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Forged in Fire: Chapter 30
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Bette stood and balled her hands into tight fists as she tried to calm her rising ire. “I know what he’s done! I’ll never forget what he’s done. But don’t you get it, Tina? You strike him and he’ll strike back. When does it end? When he’s dead?”
Tina stood and folded her arms across her chest. “Maybe.”
“You wish him dead? Or do you want to kill him yourself? Are you a killer now? I’m marrying a killer?” asked Bette.
“He’s a killer! He murdered Sidney. And he killed Henry!” said Tina.
Bette sighed and stared at her. She shook her head. “And that’s the pea.”
“What?” asked Tina.
“The pea. That’s the problem. The real problem. Remember the story of The Princess and the Pea? She couldn’t get comfortable. On top of a pile of mattresses, she was still ill at ease. You and I have the world at our feet. We can go anywhere, be anything, do anything. But he’s your goddamned pea. You can’t let it go, Tina. You want him to suffer.
“Instead of dealing with how you feel about Henry. Instead of mourning him and making your peace with his death, you focus on this revenge fantasy of yours. And the thing about revenge, T? It never sates. It will never fill you. You’ll still feel guilty,” said Bette.
“Of course I’m guilty! I’m the reason they all died. If I’d shut the fuck up and done what he asked…they’d all be alive. Don’t’ you see that, Bette? If my father doesn’t pay for what he did, then what’s the point? Why did they all die because of me, yet he still gets to fucking torment us from jail? He’s in prison and he’s still fucking with our lives, Bette! It’s enough.”
Bette grabbed Tina then. Held her tightly until the blonde stopped struggling against her and the tears began to fall. “Shh,” said Bette, stroking Tina’s hair.
“It’s my fault. He died because of me,” Tina murmured.
“He died because your father did a horrible thing, Tina.”
“I made his life hell. I made him miserable, Bette. I was never happy. I fought him at every turn. And now he’s dead. I’m the only one that can make it right,” said Tina, her words nearly swallowed in Bette’s long, curly locks.
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WELL DONE!
Wow…. that explains a lot. The article was a diversion while the Hannity show was the main attack. I want to know the reaction from Steven Kennard. And now what happens to Daniel and Kaitlan? And where are Bette and Tina now? The plan was very well done. Peach Tea in the bottles. No wonder Bette could drink so much of it. And to act drunk, she just quit bathing and eating whatever she had available in the kitchen. That is really hunkering down and playing the role. The fact that Tina spent days just watching her on the cameras must have been hard as hell. And I love that Melvin help out with the plan and provided a place for Tina while they were waiting. This really reflects how much Melvin has changed and how much he cares for Tina as well as Bette and Kit. I am now officially a fan of this Melvin Porter.
This is a well done drama. It sure fooled me. Thank you for this chapter… I look forward to another when you can get it to us. Thanks.
WOW! I love it when it great plan comes together. Post as soon as you get a chance.
This does explain a lot. Love that Melvin came through for them. I still worry about Bette. That’s a lot to put her through. She needs to keep taking her meds and checking in with her therapist and Tina needs to deal with Henry’s murder once and for all. And…….. for God’s sake……. Bette needs to sever ties with Alice. Offering her pot!!! What is wrong with that woman???? I pray this has not been too much for Bette. Not all of those tears were acting. That she endured it all for Tina is amazing. What love! I also wonder if Bette on any subconscious level remembers her past or at a minimum senses something. I know she is not supposed to.
This is a thoroughly thought through plot, MTS! Very impressive. Unexpected twists, unexpected allies, great storyline with the time offset and the different perspective of the acting characters. Sublime.
I have to read it again to get all the details right.
First do exactly what Darth Kennard was expecting, then – bam! – bring on the girlfriend of the dead son-in-law and mother of his child and have her tell the story on a big news station. Tables turned! Great. But I still fear that Kennard remains a threat as long as he is alive.
Never thought that Melvin could be part of the plan but it seemd to be an excellent idea to refer to his expertise. I have to admit that he is getting in my good books again. Never would have guessed.
Will Bette tell Tina whether she visited the girlfriend? Will someone knock some sense into Alice until she finally understands Bette’s problem with drugs? What a friend would tempt an addict (who is still in acute treatment) with consuming themself under their very nose? Tina and Bette still have a lot to talk about. Too much holding back still.
Fantastic twist btw that Alice (of course) remembered Bette’s strange behaviour when she picked her up at LAX all those months ago. Could be an interesting topic for a conversation between Bette and Tina.
Thanks so much for posting, MTS. Throroughly enjoyable chapter.
Can’t wait for the next instalment.
Can’t believe it, I actually like Melvin :-)
Love the explanation of a well thought out plan.
Thanks for this Chapter in a superb story. Really looking forward to more
Stay safe
SG
Great Chapter…but should we be worried about his “back-up” plan?
Geez just going to leave us hanging right there.. lol.. thank you great chapter fills in all the blanks. Still waiting on my nc-17. Details woman I need details.. lol glad the sister is seeing it now too. Later
Any more chapters?
Hey MTS, how are you? I’m reacquainting myself with this wonderful fic. You haven’t forgotten about us have you?
I L ove this story. I hope you’re ok and will decide to continue it some day?
Hi MTS, Hope all is well. I just finished this chapter of Forged in Fire, and love every moment of it. I surely hope that you will continue this story. I can’t wait to see what happens next. Your writing is amazing. I do hope you continue.