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Well in a round about way. I have been in Tinas dog house and well this is my way out. Alice says not wanting to go into too many details.
Dog house? Was it fun? Did you have any revealing life experiences getting there? Helena asked as she was just bidding her time until Tina made a move for her table.
As Helena was asking the question many different thoughts went through Alices mind, all the different positions and toys her and Dana had tried, the clenches at Danas mothers luncheon in the coat room, the ride home and how they almost drove off the road. Yes in a round about way I did get a revealing life experience as you would call it. Alice responded actually turning a little red in the remembering.
It was the color in her cheeks that made up Helenas mind to continue to talk with Alice. Well than you might just consider this evening as the flip side of that experience, it may make the evening a little more bearable. So what table do they have you seated at?
Oh Im sitting with Tina and Bette. Alice responded quickly.
Helena only hearing the Tina part Oh really!
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As Reverend Pillary made his way to Tina he was preceded by what appeared to be body guards as they looked all around the area and then signaled back that it was clear for him to proceed. As he first approached Jackie, he spread his arms wide as he engulfed her in a big friendly hug. Jackie its such a pleasure to see you again. I feel that we talk so much by phone that you are a regular part of my family.
Jackie is glowing under his praise as she turns to Tina You remember Tina Kennard dont you?
Oh yes, I remember the beautiful woman who shared the airwaves with me. Reverend Pillary says as he takes Tinas hand Its a pleasure to see you again my dear. I see by all the festive activities here that tonight is going to be a fabulous evening. I understand you are responsible for pulling it all together. I want to commend you on your joyous efforts. The Reverend says with a genuine sincerity that makes Tina glow in his presence.
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Phew Jwet i can breathe now, beginning to turn blue…Bette i’m sure won’t go down to Helena’s level…i thought the Secretary was going to come into it some how but the cat is still in the bag is there a chance that it will come out at some point?
This chapter rocked may i say.
Thank you.
I’m thinking Tina should ask to see Helena away from the table and give her a good slap. Or when Helena leaves the event she get’s run over by truck or something. Poor Bette..
On your command, I will run from the bar and put my sword skills into action … ??? lol. Great story, i love it, thank you !
K
Wonderful as always. Helena is such a bitch. I hope Bette puts her in her place.
Jwet,
Here’s Rocky…….. Oops meant Bette!
In the red corner we have ‘Bette the Basher’ and in the blue corner we have “Hecklesome Helena”.
Are you ready to rumble??? Keep in a good, clean fight, ladies. **Ding** Round one!
Commentary:
Both gals come out fighting. Fists are flying but no real contact yet. These experienced fighters are nimbly bouncing around the ring. Sizing each other up. A jab here and a swing there. And there we have a sucker punch from Helena. Bette is on the ropes. With some nifty footwork the basher is back in the centre. What will her response be???
**Ding**
Round two will continue with the next chapter. Please make it soon.
All joking aside, Jwet, you have fashioned beautifully rounded and natural characters. I feel as if they do exist in this universe you have constructed. This is a three dimensional world; full to capacity with the best and worst of times. Hurrah for you!!
As always, your Loyal Fan.
Helena reminds me of the school bully! All talk when she knows Bette has too much manners to deck her a good one!
I hope Tina happened to turn around and heard that misplaced comment and ask that she leaves, like, NOW.
And I think Alice is in more trouble for exchanging seats. Hee. Hee.
Great chapter. Will wait for more!
ok bring t on!!!! Helena you’re so…
great Jwet… I really hope Bette keep her mood
My blood’s boiling, can’t imagine how Bette has not given her a right hook or left jab. Something’s gotta give! Great update.
DUDE! i just caught up on the last 5 or 6 chapters (have been out of town for the last week) and this is so great! i can’t help the feeling that aint nothin good gonna come outta this. i wish that Bette would just come clean with Tina after this event and let everything else work itself out. but alas, i am no Jwet and therefore, will simply read and follow wherever you take us. thanks again and will eagerly be awaiting more!
Hello, Jwet… I am enjoying this story. I am also sitting on the edge of my chair and biting my nails for all of these twist and turns. Execellent chapter. So looking forward to the next one.
Bette remember to count to 20. Like that ever works or if she gets there before she bashes Helena head into the table. Loving this!! Can’t wait to see what happens next!
