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From Afar
Standing up, Tina finally puts her hand out to Bette,
beckoning Bette to stand also. Bette I
dont care what you have done. All I
care about is why you did them and from what I can see you did them all for me
and Anna and not to us. Tina says with such incredible love coming from her
that her words were like a caress to Bette heart. Taking Bettes hand Tina leads her into the house
Welcome home. Thank you for coming back
to me
Following Tina into the house Bette stops still the living
room in front of Tina, Bette knows she is finally home. With this realization Bette wants to demonstrate
to Tina that she has nothing more to hide.
That Tina has all of her and there will never be any more secrets. Slowly
she begins to take her shirt off, then her shoes, socks and pants. Standing there in her underwear Bette looks
to Tina and still see the love in her eyes, begins to take her bra and finally
her panties off. Standing there naked
feeling totally exposed, Bette spreads her arms This is all I am, here for you
to see. Tina there is nothing left of me
that you cant see, you cant know. This
is all I am.
Tina just stood there looking, as Bette symbolically
displayed herself. Showing all to Tina,
Bette was demonstrating how she had nothing else to hide. The power of Bettes statement along with her
unspoken words brought more tears to her eyes.
Through the mist, Tina looked at Bettes entire body as she showed it to
her.
Tina said the first thought that came to her mind Bette you
only need to show me your eyes and I know whether I am seeing all of you. As Tina reaches up and tenderly strokes Bette
cheek with her hand all the while looking into her eyes. What she sees back is all she needs to
know. Bette is hers and she is Bettes. With the lightest of touches Tina lets her
hand fall from Bettes cheek, lightly down her body to the front of her chest
and finally down her arm to her hand. Searing
heat follows the trail as Tinas fingertips lightly forged this path. Grasping Bettes hand, Tina led Bette to the
bedroom.
Bette was in a trance as she couldnt break her eyes away
from Tinas. This magical feeling of
being captured by Tina, in her presence once again, Bette would follow her
anywhere as she was mesmerized by her presence and her touch. Tina was leading her home, back to their
bedroom, back into her heart. Once they
were in the bedroom, Tina dropped Bettes hand.
Breaking her eye contact she went to the door and quietly closed
it. Turning Tina slowly approached Bette
taking off her tank and shorts as she closed the gap between her and
Bette.
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(50 votes, average: 4.22 out of 5)
You have, with a few carefully chosen pieces of symbolism, laid their relationship bare. Breathtaking.
The felicity of your words manages to transport your readers into a world of sensuality and love without being explicit. The love and reconnection was deeply felt, it was as if it had a pulse and heartbeat of its own.
I am curious to see how Alice is going to fit into the scheme of things now that Bette has confessed to Tina.
I cannot wait to see what happens next. Thank your for posting.
Just wow. chapter 74 and they are finally finally together – was it tough getting here? Yeah, but anything worth anything has to be fought for. Alice is so going to be pissed off;-)
you’re such a …. romantic, Drama-Queen! *smiles* what can I say withou sound toooooo much a fan?? thnak you for these amazing chapters… and this lovely story. cya Jwet
WOW that was so worth waiting for and so beautiful nothing more to say im just in awe of your writting and yes i too would love to read Tinas reaction to finding out Bette was at the birth it has to be the iceing on the cake??
Thank you JWET for painting such a beautiful picture in my mind. I am forever grateful! (I need another box of Kleenex!)
did I like it? this chapter is so warm, so full of tenderness, just… beautiful. that was a long day for me, I’m tired but I will sleep well. thanks to you JWET!
DAMM J I don’t know what to say that hasn’t already been said. WOW Bette stripping in front of tina, nice effect. It kinda reminded me of jenny though, had to push that thought out of my mind and remember it was bette’s hot ass. Nice talking to you today you never seem to amaze me, this story is a must read to get my day going. AND HAHA I love knowing what’s going to happen next.
Jwet Fantastic story. The images you created through words are simply amazing in my mind. You Rock!
Jwet, This story is beyond spectacular, thanks so much for sharing your talents.
awesome and thanks for the update. i have been MIA for a while with work but am certainly happy to get caught up on your story. thanks again!
Jwet so happy you had a good vacation. Thank you for finally bringing Bette to Tina or Tina to Bette. Finally! Yes! Loving it!!
