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Later when the party will be all said
and done, Bette and Tina will have the opportunity to think back and count
heads. At that time they will realize
that over forty people made there way through their house each bring Anna a
give and sampling Kit’s cuisine. But for
now it just seemed chaotic, happy and full of laughter as everyone was having a
good time.
Soon after everyone looked to be done
eating, Tina pulled out a blanket and spread it across the ground for Anna to
sit on while Bette grab presents and brought them to Anna. With the help of both Tina and Bette, Anna
began to tentatively look at all the colorful wrappers not knowing what to do
with them.
Tina pulls the first package closer and
shows Anna how to pull the paper off.
Starting in a corner and neatly pulling the tape off and folding back
the paper to reveal the box underneath.
Pulling the box out from the paper, the first present proved to be a
glow worm baby which sings songs and lights up from within to glow when you
squeeze it. Both Bette and Tina laugh as
they both got the same thought ‘That’s one toy which the batteries will be
pulled from.’
Bette brings the next package forward
and her and Anna both tear the paper away with much more destructive force than
Tina had shown Anna. This made Anna
laugh as she was getting the hang of this unwrapping package thing. After the next four or five packages soon
Anna had it down pat. Ripping her way
through the paper, Anna was having more fun unwrapping the presents than seeing
what was inside.
Anna was mowing her way through the
presents when someone spoke up to tell them someone was at the front door. Bette looks at Tina “I’ll get it Baby.” Bette moves through the house to the front
door. There stands a delivery guy with a
present in one hand and a clip board in the other.
“Delivery for Tina Kennard”
“I’ll sign for it.” Bette says as she
reaches for the clipboard, signs her name and hands it back to him as she
handed over the brightly colored present.
The present was the size of a shirt box.
The moment Bette touched the box she knew it was from
Besides who else would be sending a present, everyone they know and
consider family was here right now.
Gingerly holding the present in her hand, Bette was indecisive about
what to do. As she was standing there
weighing what options she may have, hiding it, leaving it in the kitchen or
taking it outside,
walks in to the living room “Porter what’s up the party’s outside.”
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I am telling you CALIR is the spy for Helena(probably and old girfriend) LOL Love your story as always. But Helen has toooo much inside info not to have a spy within Tina’s office..Post soon please…
Well SHSL, you outdid youself once again – cool, calm and collected. Jwet, I’m sure Bette could come up with an Artist for Alice to come up with a prototype skull shaped hamsterball for her series of Articles – you do realise this willhave to have the Jobadge TM symbol on it!!!Now this pedestal – ladders…. I can do heights or I can do binoculars, but maybe a combination of both would bring me that much closer to certain viewable areas!
Bitch bitch bitch bitch aaggh
This was a sweet chapter. Helena’s creepy.
There is nothing better than participating in a childs 1st birthday. From the ripping of the wrapping paper to the cake eating you captured it perfectly. Will Helena ever stop? Damn her for sending that gift!
Sometimes the best moments are those that are candid, like Bette listening to Tina’s talk to Anna as she changed her.Although no taskes were specifically assigned to the girls, they naturally fell into doing what each of them does best. It was easy to envision them doing that.Bette and Tina pulling the batteries from the toy. But that’s the fun of giving a present like that…you don’t have to be around when it annoys the parents.You so effectively captured Anna’s childlike ebullience from opening the presents to diving into the cake. Children live so much in the present and that came through nicely.Bette bring out Helena’s present was the right thing to do. She kept true to her new self and there were no secrets that way. She will talk to Tina, but it wasn’t right to bring it up at Anna’s party. She effectively took away some of Helena’s power by not allowing her virtual presence pervade the party and change the mood from celebratory to anxious.Very delightful slice of family, friends and fun.