Hmm, what’s gonna happen next?? This new calmer Bette might get out of GBH on Helena, but having that blabbermouth secretary at the table might prove to be the bigger mistake…waiting with baited breath!!
I hade to comment and say Let Bette kick her ass better yet i think Tina should
Uh-oh, keep your cool Bette! Jwet, tell Bette to keep calm!
If Alice were trying to get back into Tina’s good graces, she didn’t earn any points for switching seats with Helena! That woman is the embodiment of wicked, mean and nasty. I hope that Bette has more will power in reserve and will come back with something witty to pin Helena to the mat. Ooooh, or maybe Tina overheard Helena’s remark and will put her in her place. In any event, great story.
Oh my, what will Bette do now? Great chapter, amazing chapter
WOW…what a rude bitch….will Bette toss her table???
Death to Helena!
What a wonderful way to start my day. Hot, sexy Bette and Tina Then my coffee kicked in when you mentioned Helena. J/K.. Great chapter J.
Come and have a go if you think your hard enough? eh, Bette? I’m sure she is up for the job!! Chin her Bette. Great Chapter Jwet. Bring it on!!!
I hope Tina heard that as she was getting up. I can so see Bette saying something like “let’s take this outside”. The last thing she wants is to ruin the party, which is what Helena must want her to do. Or maybe Alice will try to redeem herself by beating Bette to the punch, literally. haha.
Helena dserves to be slapped upside the head.
It was a great chapter. You write beautifully. Looking forward to the next post.
Oh Jwet, please let this be the time for that monumentos ball to fall from the air, right now and let Bette enjoy the evening with the snake to keep tormenting her. But as always this super cool, super sexy (phwoar!!) reinvented Bette is dealing with it in her stride with sheer class!! Hell, I think even the Rev finds the thought of these two together pretty darn hot!!!!
You sure weren’t kidding about the drama were you!!! Somebody please hurt Helena please!
Uh oh, there’s going to be TROUBLE! *wicked grin* Bring it on. This is great! Please post soon, because now I’m on tenterhooks wondering what Bette will do next.
Uh oh, there’s going to be TROUBLE! *wicked grin* Bring it on. This is great! Please post soon, because now I’m on tenterhooks wondering what Bette will do next.
Wow this should be interesting I am sure it going to take everything Bette has to control herself but I hope Tina heard her and takes care of Helena herself..Bette shouldn’t have to make herself look like a fool in front of everyone. and if I was Tina I would kick Alice’s ass for changeing place with the bitch..Great job Post soon
Them’s apples I see coming our way?
Oh, no she di’int!
Bette needs to round up her posse and kick Helena’s ass!
That was just beyond the pale!
Where is Kit Porter when we need her?
Bette MUST retaliate – now!!!
Please, don’t de-ball our Bette like they did on the show!!!
Bette, throw down and defend your honor!!
ki. i’m growling very low and menacing J. that bitch had better gets whats coming to her. aaauggg more drama. what would life be without it. keep it coming and soon please.
wow bitch. please let bette knock her out
man..i have no words to describe how much i hate Helena…and Bette could accidently spill some wine on her..lol..amazing chapter post soon thanks
Ooh, ooh, is this where you are going to use the little name I made up? Have our B say something to put Helena in her place without violence? Woo, even if Bette hits her I’m good with that too. Woo!
OMG!!!! Chapter 64?!?!?! and im only on chapter 44?!?! Oh Man!!!! I do have a lot of catching up to do .. shite!!! ok this will take a while!!! lol
Alice is going to be in deep shit! Helenav is such a bitch, Bette needs to step her out and take it to the parking lot.
I knew the secretary would recognise Bette, I’m glad it didn’t blow up in her face but Bette needs to tell Tina ASAP.
Masterfully written.
Oh no she didn’t. Jwet you can’t leave our girl Bette hanging like that, she gots to smack that beatch till kingdom come.
Anxiously waiting for the next post.
J I got to say I love hella in your story, her comments WOW, nice job with those, I wonder what she did to get alice to give up her seat?? maybe locked her in the closet? Anyways bring on the drama, I love it.
Damn this is fucking bad, Bette gonna kick her ass!