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Jack turns his head as he listens to Bette’s question
thinking ‘always the realist isn’t she’.
“Well Bette a few things can go wrong.
The child service worker can give a report that is not favorable to your
case.” Seeing the question on Bette’s lips before she even voices it Jack goes
into more detail. “You can be living in
an unfit environment for either physical or mental reasons. Physically means your house is not in
condition to provide a safe environment for a child. I don’t see any problem there. Mentally, you could be a confirmed drug
addict or something and have demonstrated in the past a little regard for the
life of children.” Jack illustrates.
“Well that is hardly the case.” Bette inserts.
“I know. Actually I
don’t see any issues with either of these.
The other thing that can happen is that someone else may challenge you
position. Is there anyone else that may
come in and say that they should be Anna’s other parent?” Jack asks.
At this Bette stares at Jack.
“What?” Jack asks as she sees the dread in Bette’s eyes.
Bette meets Jack questioning look with one of concern. Choosing her words Bette begins softly “Jack
you saw those pictures at MOCA that
had taken. I know that certain
techniques where used, tricks of photography, to produce them but they
definitely give the impression that
was in the delivery suite and an active participant in Anna’s delivery. She definitely had a relationship with Tina
at that time and they did spend time at each other’s residences. I know that Tina maintained her own household
but it can be argued that
did provide support in some form. With
all that said do you think that she can throw any sort of monkey wrench into
this?” Bette asks as she is voice her deepest fear.
“Yes she can but it then becomes my job to be as prepared as
possible to make that go away. Bette
this is where Tina’s testimony will be of great value. Tina tells a compelling story of how the two
of you planned for a child. Yes you both
took some detours but she emphatically states that she got pregnant with you in
mind as the other parent.”
Still seeing the hesitancy in Bette, Jack continues “Look
Bette, please leave it to me I will take care of
It will all work out.” Jack states with a confidence he hopes will put
Bette as ease. Jack has a great respect
for Bette, having seen her generosity and integrity in action. He wanted nothing more than to make this
whole process simple, easy and successful.
Buying into Jack’s self-assurance, Bette smiles and nods her
head.
“Great than lets get this started, I brought all the
documentation I need you to sign and I will file it with the court and get this
ball rolling.” Jack says as he lays the paper work out in front of Bette.
“OK” Bette says with hope.
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Again, WOWWWWWWWWWWW.
Another great chapter, again missing work because I love yhis history. Again, thank you.
Pls, post soon :)
Yes, the plot thickens and B&T need to prepare for battle. While Helena is laying out her devious plan by planting seeds about Bette’s character, B&T need to continue to explore the imformation about Helena’s fraud with other non-profit organizations. They also need to get swarn statements from the attendants in the delevery room (Remember, not only does Tina not know that Bette was there, neither does Helena.) Great story, pleast post again soon.
Helena just won’t quit, will she??? Why aren’t Bette and Tina talking about their apprenhensions??? Great story as always!!!
Yup Bette she is gonna kick Helena Ass LOL! Hey Jwet that was so great Pls. continue post soon Thanks!
As promised, football and a story from Jwet! What more can a girl ask for? No, I didn’t cook last night, but may tonight. Probably some fish and veggies.
Of course, coffee on me. But I don’t live on the Big Island of Hawaii. I’m on the island of Oahu. Do you know where you might be staying?
Please post soon…..I’m getting worried about Tina driving and if Helena might be in San Deigo making trouble. And who at Peabody Foundation is sprading bad rumors about our beloved Bette. Will Alice and the gang help our heros? All these questions can only be answered by you.
Thanks for writing and coffee….anytime; it’ll be my pleasure.
Bette’s secret weapon in all this is that she was present in the delievery room too.
I have a bad feeling that Tina is going to have an accident on her way home. She will either die or be in a coma then Helen-a will try and claim Anna. I hope I’m wrong.
Two good chapters here as you set things in motion. You have created an atmosphere of expectation – something is going to happen and I don’t know if it’s good or bad. I’ll cross my fingers and trust in your capable storytelling.
Thanks.
P.S. You still owe me and Techgal an explanation of what “HMS” stands for.
I’ve just spent the last few days reading every chapter of this story and I just finished. I have loved every chapter and can’t wait for the next one.
