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From Afar
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With Bette having gotten up and Anna getting a little tired, Anna suddenly let out a wail that would make everyone hearing it think that she had been pinch by imaginary fingers or something. Bette immediately looked to Tina who was searching for Annas binky. Finding the pacifier she placed it in Annas mouth and picked her up cooing gentle tones to her which all had a calming effect. Bette just marveled at the sight in front of her again and wondered what she had done to be blessed with this vision.
You know Bette I think we have worn this little one out for today. Tina says as she looks up to Bette. Knowing that they had made a start today, Tina still wishes it would be easier. She too feels the clumsiness when it comes to what to say to Bette. Their conversation is a little forced but they both seem to want to be here in the moment. Realizing that this magical time was coming to an end, Tina wanted to extend it somehow but looking down at Anna she didnt know how. There was so much more that needed to be talked out and they really havent even started. A little expatriated Tina let out a sigh.
Tina I want to thank you for so many things, the least of which was this picnic. I know that we have Bette begins to talk but pauses as she really doesnt want this tenderness between them to be interrupted.
I know .. I know Bette. Lets just say that we both needed this and hope that we can do this again. Tina says picking up on Bettes unspoken request.
Bette now just smiles with a pensive look almost in tears. Tina can I call you in the next few days to talk about doing something with Anna?
Bette I would like nothing better I mean it when I say that I want you in Annas life. We were together when we created this vision which has become Anna. It was wrong of me to wait so long to get you involved in her life but I hope you can forgive me. Tina says as see looks up to Bette for both forgiveness and understanding.
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Wow that was a great chapter…I l;ike the free unconditional love part..Please post soon
WOW JWET I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH LOVE PLEASE POST SOON
It was a start, Bette is getting so smart in her old age. Maybe Shane wisdom is rubbing off on her.
such a lovely story
“unconditional love”…..WOW, Jwet!! Totally awesome….my, my how you can write…I can really feel the emotions of B&T (and Shane too)!. This is BEAUTIFUL (sniff, sniff)GREAT…WONDERFUL…MARVELOUS…AWESOME (oops, already said that)…OK, I’m running out of adjectives….and I need more Kleenex. Anxiously awaiting more chapters :-O
My that was fantastic. More soon please!
Very nice (no kiss) but I kind of felt (no kiss) that it was missing something (kissing James doesn’t count).
And Bette…don’t tell her you gave up any rights. Not that you had any rights to begin with (cold hard truth…no kiss), but you certainly don’t want to concede anything of the kind.
And, in a final (pervy) comment, Tina should do a little breastfeeding while Bette’s around. I’m just sayin’…
Yet again you have deliver the goods. Fabulous and consistently amazing.
Like that Bette is gaining wisdom *finally* and enjoying the gift of her daughter.
Glad that Tina realises the important part pace deserves in her and Anna’s lives.
Can’t wait to see where youtake me next.
Fantastic fan fiction. Keep on, keeping on.
A major league fan of your work.
Thank You! This was really wonderful. I could see all so clearly.. them in the park with Anna. I look forward to them becoming a more of a family.
Enjoyed this chapter very much. I am looking forward to seeing what Bette has planned. I also noticed that we have choosen the same name for their “Baby?” I’ll be looking forward to the next update.
Great chapter…I like the debate about unconditional love…it can really tie you in a knot. Again, I wish the show would follow some of the storylines presented on this site…they seem so much more logical.
I am so happy for Bette. Yeah. I love this.
still fantastic! you get better and better! i’ll read anything you write! love this! post more soon!
Beautiful, just beautiful!
I love the flow of your writing…it’s a beautiful story and I always look forward to your next post. Thanks!
Jwet, you always manage to pull at my heart strings. Bette with Tina and Anna is just so darn right!
Jwet… Wow! Just Wow is all i can say
This is good and now let see the love began again in our couple. Post soon, thank you!
Being in the west-west time zone; I don’t have any adjectives left for me to use for my comments! Unfair?!
I liked your vision of unconditional love. I’ve always thought of unconditional love was only from a parent to child; but I stand corrected!
Can’t wait for the next chapter!
Thanks.
A very good story from one of the best writers. Thank you.
WOW!!! This is nice Awesome story I like your story totally loving it so Pls. post soon.
::tears::sniffsniff:: This was just so wonderful!! Anna, what a little sweetheart!! I like your Bette, so wise…well much wiser that is;-) I love this story, I look forward to it everyday…thank you for bringing me happiness with it. I’ll be back of course for your next installment.
P.S. Coffee does help…especially in my current situation…EXAMS…I have two tomorrow and Folgers is gonna save my ASS:-D Hehe
Someone mentioned the unconditional love you write about and that is so true. It just so cool and comforting to be able to read such a well written story that warms your heart thank you.