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From Afar
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Tina really hoped Bette was in her apartment as she really
didnt know where else to look. As she
approached Bettes door, Tina stopped to catch her bearings before she moved
forward. Taking a deep breath, Tina
raised her hand and began knocking, a timid knock. Pausing a few minutes, she tried again, this
time a little louder. After knocking a
few more knocks Tina paused and listened for any noise coming from inside. After a few moments of not hearing a thing
coming from inside, Tina knocked again.
This time she was a little more forceful as she was beginning to get a
little mad.
What am I doing out here in the hall? I dont even know if she is in there! As she
is saying this, Tina can feel her anger but shes not sure exactly what she is
so mad at. How did tonight turn into
this as it had started out so well?
Bette had been such a supporting help.
Was it Helena who caused the night to turn by her over the top antics or
Bette for falling prey to them? It had
to be
probably goaded Bette. But didnt Bette
know that
was in her past? All Tina knew now was
that she felt helpless to change this outcome unless she found Bette. The longer Tina stood there knocking the angrier
she was becoming the more demanding her knocks became as Tina channeled all her
anger at the door. Tina persisted in
knocking or now pounding as she became more insistent in her demands on Bettes
door. As Tina knocked the sound she was
making with all her pounding drowned out any possible noise from inside. The crescendo of noise that Tina was creating
drowned out the small cry from inside that was Bette telling her to leave.
Bette heard Tina pounding on the door. The more she pounded the more Bette
cried. Finally Bette moved to the
door. As she leaned against the door she
could feel the beating coming through the door each time Tinas fist hit the
door. With each beat Bette felt
Tina. As Tina banged on the door harder
and harder Bette stood paralyzed to with her body absorbing all the energy
coming through the door. She feels each
hammering on the door in her chest. I
cant Tina I cant! Bette cried.
Finally Tina cried Bettes name Bette Please! I need to talk
to you Please!
Tinas cry registered in Bettes brain. The angst and anger both blended to put
forcefulness and demanding tone to Tinas cry.
After a few more pounds it became quiet as Tina once again cried out
Bette Please!
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Yay, Tina! Go get your woman! Once Tina gets in there, she’ll see the second bedroom/office and will figure things out and through her anger, she’ll see Bette’s true love for her and Anna. Then, it’ll be Helena, who?
Great story, can’t wait for the next chapters!! Thanks, Jwet.
oh! Jwet more drama!!!!! another amazing chapter… please post soon!!!! lol
Another great chapter Jwet, hope Bette doesn’t leave Tina standing talking to the door for too long these two just need to talk openly and honestly with each other….hope you have fun when you get your boat out.
Thanks again.
wow! total drama…nice ch. jwet!
Beautiful as always Jwet. Simply wonderful. Bette must open the door so they can work things out.
I’m glad you are enjoying my stories and I like your comments. Very nice.
I still LOVE your story so I think we’re even, heh!
Hell! i dont think i can take much more of them not talking im starting to yell at my computer screen lol and that not a good sign just a sign of an excellent story! please get them to talk soon great chapter thanks
wow.love the drama..I am finally back and I have missed all my fav.stories and you are the first one I needed to read..WONDERFUL CHAPTER..CAN’T WAIT TO READ THE NEXT CHAPTER PLEASE POST REAL SOON…..THANK YOU
And she huffed and she puffed and she blew the house down! Keep knocking Tina, it will either annoy Bette enough to open the door or just the sheer force will take the door off of its hinges.
Alice is just plain exasperating. Nosy and self-centered. Aurgh! Leave things alone. Tina needs a friend, not a reporter at the moment.
Communication is not Bette or Tina’s strongest suit, is it? Hopefully those two will be able to have a civil, open and honest conversation and clear the air so they can move forward. It might hurt at first to lay their souls bare, but they will be the better for it in the end. They need to move beyond From Afar and get Up Close and Personal!
Great story. I like the ‘come here, go away’ aspect of it – but I am waiting for a little more ‘come here’ to happen soon. *wink*
Bette, honey open the door and everything will be ok. Open up and tell her your fears she will understand. Loving it Jwet!!!
I’ve been neglectful about posting, but I am reading and enjoying every chapter. Now, Bette, open sesame.
JWET…you’re killing me here. Your excellent writing takes me to the dramatic edge only to leave me dangling, holding on for more. All of the other commentors have said all the kudos….I have no words left to describe your fantastic writing. THANK YOU for entertaining us with your creativity, passion, and grace. We are all the better because of it. P.S. waiting breathlessly for the next chapter….please post soon!
Hello, Jwet: Ah I wasn’t that late this time. I am so loving this story. I’m just waiting for the next curve or bend in the road. I’m so waiting for the next chapter, hopefully I won’t be too late. Excellent job.Thanks for your time, effort, and talent.
How can one person consistently do so many things well? Angst, passion, comedy, drama…. name it, and Jwet writes it to perfection. I read this and literally screamed out loud, “open the freaking door Bette!” When the written word involks such a reaction, it’s better than good, it’s a classic.
Omg, dramas! Damn that Helena! Tina keeps asking herself why Bette ran away…does it not register in her brain that her being on stage being groped by the monster in front of everyone to see especially Bette could have a negative effect on Bette. C’mon, no one wants to see their wife/lover being groped by their arch nemesis! And Bette, she shouldn’t jump to conclusions! She really needs to talk to Tina and asking her what she really wants to happen between them two. Lovin’ the chapter Jwet!! Update soon please!