Seeing how Bette’s grown and truly marvelling at her altruistic actions setting up the foundation. I like the way you came up with the name, I was wondering where it came from myself. I love that Alice figured it out in her dazed but apparently not so confused state.
All the tension of whether her and Tina would work out had me on the edge of my seat and sighing in frustration when the two of them were asking themselves the same questions and going through the same fears. At times I wanted to yell, ‘NOOOOOOOOOOO!’ and I’m sure a few times I actually did, lol.
I’m eagerly awaiting what comes next although I’m more than a little scared about what the Hellenator has up her sleeve. The way Bette and Tina are though in this story I know they’re gonna survive it, but I know that’s gonna be one hell of a storm.
Bring on the next chapter…
Just can’t seem to get enough of this story. The twists and turns keep me guessing and the love btw B&T keep me enthalled.
JWet,
Hey Hun, still thinking about chocolate?
So now back to this tremendous tale.
As with life it is the simple things that make it worthwhile. The early morning kiss or unexpected phone calls that demonstrate real love. And that shows throughout this bounteous chapter.
You have crafted this latest installment with such care that I feel honored as a recipient. I will wander around the rest of the day with a smile. Please note that this is down to you and this marvellous masterpiece.
Question include:
As for Helena, what maniacal mind games does she have planned for your daring duo? Can our dashing duo defend their family and destroy the evil villainess? Does Helena have a “Cruella De Vil” complex? Does she want a coat made of puppies?
Does Jack have a crucial clue to the downfall of such wickedness?
Please let me know the answers soon.
Thank you as always.
Your Loyal Fan.
Helena the Bitch is going to play sooo dirty I can feel in my bones, witch
my glass of wine. soothing and intoxicating.
“i didnt like the idea of being away right now.”
“…she has an awful temper, uses profane language and is in general a real bully.” oh, j, i really want to drop kick hellno, you know?
“the plot thickens.” ya think?
“the other thing that can happen is that someone else may challenge your position.” Hellno is really in lala land. gawd!!!
please let me be first in line *jumping up and down* begging to be picked first to kick her ass into next month. ahahahah.
your doing it to us again j. sucking us into the web. *hearts racing, short breaths of worry*. post soon and thanks for your time and energy.
i have no words to describe Helenas personality..she is evil and envious but against B&T she only can frustrate and delay their plains a little but she will never win..ok another fantastic chappy thanks J
okay so no accidents going to San Diego!!! (whoosh…I’m wipping my forehead), now u got me on the edge of my seat wonderin if it’s gonna happen on her way back????? it’s been too much of a smooth ride, so I can smell the drama coming!!! HURRY UP AND POST WOULD YA……LOL!!!!!!!!!!
damn that helena… is there any ways to prove that those pics are fake and that she’s a pussy in the delivery room?
anyways, can’t wait for the next post!
great chapter Jwet. hope the adoption goes smoothly. cant wait for tina to get home
helena need to be taught a lesson even before all the drama is due to unfold tell B&T to give me a call and ill get the birds round to see to helana
Now see, if you had taken the hamster ball route with Helena and dropped something very big from above during Tina’s MYV Dinner, none of this would be happening, but alas it has and SHSL is once again going to be the Phoenix rising out of the Ashes of Helena F’king Peabody, I’m sorry but that woman so grates on me, and here I am trying to keep myself calm!
Another great chapter mate!
Glad that Tina called Bette. She needed a little grounding after all of that coffee. Actually, I think they both needed that sense of connection.
I want James to organize my drawers. Please?
The details about adoption were interesting. Makes the story more complete knowing what goes on behind the process.
Oh, it looks like Helena could have a hand in trying to prevent Bette from adopting Anna. But then again, she may end up withdrawing a bloody stump if she messes with Bette, Tina and Jack.
You’ve got me anxiously waiting for more!
I agree with albeez you know how to weave a web that looks like it could hurt our girls. Oh you evil author types are all alike – brilliant and clever and when do we get more…
Helena just needs to go away for good. great chapter.
Great chapters – now I see how you will reveal that Bette was there during the birth of Anna. I was holding my breathe hoping Tina would be safe.
Wanted Helena gone!