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At the end of the presentations Jackie was ecstatic with how
the evening had gone. Still wrapped up
in the enthusiasm of the evening Jackie once again thanked Tina for all her
hard work in pulling off this dinner with such short notice. When Tina came back with her request for
Jackie to reveal the identification of the original donor, Jackie was actually
taken a little off stride. Jackie felt
the shock wear off as she looked around the room, trying to buy some time as she
made up mind up what to say. Jackie
didnt like being in this position of lying or telling the truth but she only
had herself to blame. Finally making up
her mind that she couldnt tell a lie Well Tina I bet you do. You know so many people that it would be hard
for me not to believe you dont know this person. But you will have to excuse me if I cant
say. Im going to go over for the
pictures now are you coming? Jackie says hoping that would put an end to this
line of questioning.
Seeing Jackies reluctance Tina relented and went along with
the change of subject. Sure just let me
touch base with Bette real quick and Ill be right over.
With that Tina looked around once again for Bette. She spotted Bette in the back looking at
her. As Tina waved Bette started making
her way towards the front of the room. Tina
loved the look on Bettes face as she wound her way through the tables, her
hair bouncing as she hurried. With
Tinas eyes still watching Bette, she felt the lightest brush of a finger
across her bare neck. Tinas first though
was amazement as she wondered how Bette could be touching her from clear across
the room. The sensation became more
intense as this touch traveled down her neck and across her bare shoulder. This feel immediately startled Tina as the
finger went down her arm to her bicep and then jumped to the front of her
breast cupping it in a firm grasp. At
the same time this was happening Tina felt a thigh press against her from the
rear almost splitting her legs through her dress as she was pulled from behind into
someones body. The first feeling that
Tinas brain registered was an intense feeling of pleasure at this touch.
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Hey J I hope bette has NIKE’s on under her dress. Wow a little upset with tina, I mean HELLO it’s not bette touching you if she is standing in front of you. She should have just walked away from hella and went to bette, instead of ripping her a new one cause it’s not working. Other then that awesome as ever, can’t wait for this dinner to be over.
Jwet,
Sorry babes no time to read it just now as it is 7:30 pm on a Friday night and I’m still at work. Will catch up and comments will continue on Monday.
Have a chilled out weekend and recharge those creative juices we all love and admired. Find inspiration in the amazing world around.
Take care and I want normal services to resume next week.
:-) RD
nooooooooooo!!!! You can’t leave it at that. More poo sandwichs for poor Bette. I am praying that Bette will get sweet rewards in your later chapters. Have a great weekend!
as usual- nicely done! i hope that Bette will be able to finally come clean with Tina or i’d imagine that things are just gonna get a whole lot worse…
PS- thanks for the offer of help. how fast can you get to the West Coast?
I hope Bette finds a balance between kick ass and running. A Balance between new Bette and Old Bette.
great chapter..waitin for the next
Ok… bring it on!!! Run Alice run!!! Great great Jwet… waiting here impaciently!!! lol
Good chapter! Goodbye Helena..
Time for Tina to do a little convincing with Bette ;)
Jwet girl you can surely leave us hanging here. Loving the story and I like the pace, the girls need to talk and pretty soon, although mygirl Bette needs a “this is you” assurance ;-) hint hint hint. Anywayyyy thanks for the story can´t wait till monday to see whats up, and please please don´t let Alice mess this up.
Thanks again.
Wow. I really felt Bette’s pain. Nice job. I can understand why she left. Thanks for the chapter – looking forward to the conversation about the dinner. Will Alice figure things out before Bette reveals things? Hmmm…
Great chapter Jwet, really am enjoying this story.Bette needs to share her feelings and talke with Tina so they can get through this and worke towards building a solid rellationship.
I’m glad that Tina put Helena in her place. Bad timing for all involved. If Bette only would have paid attention longer she would not have felt so threatened. I am worried that it’s going to be Alice that spills the beans that Bette is behind the foundation instead of Bette coming clean on her own. It’s a slipper slope for everyone at this juncture…I’m know that you will skillfully lead out TiBette through this latest maze of events.
Wonderful chapter Jwet…that Helena is one annoying snake…a new breed even…I hope all works out well and Tina finds some way to fix this damage. Loved it…poor Bette, I have faith in you…everything will be alright…right?! LoL…please update soon;)
wait..is that a big ol’ rolling ball of truth that might be following Tina out the door, ready to catch up with her when she meets up w/Bette?
OMFG!!! I’ve finally had time to get caught up on all your chapters. What a ride you have taken us on. You continue to amaze me with each and every chapter.
I don’t like to see Bette running again, but I have the utmost faith in you. Can’t wait to see where you take us!!!!
