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Chapter 47 – Reveled in the Feel
Bette, surprised by the contact of Tinas touch was not prepared for the kiss. Bettes mind went into total denial but her body more than made up for what her mind lacked. At the first feel of Tinas soft, sweet, tender lips, Bettes lips quivered. Her lips having a need for this feel of Tinas lips which had been wanted for so long taking preference over any thought the mind might have. The second reaction was Bettes body to slump a little towards Tina, bringing Bettes chest in full contact with Tinas. The overall sensation of this contact was an explosion of sensations that derailed Bettes already locked up mind. Any rational thought was gone as Bette just allowed her body to experience and remember the feel of Tinas lips, her body all while Bettes eyes were closed.
As Tina pulled away from Bette, she could see the look of amazement painted on Bettes face as she stood frozen in time until her eyes opened and she came back to earth from the spiritual place this kiss had taken her. It took a few moments after Bette opened her eyes, for her mind to once again engage. The far away dreamy look in her eyes quickly became replaced with a look of confused surprise as now again her mind was in control. Bette backed away from Tina and looked down.
Tina I dont understand . Bette begins to talk to Tina
Tina seeing Bettes confusion and hearing the lost tone of her voice just steps closer and pulls Bette into a loving hug while saying Im sorry Bette it just felt so right, I didnt mean to make you upset.
Bette once again getting lost in the feel of Tinas body against hers embraces the hug with her eyes closed and a pained look on her face that no one could see. Tina I just dont know Im so afraid of making the wrong move I mean I just cant lose what we have built. I cant go backwards. Bette says to Tinas neck as she has her head down on Tinas shoulder.
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Oooh, I’m so excited about about the kiss but a little afraid about Franklin’s offer. It’s a great opportunity but wouldn’t it cause AlphaBette to return. Noooo! Jwet you know I trust your writing so I’ll just watch the TLW on On Demand until you post next.
Hey I am looking for someone to discuss my Fanatic appreciation of TLW with. Any offers???
lol, well thank god I read rather quickly ;) And yes lets hope everyone has the pleasure of knowing whats better…
This is such a great story, look forward to it everyday.
Wow Jwet, two chapters already posted, damn, I’m so behind on my readings…don’t worry I’ll catch up=P
I read your previous chapter, I left you a comment, feel free to go back and read it. Haven’t read this chapter yet so I better get a crackin’ on it=)…brb…
Omg…what have you done to Franklin…it’s like we’re in the twilight zone or something!!…LoL…I LOVE IT!! Go Bette, go Bette, it’s your birthday, it’s your birthday!!…=D
Nice to see that Tina is just as worried about Bette wanting her as well – we all know better.
Franklin – well, he has grown too? As Exective Director, Bette will have more flex in her time and she can hire more people and maybe create a “day care” at CAC.
Then again, it’s your story and a great one at that; and I can’t wait to see how it unfolds.
I hope your dog feels better.
Hmm, this was interesting. Loving it. My computer is fine now thanks. We need more!
Awesome update. Good questions for Bette. Will she be honest enough with herself to go discuss it with Tina and therefore figure out that Tina and Anna are what she really wants? The kiss was exactly how I pictured it :)
The comments you receive are almost as entertaining as the lovely story you continue to write.
This is a good offer that Franklin give to Bette but is she gonna take it or not, let find out on the next chapter. Post soon, thanks! Good chapter!
Hmm…That’s quite a different direction for Bette’s career to take. But can she stay the New Bette if she has more power and more responsibility? Great job.
Jwet, love your story, I have a confession its always the first thing I check in the morning to see if you have posted a new chapter, love your story,love this Bette and looking forward for a B&T connection.::winks::
oohh.. better salary… hope everything will go well for her!.. another chapter well written!
Hey good morning and thank you for this wonderful chapter. WOW Executive Director. More everything but less hours b/c she has lil’ ppl working under her right… As for me and my broken elbow. May I suggest staying off the roof of the house before Christmas. No matter how badly you what to know how Santa get’s in without a chimey. LOL…
Wow I think I’m first?? What have you done to franklin?? I don’t think bette will that it. That means more work and less time with the baby. Yeah bette and tina interaction was a good start keep it up.
hey, i’ve send ya the mail…. hope that you’ll keep your promise! *goes back to read the chapter*
Blimey. That was out of the blue. Just what Bette used to want – but what about her family. Can she do both things considering that old Frankie is giving up to be with his family more?