OMG..i dont underestand why they just dont talk.. their life would be so much easier and will save so much pain in one hand is Bette full of regret and fearful and the other hand is Tina that now think she is wonder woman, owner of the truth…they have to underestand that everything what happened was their fault,accept, forgive and move on… please Jwet you are killing me..let them talk..lol..that was great thanks ;-)
“At this moment Bette knew she didn’t have enough strength to go back to being a positive influence in their lives from a far, deep in the background.”
Now I fully understand your title.
Here’s hoping they won’t be apart much longer.
Wow such drama. Great story.
Glad to see you posted. I’ve been following this one and can’t wait to see how this turns out.
That was awesome. What more can I say. Your story, chapters are always so good. And what a great way to wake up to my favorite story. OK so the cats woke me first. :) I can’t wait for the best part of all. B&T forever. Well a girl can hope..
Open the door Bette and lay it all on the table. Time to fix this thing and get your family together.
Hey Jwet, Thanks for such a great story, loving every moment of it. I feel for my girl Bette but she needs to listen to Tina,they have to workout their doubts that’s the only way for her to find her heart and heck its pounding outside her door..
Cant wait for your next post
Thanks
I’ve just caught up with this story after being away for 2 weeks……and am left with a cliff hanger……oh my goodness Jwet you really do kill me!!
They both can’t be that stubborn…They need to talk and tell each other the TRUTH!!!! no more hiding…Post soon I love this story.
Jwet please let B open that door and speak her true feeling to T. Let them use this night to really begin to heal the past. They have alot to work out and they aren’t making that time to do it.
Bette…find your spine…you had it once. Click your heels together 3x and open the door.
great stuff jwet – can’t wait for the other shoe to drop
If Tina keeps pounding on that door, she is gonna get Bette evicted.
Bette won’t have anywhere to live – that’ll get them back together!
Pound away, Tina!!! Yell some more!!!
Great chapter, I love it, please post again soon
Wow !! Gr8 update Jwet !!
I can’t wait to see what happens next !! My heart is beating so fast right now . I am so ready for their ” Talk ” . hehehe ;)LOL
I think Tina needs to calm down a little bit cuz anger never helps anyone . And they can’t possibly Talk and discuss everything out if they get angry and let their emotions and insecurities get the better of them . Also blaming each other is not going to help but it will only make matters worse . They have come such a long way in these past few days . They have to keep that in mind and have a heart to heart talk . They each , just need to let the other in and then they will realise how much they love and want each other . And they need to stop being so stubborn . They need to let go completely and lay it all out on the table and stop assuming and speculating about the future and their relationship .
I really hope they work it out :) . And I am sure that they will .
keep up the gr8 work and post real sooooon Jwet !!! I am sitting at the edge of my seat holding my breath !!!
the Final confrontation that we have been waiting for and anticipating seems to be around the corner !!! Oh Gosh !!! plsssss Hurryyyy with the next post !!! hehee lol :D
Gazillion stars to u all the wayyyy !!!
Thanx :D
jwet, hope you got your boat in this weekend. i’m not happy now that i’m all caught up. i don’t like these cliff hangers. at some point you really have to get it all go. they need to talk, now. bette is a much better person, tina is strong and confident and they love. and love anna. please post soon, your killing me.
Very good, very damm good. Thank you
Jwet, I cannot express in words just how good this story is. It’s one thing to have a great storyline, but it’s another to be able to tell the story as eloquently as you do. This truly is one of the best! Thank you so much!!!
Holy Smoke Jwet, you got me on a f**king emotional rollercoaster!!! I think that you ought to bring the next 4 – 5 chapters together and post them all at once, I can’t take waiting for the next chapter – they end too quickly or do I just read fast???? Oh and yes………you are that good. Enjoy it mate!
K
Well damn. Wonderful chapter as always. I really hope Bette opens that door and talks to Tina. Love it.
aint nothin left to say- awesome.
Jwet,
You are in the zone. Normal service has resumed.
Oh the angst and anguish in this chapter is palpable. I can physically feel the desperation and heart-ache of both Bette and Tina. These gals do need to sit down and let their thought and feelings out; Sharing is caring and builds trust and understanding.
As a fan from the beginning I realise that you are building up to this latest showdown. It is due to your talent and virtuosity that this story continues to pull in the crowds and satisfies all readers. I am split in two because I want to see what happens between these wonderful souls while also not wanting it to end. I know that you will continue to develop this story into a true tour de force. Keep up the fabulous, fantastic and phenomenal effort that breaths life into this chronicle.
Today’s questions are:
How sis Bette get a cab so easily? Pulled up her dress to reveal a little skin? When will that ACME anvil fall on Alice and knock some sense in to her head? Beep, beep! Can Helena please take a long walk off a short pier? Pretty, pretty please? Or at least be charged with assault! When did Tina become the Hulk? Has Harrison been taking her to the gym for a couple of rounds with Tyson? Does she pound “A Shave and Haircut†on the door? What kind of door does Bette have?
As always, your Loyal Fan.
Damn drama drama!