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“Wait Vince. Man you
woke me up. Start again what do you
want!’ Shane asks trying to shake the cobwebs out of her head.
Vince starts again but this time he deliberately talks slow
“Shane I’m in the building you need to see this!”
“Ok Vince I got it now what’s in there?” Shane now is
impatient with his mocking.
“I can’t describe it.
I need you to tell me. When can
you come?” Vince asks now talking quickly again.
“Hold your horses I’m on my way. Where am I going?” Shane asks grabbing a pen
and writing on her hand.
Shane makes her way out of the house not even stopping to
splash water on her face. She goes
straight into the Planet needing a jolt to get her going.
Kit sees Shane walk in looking rough “Hey there Shane didn’t
I see you earlier today. What is going
on girl you don’t look so good?”
Shane stares at Kit trying to decipher what she is
saying. “Ahh I’ll have a double shot.”
Shane mumbles.
“OOOO-KKK” Kit says making a triple shot instead. Shane just needs it.
“Here girl it’s on me.” Kit says handing the cup to Shane.
“Thanks” Shane mumbles turning around and heading toward the
door.
Chapter 136 – The Ring
Bette walks into the restaurant to find that
seated. Waving at Bette to catch her
attention, Bette smiles her recognition and heads over to his table.
gets up as Bette approaches and leans over to kiss her cheek.
“Bette you look as lovely as ever. Thanks for the lunch invite.”
Bette.
“It’s so good of you to agree to see me on such short
notice. I fear I am stealing you away
from the fairway.” Bette kids
“Well that you are and it’s probably a good thing. The crowd I play with likes betting on each
hole and let’s just say my wallet well be healthier for lunch today.”
twinkle in his eye.
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they deserve a break!!!!!!!!!!!! watch your back sam playing with the devil people get burned!!!!!!!!!!!!
Phew…..ok, so Bette will NOT have any problems with adoption of Anna. Now, the ring…I don’t recall any mentioned of rings in your earlier post; huh, maybe I have to do research and check it out. But it’s so nice that she did wear her ring – which I’m assuming it’s Bette’s ring. So, we have her wearing Bette’s ring and yelling Bette’s name during delivery of Anna. About what Vince found, I want to guess, but seeing that I did not get anything close to what Bette wisphered to the evil one that I am shy about sharing my guess. You know I look for your post daily, hourly, sometimes hitting the refresh buttons every 3 minutes in hopes that you post. Thanks.
At least we are in agreement – we are both slightly insane. And you are such a very bad girl to tease trying to taunt me with a SHSL & SST union! Don’t you think I have enough of these thoughts raging through my head already and now I have more!
See, those thoughts make me do strange things – I forgot to tell you waht a another great chapter that was!
Great chapter I can just feel the downfall of the bitch starting, BRING IT ON
This was a really happy chapter for us B&T fans. I don’t think now there will be a problem with Bette legally becoming Anna’s other mom. Jwet, as I said before this is a great story and you are a very talented writer. Can’t wait to read your next chapter.
The ring was a great detail. Helena couldn’t anticipate everything and is so arrogant she never expects to be successfully challenged. Thanks for your consistent attention to detail and wonderful writing. Can’t wait to find out what extreme creepiness Vince discovered.
bette can adopt anna, hurray…and the photos are fake, hurray, and helena is going down, hurray…this chapter deserved at least triple hurray ;)
Great update as always. :D things seem to be coming together pretty well for the girls so far. Yay!
dude, you kept us waiting long enough, whats in the building?!!! Love a slow spit roast, can almost smell it from here. bloody brillant!!
Each chapter you write is better than the one beforeIt like telling someone you love them more today than you did yesterday. So I loved this one. The ring is sometime new. Glad that Bette pasted all the test on Anne, thanks
Good chapter. Love this story and love how you get all the good thing to get Helena going down. Ok post soon please, thanks!
I’m just hoping that with this photo hunt, it will be discovered that Bette was in the delivery as well.
Helena is hooked!! Now, reel her in. Jack seems to have some progress on the case, Bette’s recommendation of James to be the director is going well with Franklin and Anna’s adoption seems to be going well too….however, I’m kinda like Tina: “It just seems so quiet that I keep expecting something to happen.” Hmmm, what do you have up your sleeve, Jwet. Thanks for posting another great chapter.
hey there! thanks for the new chappy. What did vince find!!! you are killing me!!!! keep writing. I’ll be reading.
OH NICE ONE i like this ring thing…and is it just me being weird or is that adoption clerk to be trusted … oh god this is getting into my head ..damn you woman damn you…lol ok love it!
Lovelyangel hit the nail on the head…you are a great writer.
Wonderful update as always. I’m glad to hear you have so many chapters already written. I’m looking forward to reading them. I went back and read your other story yesterday. I never commented back when I read it the first time, but I so loved that story too. You are a great writer. Thanks for sharing your talent.
I love this story. Thank you. One question : did you bette tell tina that she was there during the delivery?
that was amazing..im so happy about Annas adoption progress..everything seems to going fine..should i have to be scared?.lol..thanks Jwet cant wait for more :o)
J—-I love it and you are wonderful. What more can I actually say. albeez…don’t you agree foofy?
Yes, yes and yes really good Jwet. I just read fanficchicks story so you can imagine I have to go from liking Helena to really disliking her guts in this story, but hey that’s fanfic life for ya. No one and I mean no one does twists, turns and intrigue like you do. I would never dare hold my breath throughout your stories for fear of never breathing again.
after watching a new promo of s3 that was a cheerful chapter I needed, thank you J. I’m happy to hear that you think we all need a little loving from B&T. you’re right!
OUTSTANDING as always. Yup yup i got a chance to catch up and what a great chapter to come back to. Thanks for the devotion and hard work you put into this story that I just knew would have ended months ago. I love it so much I’d hate to ever seen it come to an end.
missing the ring, always the small details that catch up with the person.
foofy, i so heartly agree. what would we do without the ‘j’. watch your back honey. heeheej – do you go to bed at night and say to yourself, daymn, im good. ahahahaha told fergz to watch herself. not fair, i need to be there. you have a safe trip. im trying to take care of myself. still hate that snake. she just brings out the worst in me. thanks sweetie.