OK, I am just trying to get my breath back after consuming this chapter; wonderful, truly jaw dropping good writing. The construction of this body of work is faultless. Every word and phase is exactly were it should be to entice the reader while leaving them anticipating the next installment.
To have Bette overwhelmed twice within a 24 hour shows just how daring you are. Both Tina and Franklin have seen the change in Bette and are happy to reciprocate in words and actions. Woo-who!
Today’s thoughts are:
When will Bette get back over to Tina’s to move things along? Will Bette stop acting like a dear caught in the headlights and give Franklin a big sloppy kiss and hug? When did Franklin get a personality transplant? Are these sorts of transplants available on ‘Extreme Makeover’? Are they safe? (Hey, who cares if they work! I can nominate a list of people to trial them if not). Will Franklin’s offer knock Bette’s plans with MYV foundation and Tina off kilter?
I am sure that Jwet will offer some solutions and more questions tomorrow.
As always,
Your Loyal Fan.
PS – Have a first aid kit with a set of forceps to help with your stitches.
WOW. Bette going slow with Tina and expressing her fear. Franklin seeing Bette’s talents and strengths. Nice very very nice. Giving Bette another choice – only slightly evil on your part – what will she do? Thanks for continuing this wonderful story.
Interesting. Now that AlphaBette has turned homeward, will she be tempted back to be the MegaMonster at work through this promotion? (Not that she’s not currently large-and-in-charge at work…it’s just not her life.)
And that kissing stuff was good, too.
All’s well with the Porter-Kennards? Tina starts a new job, Bette gets a promotion, Helena is banished and lastly, they kiss!
Let’s all pause for a station break as the drama develops to begin anew.
I wonder what you have in store for us?
OK, I am just trying to get my breath back after consuming this chapter; wonderful, truly jaw dropping good writing. The construction of this body of work is faultless. Every word and phase is exactly were it should be to entice the reader while leaving them anticipating the next installment.
To have Bette overwhelmed twice within a 24 hour shows just how daring you are. Both Tina and Franklin have seen the change in Bette and are happy to reciprocate in words and actions. Woo-who!
Today’s thoughts are:
When will Bette get back over to Tina’s to move things along? Will Bette stop acting like a dear caught in the headlights and give Franklin a big sloppy kiss and hug? When did Franklin get a personality transplant? Are these sorts of transplants available on ‘Extreme Makeover’? Are they safe? (Hey, who cares if they work! I can nominate a list of people to trial them if not). Will Franklin’s offer knock Bette’s plans with MYV foundation and Tina off kilter?
I am sure that Jwet will offer some solutions and more questions tomorrow.
As always,
Your Loyal Fan.
PS – Have a first aid kit with a set of forceps to help with your stitches.
the same offer couldt be made in the show?..lol..i dont know but i think Bette could to harmonize your interests between a new position and Tina and the baby..cuzz this is the last chance to work things out with Tina..post soon youre great
Hmmm…A tough decision for Bette… This is so good! Thanks
now this Franklin is a MUCH nicer guy. Go for it Bette……..
What a truly wonderful story! I like that you have given Bette some very happy times and choices to make. The job offer sounds great but will she still have the time to spend with her family? I know from experience that work and family is a difficult balance. Looking forward to seeing what your Bette will do.
Thank you for taking the time to share this amazing story of yours. You are a very gifted writer. 5 bright stars!!!!!
Hey Jwet I’m LOL Bette thought she come back to earth from the SPIRITUAL PLACE LOL I’m just Blown me Away funny really Good writing, Anyway I hope Bette don’t need tha Executive Director position that’s gonna be a lot of Responsibility Bette she need to focus on Tina and the Baby thank you jwet really Awesome Story.
That is a great offer she deserves it but it will put her back where she was. She doesn’t need the money like she use to so let her enjoy her life with her family that she wants so desperately to get back..Love your writing girl…
always happy to see things looking up for Bette. thanks for the well written chapter.
GREAT CHAPTER..BYE BYE HELENA..SHE HAS TO TALK TO TINA ..IF BETTE TAKES THE JOB SHE WON’T BE ABLE TO SEE HER DAUGHTER AS MUCH…I CAN’T WAIT FOR THE DATE..PLEASE POST SOON
Morning Jwet,
Will Bette take the job, hopefully she will talk to Tina about the job offer and seek Tina’s advice.
Love it.
Thank you.
Wow…this story is so incredibly well thought out…really wonderful job!!!