Hello, Jwet>>>I can see that I’m tardy again…I’m so waiting to see where you are leading us too??? I’m just sitting her trying to pluck out which way it will go? I’ll just have to wait an see…Excellent chapter…I’ll catch the next chapter, hopefully I won’t be late this time….Thanks for your time, effort, talent.
Again, great chapter, love it. Don’t take too long to post again :)
oh boy..i have one advice..Bette need to talk..she must stop wondering and start ask Tina whatever she wants cuzz they are really in a tricky situation and if the dont talk the things will become worse..and Bette is about time to deal with Helena…ok..do i have to say that was an amazing chapter?? i dont think i have…lol…and you have a wonderful weekend too ;-)
Jwet, another amazing chapter full of depth, feeling and sooooo many emotions. I cannot believe how many chapters this MYV Dinner has spread over – but I’m lovin every single one. And another thing, you have so made me into a serial commenter!!! This story, for me, is up there along with the other amazing epic story “Introspection”. Keep going mate, always a pleasure. x
BRAVO BRAVO JWET. That was perfect. The way you explained their thoughts, emtotions. Oh Wow… You had me standing there with them. In my pj’s but I was there. LOL.. This is so Awesome!!! I am going to be very very sad if it ever ends.
Ohh Gosh , Jwet !!! Another excellent chapter from u :D . I so totally love ur story . u have woven quite an interesting maze here haven’t u , eh. ? :D hahaa .
well the anticipation sure is building up slowly until everything is revealed . I can see from the way Bette is kinda backing off from ” really ” talking with Tina , that Bette is still struggling with some of her insecurities concerning her and Tina . But she will have to tell Tina about this vision of hers regarding the MYV foundation AND HER ROLE IN IT , before Tina finds out from someone else like Alice . Sometimes i fear that , Alice is so close to finding out who that person is , that even if Al doesn’t exactly know that it is actually Bette she might guess it and in her excitement just blurt it out to Tina before Bette has a chance to talk with Tina . My gosh !! I don’t wanna think what might happen if that happens . I wish Alice keeps on going in circles till all this is happily resolved . I really hope that B&Tee make it thro this and r finally happy :D . They sure have gone thro sooo much already . When Bette does have a melt down I hope Tee is there for her to comfort her and to quell her fears :D . I am eagerly awaitng ur next update and I am glad to hear that u have got the rut remover to beat down the unexpected writers block . Yayy !! LOL ;))
Thank you for writing this engaging and amazing story Jwet !! :D
Gazillion stars to u all the wayyyy !! :D
Thanx .
I have to “delurk” now. I’ve read your story since the very begining but I don’t know if I ever commented. That’ s becouse of my poor english. Anyway I like complicated plot of your story and the way you describing reality and emotions. And this chapter is excellent! thanks for regularly posting!!
Excellent chapter. Bette and Tina really do need to talk. It is amazing how emotions can cloud what we see.
Jwet you top yourself day after day. I need your gift with words to adequately convey how beautiful this is. Note to Bette…Where the hell are you going?
That was wonderfully brilliant Jwet, as always. They really do need to have that talk. Woo. Looking forward to chapters to come. Wonderful!
Damn, Ineed to say 3 things. 1 iwant to smack the taste out of Helena’s mouth. 2 WHAT THE FUCK BETTE??? Stop running all the day time. 3 Tina is just lunchin.
Why is Bette running? I’m not liking this timid Bette.
I know, she’s vulnerable because there’s a child involved and she wants to maintain the bond she’s so recently developed with Tina. Still…
Thanks for posting!
i understand that bette is still so unseure of her place, but she needs to have some faith. t really needs to not take pics and find bette now. i’m totally lovin where you take us. the thoughts, emotions, and please let bette just smack hellno. she is so inapproriate. have fun with the boat and don’t forget about us obsessed readers.
K
Well damn. I hope Tina finds Bette and they work it out. I just hope Bette will listen. Wonderful chapter. Love it.
I like seeing Tina sticking up for herself. I hate Helena. Bette needs to grow her balls back and also come clean with Tina.
Hi Jwet, I’m still reading, but I’m only up to chapter 45. Loving this story! It’s awesome. Thanks for writing it, you’re doing a fantastic job…
Another great chapter Jwet, finally Tina telling Helena to go where the sun don’t shine…Bette, Bette this woman is so crushed at the moment…enjoy your weekend and your sailing if you get your boat out.
Bette honey you have to stop running. The key thing to rebuilding a relationship is communication. actuallly that is the key to any relationship. Is Helena could only just leave then never come back. But this brings so much drama into the story. Loving it!!
I just finished ch 57. That was awesome. Your explanation was very true to the characters. I might actually be caught up by the time you post again…I used to catch a chapter here and there, but I was missing too much and knew there would be a big payoff if I started from the beginning. I wasn’t wrong. Great story. Thanks!
Man why Helena not go away!