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From Afar
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It took Bette a moment to find her voice. When she began to speak it was as if the words were tumbling out of her in a halting, stumbling kind of way. "I couldn’t stay away. I was drawn to the hospital. When I left the CAC I didn’t plan on going there. I just ended up there. Once I was there I saw the gang. I couldn’t go over to them. I didn’t believe I belonged anymore. I wasn’t part of the gang anymore. I was standing off in the back hall lost Dr. Wilson found me. Dr. Wilson didn’t want me to be there" Bette pauses the memory of that moment returns to her in full force. It was a re-enactment that she was watching in her head. With tears in her eyes she goes on "I I begged" Bette hesitantly admits.
Tina can see how heart felt Bette is over this moment. She can feel the lost little girl that Bette must have looked like to Dr. Wilson. She is about to step forward when Bette continues, "I had no right to be there but I knew that I had to be. Dr. Wilson must have sensed my desperation. She went against every bit of good judgment she had and let me in." Bette stops here with her voice falling off as she gets the last of it out. Bette’s eyes are still looking down as if she’s afraid to look up and see the anger that had to be in Tina’s eyes for her keeping this a secret.
Tina can see how vulnerable Bette is at this moment but she still needs to know. "Babe why didn’t you tell me?" Tina gently asks Bette as if she was afraid she might break.
"I promised " Bette whispers so softly Tina almost missed it. "She went so far out on a limb for I promised Dr. Wilson after what she did for me I had to keep this promise to her." Bette catches her breath as the emotions are almost overcoming her. "She asked me if I was capable of staying in the background. This thought ‘staying in the background’ changed my life." At this confession Bette became overcome with her emotions. Her shoulders sagged from the weight of her confession. Tears running down her cheeks when she finally gains the nerve to look into Tina’s face. What she sees makes her cry harder.
Tina eyes where full of love and compassion. With the burden that Bette has been carrying lifted from her shoulders ‘Oh my God I’ve want so many times to tell you." Bette says as she lunges for Tina grabbing her and holding her tight.
Tina wraps her arms around Bette never to let her go. "Babe having Anna was one of the most rewarding experiences of my life the only thing that makes it better is that I shared it with you." This had been her biggest regret. The one missing link that Tina felt she could never go back and fix. "I knew you were there. I just felt it. I knew it but I didn’t see you." Realizing that Bette had actually been there lifted her own weight. Tina herself was just as emotional, tears that barely let her get out "Don’t you know how much of my universe revolves around you? I screamed your name I wanted you there so bad. Having you with me makes it all the more rewarding." Tina whispers in Bette’s ear not wanting to pull away even a fraction from Bette to talk. "Now we’re complete."
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OK ive waited so long for that and YES YES YES it was so worth it,right now i dont really care about Helena tho i know its a huge part of the story!!! i think youve done an amazeing job with not just this chapter but this whole complicated intense story…Excuse me now but im going to go back and read it again…sigh!
Ah, Helena gets a royal kick in the behind and Bette & Tina are complete, I like that just fine! Great Peggy P.
Finally, the last secret is out, great how you got Helena out of the courtroom, is Helena going to prison, dying to find out what happens.
Yes!!!!!! I knew it!! I knew it!!I knew it!! I remembered that Bette was in there during the delivery! Hahahaha! Now, deal with THAT Helena! Ha!Great update! I am doing my happy dance! OUTSTANDING!
I really wanted to comment earlier about how Tina will be when she finds out that Bette was there and Bette didn’t tell her. I was hoping that you will write a compassionate and understanding Tina (of Bette’s promise to Dr. Wilson) but I didn’t want to influence you; but my gut feeling told me that you will write this chapter as you did. It is definetly not too long. I think Helena finally realizes the consequences of her actions. I wonder if Peggy will have the resources/power to get Helena out of this one. Thanks for double posting today. btw: my team is losing! Boo.Thanks. Many many Thanks!
Ah… SHSL & SST are complete, magic.