YEP i think its time …for Bette to come clean about her pressies and this one!!! and im still dieing for her to tell Tina that she was there at the birth …ive/we ve waited long enough…lol i know you said ages ago that youd leave that till last (i think you did!!!) but i really think its time ..now im exhausted from writting this comment or was it the great birthday party i was at???lol
can’t wait until the next post errie helea gives me the creeps
Lets send her some where cold very cold that has big icicle and one fall from a tall bldg and does a lot of bodily harm to her, like six feet deep. That was bad. Bette knows who send the present, She needs to tell Tina about the deliver room. and tell Tina she didnt send the presents. thanks t
I think you are wonderful..thank you again for the story
“This moment was priceless to Bette. She recorded the conversation on the hard drive of her mind as she wanted to remember each and every word.”Giving up her inheritance $25 million.Setting up the MYV Foundation and walking away from it $100 million.Coming home to her family and being able to enjoy the everyday interactions of your loved ones, PRICELESS!!That was an excellent birthday party for Anna. How lucky is Anna to have such a family!! This chapter really makes me feel warm and fuzzy all over…and then came the delivery. There’s Helena again trying to get into Anna and Tina’s lives!!Well, I really can’t wait to see where you’re leading us next. Thanks for another wonderful chapter, Jwet.
fergz – dont say those things – she’ll get a big head.love the happy stuff. why cant hellno just fall into a hole and never be heard of again. oh thats right, we dont get to see her squirm. thanks girl.
Helena is unfuckingbelieveble..Bette is really another woman..cuz the old Bette would scream her lungs out…and about the present Tina is thinking that all the presents with that note come from Bette?..Bette have to tell her it wanst from her and is time for to tell Tina about Annas birth..that was her in there…when that woman is going to back of????…amazing as always J thanks :o)
How did Helena know what to write? Coincidence? Erie!Bette has to say that it’s not from her…even if we’re not sure who it’s from.
JWet,Happy to be a spark of inspiration and continue this marvelous and magnificent melodrama. Have done my happy dance after reading your response. Will be waiting & watching for the appearance of the Mouth-eteers.No, Disney copyright issues involved. You have all the time in the world to create a new society anagram. Can’t wait to flex my deductive powers to detect your message.Yep, I do need a real life but given all the talent, generous imagery and tremendous twists and turn that you and other authors create at least I can still dream and enjoy.As for the party, what a brilliant and beautiful moment for all the gals to share even if HellCat’s evilness surfaced via her gifts.These scenes were powerfully and passionately played out. Loved the last comment and am sure that Alice may have had a hand in it.Thank you so very much.Your Loyal Fan.
Brilliant as always, Bette needs to get a little backbone, especially as she knows the present is from Helena. Love your story looking forward to even more chapters, please post soon.
I can’t wait for the plan to get Helen-a. I think it would be a nice time for Bette to tell Tina she was at the delivery.It’s cute how Anna’s first birthday is on the same day as Lola’s (LH’s daughter)[I know it’s not Nov 4th in the states yet but it is here so it still counts to me :-)]. I love the description of her opening the presents and eating the cake, so cute.
That bitch Helena fucking Peabody is driving me crazy and I really want to kick her ass so bad, and I agree with Obzidian and can’t wait to see how Helena going down, post soon please, thanks!
aaaaaahhhhhhh, would you say I’m a bad person for saying that you’re mean?! To give us such a beautiful day, full of fun, love and family and you toss “the evil one” in there? It hurts my heart. But it does make me want to beg for more; more, more, more, how do you like it, more, more, more. Great story, you continue to keep it fresh. Thanks!
forgot to say: anna is soooooo cute, i can see her playing with wrapping paper and blowing the candle, this is one adorable family
oh no, helena is such a dragon and vimpare, she stole bette’s cute saying on a card, so now tina will think all the cute presents for anna were from helena…B&T definately need to talk and then engage in some passionate love making to seal the deal…nothing is gonna break them up
Nice chapter, I agree with pandora Bette should talk to Tina and reveal the rest of the story. Sge needs to tell Tina that all of the other presents where from her, but this one was not and that she was present at Anna’a birth. Good job Jwet, please continue.
Bette will talk to Tina after things quiet down. She was right not to make a scene or say much about the package at the party. But Helena is a sly dog.Nice chapter, Jwet. Thanks for the pleasure of reading it.