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Forged in Fire: Chapter 30
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Instead, she forced strength into her voice and replied to her soulmate: “I don’t know you. I don’t know this version of you, Bette. I’m no good for you right now. I’m so angry.”
“You have every right to be. But I promise you – – -,” Bette began.
Tina threw off Bette’s arms and stepped away, turning to face her with fury in her gaze. “No more promises! You keep promising. They are meaningless to me.”
Bette wrung her hands. “Okay. Just…tell me…what do I do, T? What can I do to keep you from walking out of my life? I need you. I cannot lose you.”
Tina had bitten the inside of her cheek to stop her from comforting Bette. Instead, she’d continued with their plan and gone in search of the fake cocaine Alice had prepped for this confrontation. And though she knew it was an act, there was something about sitting on the bed, their bed, holding those vials and the bullet in her hand that made the moment seem very real.
Bette had been crying. That hadn’t been planned. It had just happened.
And it had been gut-wrenching.
Tina had fled from their home, her duffle bag on her arm. She didn’t look back when she drove away. It was too hard. And then she’d driven away to the one place in the world she knew no one would be looking for her: Melvin Porter’s house in San Diego.
3 Days Ago – Tuesday
When she’d first started visiting her father in prison, Kaitlyn hadn’t given much thought to the fact that their visits always happened in a private room. In a room with no windows, no guards, and no cameras. She’d never visited a prisoner before.
At every visit, she’d been let in through a private door. She’d never been searched. Never had to turn over her purse. Never scrutinized.
It didn’t matter. Her father had access to whatever he wanted. There was nothing she could smuggle into him that he couldn’t get on his own.
She hugged him and sat down across the table from him, hoping that he couldn’t tell how nervous she was. A star-shaped pendant hung from a black string around her neck. It masked a recording device.
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WELL DONE!
Wow…. that explains a lot. The article was a diversion while the Hannity show was the main attack. I want to know the reaction from Steven Kennard. And now what happens to Daniel and Kaitlan? And where are Bette and Tina now? The plan was very well done. Peach Tea in the bottles. No wonder Bette could drink so much of it. And to act drunk, she just quit bathing and eating whatever she had available in the kitchen. That is really hunkering down and playing the role. The fact that Tina spent days just watching her on the cameras must have been hard as hell. And I love that Melvin help out with the plan and provided a place for Tina while they were waiting. This really reflects how much Melvin has changed and how much he cares for Tina as well as Bette and Kit. I am now officially a fan of this Melvin Porter.
This is a well done drama. It sure fooled me. Thank you for this chapter… I look forward to another when you can get it to us. Thanks.
WOW! I love it when it great plan comes together. Post as soon as you get a chance.
This does explain a lot. Love that Melvin came through for them. I still worry about Bette. That’s a lot to put her through. She needs to keep taking her meds and checking in with her therapist and Tina needs to deal with Henry’s murder once and for all. And…….. for God’s sake……. Bette needs to sever ties with Alice. Offering her pot!!! What is wrong with that woman???? I pray this has not been too much for Bette. Not all of those tears were acting. That she endured it all for Tina is amazing. What love! I also wonder if Bette on any subconscious level remembers her past or at a minimum senses something. I know she is not supposed to.
This is a thoroughly thought through plot, MTS! Very impressive. Unexpected twists, unexpected allies, great storyline with the time offset and the different perspective of the acting characters. Sublime.
I have to read it again to get all the details right.
First do exactly what Darth Kennard was expecting, then – bam! – bring on the girlfriend of the dead son-in-law and mother of his child and have her tell the story on a big news station. Tables turned! Great. But I still fear that Kennard remains a threat as long as he is alive.
Never thought that Melvin could be part of the plan but it seemd to be an excellent idea to refer to his expertise. I have to admit that he is getting in my good books again. Never would have guessed.
Will Bette tell Tina whether she visited the girlfriend? Will someone knock some sense into Alice until she finally understands Bette’s problem with drugs? What a friend would tempt an addict (who is still in acute treatment) with consuming themself under their very nose? Tina and Bette still have a lot to talk about. Too much holding back still.
Fantastic twist btw that Alice (of course) remembered Bette’s strange behaviour when she picked her up at LAX all those months ago. Could be an interesting topic for a conversation between Bette and Tina.
Thanks so much for posting, MTS. Throroughly enjoyable chapter.
Can’t wait for the next instalment.
Can’t believe it, I actually like Melvin :-)
Love the explanation of a well thought out plan.
Thanks for this Chapter in a superb story. Really looking forward to more
Stay safe
SG
Great Chapter…but should we be worried about his “back-up” plan?
Geez just going to leave us hanging right there.. lol.. thank you great chapter fills in all the blanks. Still waiting on my nc-17. Details woman I need details.. lol glad the sister is seeing it now too. Later
Any more chapters?
Hey MTS, how are you? I’m reacquainting myself with this wonderful fic. You haven’t forgotten about us have you?
I L ove this story. I hope you’re ok and will decide to continue it some day?
Hi MTS, Hope all is well. I just finished this chapter of Forged in Fire, and love every moment of it. I surely hope that you will continue this story. I can’t wait to see what happens next. Your writing is amazing. I do hope you continue.