Now the circle is complete. No gapping holes. The strength of their love is a fortress against all those that would attempt to come between them. A ring of fire that purifies that perfect love. Jwet, this has been an incredible journey you have allowed us to take. I shudder to think that you almost gave up on it. Thank you for hanging in there as we all are so much richer because you did.
for me this chapter is an equivalent for “omg…omfg..” scene. it was so worth waiting! I love how you wrote it, thanks so much J!
Oh my god you are a master at this, if I could have one wish in this world it would be that you could write a book no a series of books on Bette and Tina as I would read them and read them and read them. Magical, trulely magical
Awesome. I’ve been so anxious for Tina to find out and you did a superb job. Was absolutely perfect. Looking forward to the next chapter.
aaahhhhhh!
Ahhhhh…big sigh…big goofy grin!! But, could someone please tell me what SHSL and SST stand for?? Thanks J…this was perfect!!!
Awww… That was just WONDERFUL!! Simply WONDERFUL!! Me = Very happy!! Thanks, great chapter!
Brilliant!!!
Brilliant!!!
I don’t know you do it: write 150+ chapters that are so well integrated and complex but it all makes sense and is so logical. Wonderful!
YEAH!!! YEAH!! YEAH!!That was amazing, Jwet You are one of the few writers that melt this frozen heart..:PKeep posting…!!
this was perfect…thank you
not far off from taking your bow..and letting us throw you flowers. 159 chapters and with your writing…I could read 150 more. They are complete. thank you
How can you be angry with someone that loves you that much? Helena will look good in Jail house orange. It a shame that Peggy has to go throught this. She has always done so much for so many. Helena didnt know that Bette knew that the nurse was holding Tina hand. She is a wicked human bit of s**t. thanks
I loved Tina’s reaction, her understanding. There is so much love between them. What a way to reveal the secret. I thought Jack was going somewhere with his question to Bette about the authenticity of the photos and then boom, there it was. Good job, J. Now, on to the finale too see what Helena gets!! Thanks again.
Oh my gosh you know how into this part of the story I have been – amazing, simply amazing :)!
Excellent!!! This story is phenomonal abd beautifully written. I have enjoyed it so much and i will be sad to see it go. However I believe you have taken the story as far as it could go. I hope this is not the last I read from you..maybe a B&T beginning with a twist?!? until then I will be rereading your other story(the title just left my mind. Can’t wait for the next chapter!!!
This is the one I’ve been waiting for and it was perfect. Bette deserved a private moment to tell Tina she witnessed their child’s birth and you found a wonderful way to do it. Thank you for kicking Helena to the curb in a way that she couldn’t be rescued by money. Now I’m ready to say goodbye to this masterfully written story. You’ve earned a rest and I’ll be here patiently awaiting whatever you write.
*sniff sniff* another great chapter!!! I’m so glad the Bette told Tina. *sigh* keep writing. I’ll be reading.
I figured the secret would eventually be told through the pictures – never guessed on the witness stand…I LOVED IT!! I’ve been waiting SO long for Tina to find out…such beautiful torture, J.
Excellent excellent excellent. This is unfuckingbelievable, when Bette say the nurse that was holding Tina’s hand, I gasp and shock that she did say it out loud in court and happy that Tina know, they are talk and everything good now. This is awesome and about Helena is funny and love to see every step she going down, Peggy is good. Now let see what’s next, thanks!
Wonderful!
OK now I can breathe. My lil’ happy dance has been cocked and ready to go for a very long time. For a story that at one point I thought would only go in one direction. You have taken us on so many adventures since I first started reading From Afar. Thank you for your wonderful friendship and all the fun I had when you allowed me to share and be a part of this. GR8 Minds think alike. :) I cannot beleive the wonderful friendship I now have with you thanks to this web site and your story catching my heart from the very first. I hate to say it but, how in the world do you ever out do this story. It had everything and I will always love it. Thank you so much my friend for sharing. TK
OMG! That was a brilliant way to reveal that Bette was there. Only Tina, Bette and the HellBitch knew. Heh. I love this story and am sorry it is coming to an end but look forward to your next story *wink, wink* Great job!
I am going to cry that was so sweet!