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“I know,” Angie said. “I just wish things were different.”
“Me too, baby. But they are what they are. Come on. Where’s that beautiful smile I love to see? There. That’s my girl.” Tina enveloped Angie in a long embrace. “I love you so much.”
“I love you too, Mom.”
“Okay, you two are going to have to stop making me cry,” Lucy said, breaking the special moment with laughter. Tina pulled away and cupped her daughter’s face in her hand. This was really it. Her baby’s wedding day.
“No more tears,” Tina said. “Not for a few more minutes, anyhow.” Tina winked at Angie. There was a knock at the door.
“It’s time!” Jessie said. “Who is it?” she asked, before opening the door.
“It’s Michael.”
Jessie opened the door and a handsome older man stepped into the room. He looked at Angelica with a fond smile. “Are you ready?”
“I am, Dad.”
“You look gorgeous.” he said, giving Angie a kiss on the cheek. “You’re going to take Derek’s breath away.” He put his arm through Angelica’s and patted her hand on his forearm.
“And now, it’s time for the rest of you ladies to proceed to the foyer,” Michael said. “The guests are all seated, groomsmen are waiting for the bridesmaids, and Derek’s father is waiting to escort my own beautiful bride down the aisle to her seat.”
There was a final spasm of activity, dress straightening, mirror checks, pictures snapped. Then they all filed out of the room, save for Michael and Angelica, who hung back for a moment. Tina glanced over her shoulder and saw Michael saying something to Angelica that made her look up and absolutely beam. A soft warmth circled her heart and she went forward to Derek’s father, Eddie. They would go down the aisle together, then the bridesmaids and groomsmen, then finally Angelica and Michael. Tina peeped around the corner of the entryway and saw the church was packed with people. Derek was already at the altar with the reverend. Tina had to smile. He had the same nervous happiness in his manner that Angelica did.
Eddie took Tina’s elbow, and Tina turned her smile on him. “It’s a full house.”
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Please continue, I’m intrigued.
Thanks… nicely written and interesting storyline.
Beautifully written. I hope you will either continue with this story or write others. You obviously have a talent for it. I can understand Bette leaving Tina and ending a bad relationship that just wasn’t working for her instead of staying and ignoring the problems but sad that her relationship, love and support of Angelica was so conditional that she would abandon her when Angie didn’t meet her expectations. It was as if she placed more value on her ambitions for Angie than Angie’s own happiness. Bette has her freedom but at what cost? On another note as much as characters are portrayed differently I never believe a Bette character would turn her back on her child no matter what. I’ve read so many stories where Tina takes Angie away and whether Bette knows of her existence or not she always has a heart for her baby so it was kind of hard to read that she wouldn’t be there for Angie on her special day even if she didn’t agree with her choices. Thanks for the story.
Interesting story here. It seems you turned Bette into the female version of Melvin. I can understand her letting go of her bad relationship with Tina but I could never really see her letting go of Angelica for anything.
Wonderfully written. thank you.
I’ve been waiting for you to enter my life green apple. You nailed the controlling part of Bette’s personality. Although, I don’t know if she would have ditched the wedding but you never know. So true on the relationship part, I agree with every word. Loved this, thank you
Very interesting. I believe that Bette and Tina share an extraordinary connection, but a part of me also believes that Tina would have gone the safe sane route post-season 1. You have a talent for storytelling. I hope to read more from you.
You must help them find their way back to each other.
good written story and intrigued! I’m a tibetter, so it’s the kind of story-line I rarely read. But still, I’ve been drawn to since first page. And it end well, sad but logical with understanding. maybe u will consider writing another story? thx for sharing
Thank you,sad story.
Loved the writing, but the circumstances of the story made me sad. I do hope Tina tells Angie that Bette was there after all (or, better yet, Bette herself). Thanks for posting. :)
No words can express the pain.in my heart i feel….that part about bette stopping then getting in the car and tina finally let go omg it kills me…and i agree i can never see bette disowning angelica in any way, her relationship with tina yea but angie of course not bette loves her in ways you cant express…i hope you write more and they at least be a family in the end probably not in the tibette way but family at the very least