Damn Jwet, as if you need to yet another tell you, you’re great. But you are, well at least your story telling abilities are. I love, love, looooove this story — this chapter in particular. Can’t wait for your next post. I know you must always respect the original because without it there would be no other; but I would so much like to see your stories on Shotyme. Oh yeah did I tell you I loved you, oh I mean your stories.
finally……….but when will Bette tell Tina she was at the Birth? that’s the only secret she’s still keeping
Oh my God Jwet !!! That was absolutely Beautiful :D
ahhh… I am one happy gal right now . I had been so eagerly awaiting this chapter . Its just so perfect . Thank you so much . Yeah I too want Bette to tell Tina that she was present for the birth of their daughter . Wow that would be so wonderful . I can’t wait to read it . keep up the good work and plssssssss post soon !! :D
Gazillion stars to you all the wayyyy !!! :D
Thanx :)
OK girls, we need to calm down – Jwet has already said she’ll cover the birth stuff – lets trust her – she always comes up trumps.
Jwet, sweetie – I just love that De-Ja-Vue feeling, please don’t stop letting me experience that!!! LOL
Now, New York – what can I say – how fab is it going to be for me to walk around with such a professional author and A Dog! Hope your ready to meet the Brit! So looking forward to it.
Down Low – You Dog, love ya xx
WOW..BRAVO..thank you for make my day ..lol..i have to agree with angelak finally…but about the birth thing that was not a real lie..its more like an omission..lol..Jwet you amazing me every chapter..thanks :-)
Great chapter Jwet. With your skills you don’t need to be so descriptive in the lovemaking department, your writing leaves a perfect picture of whats going on between the two, in my mind. You nailed it babe. thnx. Now on with the show and get then two living under the same roof where they belong.
Oh, I forgot to say….. Yet another fantastic chapter mate, never disappoints.
woo hoo! awesome…finally!!! that was so worth the wait! I love this bette, kinda like a sensitive alpha! Thanks!!
Oh my friend I can read this ten times(which I have) and it would still be wonderful each time. It was…what we have been waiting for and it did not dissapoint and neither did you. Keep up the good work!
WOW!!!! Well worth the wait….That was beautiful..But I can’t wait for Tina to relise ALL that Bette has done for her…Please post soon..This was a great start to my day..Thank you!
What a way to start the day!!! Thank you for such a wonderful chapter.
Perfect 10.
Wow! I am truly elated, mesmerized and touched by this chapter. Your descriptive and guiding style lead us to all have our own interpretation of what the two characters have just shared. simply…elegant…
Awww…much better than HMS. Love.
And to echo what angelak said…what about that one last secret?
Its about time. No worries, you did a fantastic job with this, with this whole story actually. I hope this isnt the end. Plz post soon.
Jwet I can’t tell you how much this series has meant to me. I remember at the begining how everyone was rushing you to reconnect TnB but I was grateful you did not. You carried us on a journey of human faith and emotion that has been a pleasure for me. To see two people who are deeply in love come undone is heart wrenching. Your examination of their abysmal moments was required for a full appreciation of this particular chapter. Bette has exposed all…something she had never done…not even to Tina. I always told my good friends that truly being in-love is a scary thing. I believe so b/c you have to truly reveal yourself, flaws and all, to the other person. The possible rejection is what makes it scary…at least for me. But if there’s unconditional acceptance, by God it’s worth it! So Jwet, thank you for making us realise that in essence, there’s no reward without risk.
I could never tire of this story. What a wonderful story. Thanks
thanks jwet. that was awesome. it made my heart so happy. i did a little happy dance. i love this story. you take us right along with you on this ride. and i’m so happy to go with you. this was so worth the wait. keep it coming.
Wonderful As Always Whoa! I love it Jwet Thank you really Beautiful Writing Thank God Tina listen to Bette and finally Yes WHOA! Jwet you’re are AMAZING WRITER Well I can’t wait for the next Chapter Jwet Please Post soon.
Very good chapter! I am happy to see that Bette has finally become completely honest with Tina. Keep up the great writing.
yahoooooo…..finally jwet! justice is served! thank you
Thank you, it was well worth the wait. I can’t wait fot Irene to wake up and find Bette’s cloths laying in the floor in the living room LOL. I too am waiting for Bette to tell Tina that she was there at their daughters birth — but trust you totally. I also can,t wait for them to display their love openly in front of Helena, because we wll know that Helena is not the kind of person that you can just tell her something —- you have to show her. PLEASE post again SOON. We are waiting with baited breathe.
again, phew, at last. not that im rushing you as i said before could read about this version of these two forever. this story just leaves me feeling all warm inside, hope when im all growed up, i have that kind of loving relationship.
Wow! That was great and I totally didnt even see going that way! Perfect.
WOW FABULOUS CHAPTER..AS ALWAYS..I ALWAYS LOOK FORWARD TO YOUR STORY..PLEASE POST SOON….THANK YOU FOR EVERYTHING…
K
Wonderful chapter. Glad Tina appreciates what Bette did. Love this.
OMG!! Headed off to the PHILIPPINES so I didn’t have a chance to finish it, BUT WOO HOO!!! B&T always!! I’ll rush to the nearest computer I can find there…thanks JWET!!
