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From Afar
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“I hear you Gracie but still
unpredictable and dangerous. Even
knowing her previous patterns we can’t guarantee that we will be able to
prevent the Pediatric Aids Foundation from being damaged.” Jackie warns.
“Hey all I hear from you are the
reasons why I’m the perfect person for this job. So I was thinking how to start this whole
thing.” Grace says beginning to verbalize her thoughts. “We have a fund raiser coming up in the two
weeks. It’s a dinner. I was thinking of sending Helena Peabody a
personal invitation through the Peabody Foundation. What I’m not sure of is how do we get her to
bite?” Grace finishes with her doubt.
Jackie considers this problem for a
moment then comes up with the answer “That’s easy, somehow we have to let
will be at the dinner.”
Grace looks confused at Jackie “Will
Tina be there?”
Jackie puts her head in her hands and
exhales loudly. After a moment Jackie
looks up “I don’t know.”
***
With all the busy activities this
weekend had dumped into it that by the time Sunday evening arrived Bette looked
at Tina “Babe, I’m going to go relax by the pool while you put Anna down unless
you want some help.”
“No it’s nice out, go on, I’ll join you
after this one is taken care of.” Tina responds.
Bette makes her way to the side of the
pool, sits down and swing she legs into the water idly swirling the water in
circles. As she watched the ripples in
the water, Bette relaxed and smiled as she thought of the wonderful family that
surrounded her, Tina and Anna. As the
activities of the weekend ran through Bette’s mind, she felt a warm feeling of
love that enveloped her heart.
Shane looks over and sees Bette. She can tell by Bette is relaxed pose that
she is retrospective and tranquil.
Standing at the edge of the yard, Shane is indecisive about whether to
disturb Bette’s peace. As if sensing
Shane’s presence, Bette turns and looks directly at Shane. Knowing Shane as well as she does Bette
recognizes her awkward stance. Bette
knows that Shane has something to say, after watching for a moment “Shane come
on over here.” Bette carols.
Relieved to have the decision taken out
of her hands, Shane makes her way over to Bette. “Hey” Shane says as she stands beside Bette
looking down at her and the water.
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this story is getting more intense, it it’s possible, shane and bette are wise, helena doesn’t stand a chance
alright- now i’m all caught up. nice work and really like where you are taking this. thanks!
Ok, all caught up. Thanks for the gift of 3 chapters. I’m really taken with Shane and Grace – we should all have friends like them.Love the way this is unfolding. Great job with the writing.
Shane being protective of her family is so true to her character and I love how you portray her relationship with Bette. I also love the way you are setting this up. I can’t wait for all the pieces to come together!
Can’t wait for the Helamster to make itself known. I’ll let you know when the “extra strength” night vision’s arrive. I’m pretty content with my imagination, as you know it can be quite vivid! ;-) Great chapter mate – love all the nonverbal communication between SHSL and Shane!Whoever invented pedestals didn’t think about us at the bottom trying to get a view of whats up there! I just love the person who invented binoculars!
yup,it’s gonna be a great week! so many ready chapters can’t wait too long! *wink* thanks for the double post today:)it’s great story.
Another great chapter. I appreciate your patience, skill and grace in fully developing characters and relationships. Thank you for not sacrificing the integrity of characters for a quick dramatic thrill and allowing matters to meticulously unfold. I love your master plan for dealing with Helena and patiently await her entrapment.
Nice relaxing set up chapter. A sort of calm before the storm. J, you’ve created some great characters in Grace, Jackie, Irene, and of course, Anna. Is the storm still brewing or is it already on the horizon?
thank you for the back to back post! see, you can make it up to us just fine (well, at least to me… i’m easy.. LOL)anyway, can’t wait fo the next installment!
I can’t wait to sing like the munchins “ding dong the witch is dead.. the wicked witch is dead” And what’s better than first thing in the day passion ;)
Ohh damn this is gonna be big drama and they’ll going to bring Helena down big time. ok post soon please, thanks!
Great chapter, please post a new one soon, looking forward to the whole setup of Helena. Please give us more and soon.
Shane is the coolest! Your brilliant… so, by my count 127 should be here… thursday… thats only three days!! I can keep a secret for three days… does pouting help at all?
oh yeah that atitude was very wise of Shane..she is really Yoda..lol..she know against who she have to fight and what weapon to use..and Grace maybe will be another useful help..another great chappy Jwet..cant wait for more thanks :o)
Loving it.
Oooooh, the puzzle is starting to show itself. All I see is “family of many” vs “monster of one….”. Thanks Jwet.
Great chapter! thanks for the update, I can’t wait to see this whole thing unravel. looks like grace, Jackie and Shane are thinging al ot alike and should be talking- betteishot
Great job..As always.THANKS
This is getting so good. I can’t wait to see who gets Helena first. My bets on Shane!
Go Shane! :-)
Soooo nicely done and COOL, thanks.