.
Can’t wait for the next instalment.
Can’t believe it, I actually like Melvin :-)
Love the explanation of a well thought out plan.
Thanks for this Chapter in a superb story. Really looking forward to more
Stay safe
SG
Great Chapter…but should we be worried about his “back-up” plan?
Geez just going to leave us hanging right there.. lol.. thank you great chapter fills in all the blanks. Still waiting on my nc-17. Details woman I need details.. lol glad the sister is seeing it now too. Later
Any more chapters?
Hey MTS, how are you? I’m reacquainting myself with this wonderful fic. You haven’t forgotten about us have you?
I L ove this story. I hope you’re ok and will decide to continue it some day?
Hi MTS, Hope all is well. I just finished this chapter of Forged in Fire, and love every moment of it. I surely hope that you will continue this story. I can’t wait to see what happens next. Your writing is amazing. I do hope you continue.