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From Afar
Seeing her point Alice gave in Yeah your right. Why dont we get moving so you can get started earlier? What do ya say? And with that the both hustled around Alices apartment and made it out the door in 10 minutes.
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Bette ran her hands through her hair as her car pulled up to the MYV Foundation building. Getting out she walks up to the employee entrance and uses her key to unlock the door. Going inside Bette takes the key off her ring before slipping her car keys into her pocket. Quickly striding in Bette is surprised to see Jackies secretary quickly getting up a little startled at Bettes presence.
Can I help you? She quickly asks.
Oh Im sorry to surprise you. I have an appointment with Jackie. Bette says the only thought that comes to her mind.
Oh let me let her know youre here. Your name please? She asks.
At this Bette hesitates, she should have called first Ah just let her know that Bette Porter is here to see her. Bette finally says seeing no other way.
With that Jackie secretary goes to inform Jackie but first looks back to make sure Bette isnt straying off anywhere. When she returns Jackie is right behind her coming out of her office.
Bette what are you doing here? Couldnt stay away I see. Jackie says ribbing Bette a little.
Nope this is a quick visit. Bette says as she moves into Jackies office. Safely behind closed doors God I should have called. Thanks for seeing me. I just wanted to return this? Bette says as she opens her hand to reveal the key.
Jackie just looks at the key and smiles. You know Bette you are an amazing woman. If I wasnt so pre-disposed to men I might be tempted to give Tina a run for her money. Jackie jokingly confesses as she reaches for the key and plucks it out of Bettes hand.
At this last remark Bette now just shakes her head So sorry Jackie no matter what happens I dont ever think there will be any other woman for me. With that Bette stood with Jackie as they each make small talk but in the end they each knew this was it and Bette was done.
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(68 votes, average: 4.12 out of 5)
for me it’s sound… lol… a good one I might add. Tks Jwet, as usually I appreciately so much your chapter. Alice is soooo cuuuteee!!!! cya!!!!!
Wow can’t wait for the next chapter,it took 3 days huh?? This is good, I do have to say, you got me a little worried with the Irene thing. I hope it’s not that big of a problem.So who might be able to see her as a problem. I though for sure shane would have picked up on it. It would be cool if dana did, it would shock me. But as long as the chapters keep coming I will never stop reading. So not even a peak at what I have inspired??
Been sick, but now I’m and I am loving this even more. Gotta love this new Bette!!
Holy Shit!! You know about the tips and the drawings???? I need to have a word with Down Low – I may be on commission here for the tips but definately not with the Picasso!!! DOWN LOW – YOU BAD GIRL!!
Great Chapter Jwet, as always. Nice to see the reinvented Bette Porter (swoon) conversing with the others too. I think Alice is impressed by this super cool, super sexy Bette.
Hey Jwet it’s me I’m just gonna missed this fanfic Story for a three weeks I’m going out of State OMG my daughter is out of school right now Me and my Husband and my daughter is going out of STATE so keep it writing jwet my husband always MAD at me b/c I’m just always on the COMPUTER LOL I know it’s I’m CRAZY Yeah LOL.. Yes I love BTW STORY What can I say, but his okay with that so I’m just give him a chance to stay out in the COMPUTER for a WHILE OMG! I have a HEADACHE right now to think about this so JWET THANK YOU see you guys LATER.
Another great chapter Jwet, love the new Bette, keep em coming!!!
I absolutely love your story, hopefully you can please post a new chapter soon, I know you are working hard to give us readers the pleasure of your writing.
YUP, YUP Jewt. I’m riding under OCD for a while. Remember Joe said that’s what I’ve got. OCD for the L Word. LMAO… What better name to use. You know I love you more than my luggage. Hey your the master. I’ve learned from the best. :) Hell not no lawn stuff. My arm still hasn’t recovered. Glad i’m single.. roflmao…
Aw, you don’t know how excited I get when I see this story updated. Great job. More please!
Yet another great chapter, excellent, post again real soon
K
Wonderful as always, you never let me down.
i’m raising a glass of wine (ok- not really as it’s only 3:10 in the afternoon)in praise of another great chapter as well as in expectation of the next one. thanks!
i´m glad Bette is rebuilding your relationship with Tina and with her frinds and about the phone thing she just look like a teenager with first love..lol..amazing chapter from an amazing writer..post soon ;-)
WOW…I LOVE IT…PLEASE POST MORE SOON
Very nicely done, as always.
Oh living down here has it’s perks…blue sea, white sand,but then again the hurricanes can give you a good scare. Loved the chapter, feel sorry for Alice though
Oh yeah, amazing as always! Impatiently waiting for the next chapter.
Wonderful. Hope to see more of Alice and dana
Don’t we love those caller ID’s. We’ll Jwet I truely loved this chapter. I’m so looking forward to see how Bette deals with Alice and Dana and not to mentioned that adorable Tina. Excellent job and again I’m looking forward to the next chapter. I wasn’t too late on this one.Catch the next one when you give it to us.
Good chapter. Bette is so happy and in love with Tina even more. Ok what Tina calling Bettea what she up to. Post soon, thanks!
Hopefully, Bette can be of some assistance to Alice=P I wonder why Irene is so interested in B&T’s love life? Interesting, I guess I’ll just have to keep on reading to see where this goes;) Bravo Jwet, as always!
I really like that you’re getting Bette back to her friends…especially Alice. I also like Bette knowing there’s no other woman for her but Tina. Warms my heart.
I hope you don’t get bored with our appreciation! Thanks!