Gand the greatest is all I have to say.To be loved like that. I am trusting you that this baby thing will not hurt them PLEASE PLEASE. POST LIKE NOW!!!!!!!!!!!
Jwet,
You’ve done it again!!! You’ve “Wow’d” us all with your amazing ability to breathe so much life into a fictional relationship with your beautifuly written words and heartfelt emotions. This was so worth the wait! I hope you continue writing for a long while…Thanks!
Jwet THANK YOU!!! Alice is going to flip when she doesn’t get the reaction from Tina as she sould hope.
Could we have a little more of Tina and Bette before hell brakes loose the next day, some “loving early in the morning” ::hiding under the keyboard:: :-)
I picked a good day to catch up to the end of this story! Awesome as always Jwet…I cut and pasted about 12 chapters into a word file and took my laptop to the lake this weekend so I could reach the end of the story, I was so looking forward to seeing how it was progressing along. You didn’t disappoint! Now I can comment on current chapters instead of consistently being behind the curve. Hope to see many many more words from you. Thanks for sharing.
I sighed and cooed my way through this. The build up over time made this such an amazing reunion. Good for Tina, she answered like a women in love – “her words were like a caress to Bette’s heart”. I hope when they wake-up that Bette does tell her she was at Anna’s birth. This is your second amazing series – brilliant! and bravo.
Great stories are always about the journey, not so much the ending. I’ve enjoyed reading this series all the way through. The descriptive writing of the characters emotions and thoughts has been phenomenal. Thank you for sharing their adventure with me.
I think it’s all been said – this has been an amazing story from beginning to (hopefully not!) end. I’ve just come back from Vancouver and this was the only story I managed to keep up with whilst over there- didn’t want to miss a single posting. Thanks for a wonderful journey.
This was great i love Tina taking control it’s very hot,please post soon.
Hey Jwet, that chapter was so sweet and beautiful.
Thank you.
Every time I log on to this site, I hope that I will find another chapter. I love this story, please continue.
Jwet, that was beautiful! Never thought that a NC-17 chapter could make me cry. This one just did. Again, it’s a rare talent that you possess. Can’t wait to read more!
Hey, would it be too much to ask for MORE HMS once Tina discovered that Bette was actually with her in the delivery room when Anna’s born? =P
the maturity of your writing is breath taking.., i’m spellbound by your story telling…your in depth knowledge of various issues is incredible, i love everything you have written and have learned some things as well… 5 stars is not enough, my hats off to you, lovely lady.
Jwet,
Another breathtaking and awe-inspiring addition to this tremendous tale.
Tina reaction to Bette’s confession was unexpected but true to her inner being; her acceptance and acknowledgement showed how love and affection can conquer all. This involuntary and intuitive response has completely floored Bette. Your skillful words have charmed your readers in to knowing that this is exactly true honest emotive writing at its best.
I appreciate all the blood, sweat, tears and toils that you go through to spread this wonder and joyfulness. Recharge your batteries whenever needs be because the result is always well worth the wait.
Bette and Tina’s reconnection is steady and sure. These women know each other’s souls and therefore without all the bump and grind of other sexual encounters, you have shaped as sumptuous, sexy and sensuous scene. It is truly beautiful to behold.
Thank you.
Today’s questions are:
Were did the big fish that slapped the sense into Tina disappear to? Is it is setting up residency in the pool? Were the blinds close to the bedroom or did the neighbors get an eyeful? Did Tina get the bedroom sound proofed? Did Tina slip Anna and Irene a sleeping draft? Will Bette join LA’s naturist club next? Has Tina used the internet to get the directions to all Bette’s nooks and crannies?
Can’t wait where you take me next.
Am sure that Bette’s revenge on Helena is somewhere in the future. Agree that getting Bette back in the house permanently will provoke some challenges.
Your Loyal Fan.
BRAVO. You are a wonderful writer and it’s always a great pleasure reading your story. Thank you.
this chapter was beautiful Jwet. i have missed your writing while i was gone. can’t wait for more.
beautiful..excellent J
Great! I’m glad Tina thought about everything and took it as it was intended. I think Tina will be happy that Bette was there when Anna was born. I think a nice way to tell her would be in the three of them lying in bed together in the morning.
Gee, when I’m one of the last to read, I don’t have new words to describe what a great chapter this is.
I really liked this line: “These are the things that only happen in fairy tales, a love so strong that it persists despite all the damage done to it”. Isn’t this what we call True Love?
Jwet, thanks for continuing to write and it warms my heart to know you have another 10 chapters mapped out.
*doing snoppy happy dance*
Damn this is awesome and beautiful, love it!