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Forged in Fire: Chapter 30
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Steven held out his hands, using them to explain. “There is more mystery to this world than we can ever possibly understand. Do I believe in God? I don’t think about it, Kaitlyn. Religion gives your mother comfort. It’s important to her. So, I go to church and do what she asks of me.”
Kaitlyn had lived a charmed life. One that had afforded her the luxury of appreciating only the superficial aspects of her family members. She’d never had to evaluate the merits of any one of them with depth.
But things had begun to change over the past year. Her sister had grown more and more miserable; disenchanted with her life as she slowly awakened from a cocoon of complacency. Kaitlyn had borne witness to Tina’s evolution and with that shift in her reality, the layered dimensions of her parents had also begun revealing themselves to her.
Yet, she had never imagined that her father’s true nature was as callous and calculating as the stranger seated across from her. She tried to quiet her discomfort as the sound of shattered innocence seemed to ring in her thoughts.
Sifting through the fragments of her residual reality, she finally said “Dad?”
Steven looked at her, giving her his full attention.
“I got a call from that woman Henry was seeing. She claims the money has stopped coming. That she’s broke now since Henry died. What do you want me to do about that?” she asked.
Steven waved his hand. “Forget about it. That’s what you do. Don’t answer. I told her to get rid of that kid. There was no need to have a damned baby. For what? She can’t take care of him, that’s her problem. Henry was a fool to even entertain being a father to that kid.”
Kaitlyn’s distaste didn’t register on her face. Instead she nodded. “I haven’t answered her. Daniel has no idea of what’s going on.”
Steven smiled. “Keep it that way. Plausible deniability. If anything ever happens, he can honestly say that he was ignorant.”
She nodded again.
“Daniel’s nice but he’s as dumb as a box of fucking rocks,” he said.
Kaitlyn gritted her teeth. This was not the first time he’d insulted her husband’s intelligence. “You always said you liked him.”
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WELL DONE!
Wow…. that explains a lot. The article was a diversion while the Hannity show was the main attack. I want to know the reaction from Steven Kennard. And now what happens to Daniel and Kaitlan? And where are Bette and Tina now? The plan was very well done. Peach Tea in the bottles. No wonder Bette could drink so much of it. And to act drunk, she just quit bathing and eating whatever she had available in the kitchen. That is really hunkering down and playing the role. The fact that Tina spent days just watching her on the cameras must have been hard as hell. And I love that Melvin help out with the plan and provided a place for Tina while they were waiting. This really reflects how much Melvin has changed and how much he cares for Tina as well as Bette and Kit. I am now officially a fan of this Melvin Porter.
This is a well done drama. It sure fooled me. Thank you for this chapter… I look forward to another when you can get it to us. Thanks.
WOW! I love it when it great plan comes together. Post as soon as you get a chance.
This does explain a lot. Love that Melvin came through for them. I still worry about Bette. That’s a lot to put her through. She needs to keep taking her meds and checking in with her therapist and Tina needs to deal with Henry’s murder once and for all. And…….. for God’s sake……. Bette needs to sever ties with Alice. Offering her pot!!! What is wrong with that woman???? I pray this has not been too much for Bette. Not all of those tears were acting. That she endured it all for Tina is amazing. What love! I also wonder if Bette on any subconscious level remembers her past or at a minimum senses something. I know she is not supposed to.
This is a thoroughly thought through plot, MTS! Very impressive. Unexpected twists, unexpected allies, great storyline with the time offset and the different perspective of the acting characters. Sublime.
I have to read it again to get all the details right.
First do exactly what Darth Kennard was expecting, then – bam! – bring on the girlfriend of the dead son-in-law and mother of his child and have her tell the story on a big news station. Tables turned! Great. But I still fear that Kennard remains a threat as long as he is alive.
Never thought that Melvin could be part of the plan but it seemd to be an excellent idea to refer to his expertise. I have to admit that he is getting in my good books again. Never would have guessed.
Will Bette tell Tina whether she visited the girlfriend? Will someone knock some sense into Alice until she finally understands Bette’s problem with drugs? What a friend would tempt an addict (who is still in acute treatment) with consuming themself under their very nose? Tina and Bette still have a lot to talk about. Too much holding back still.
Fantastic twist btw that Alice (of course) remembered Bette’s strange behaviour when she picked her up at LAX all those months ago. Could be an interesting topic for a conversation between Bette and Tina.
Thanks so much for posting, MTS. Throroughly enjoyable chapter.
Can’t wait for the next instalment.
Can’t believe it, I actually like Melvin :-)
Love the explanation of a well thought out plan.
Thanks for this Chapter in a superb story. Really looking forward to more
Stay safe
SG
Great Chapter…but should we be worried about his “back-up” plan?
Geez just going to leave us hanging right there.. lol.. thank you great chapter fills in all the blanks. Still waiting on my nc-17. Details woman I need details.. lol glad the sister is seeing it now too. Later
Any more chapters?
Hey MTS, how are you? I’m reacquainting myself with this wonderful fic. You haven’t forgotten about us have you?
I L ove this story. I hope you’re ok and will decide to continue it some day?
Hi MTS, Hope all is well. I just finished this chapter of Forged in Fire, and love every moment of it. I surely hope that you will continue this story. I can’t wait to see what happens next. Your writing is amazing. I do hope you continue.