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“I thought you would be interested in these. She’s amazingly photogenic when she’s in the
act of euphoric passion isn’t she?”
comments to Bette as if she is asking for her professional opinion.
Bette clearly doesn’t want to discuss these photos with
from
letting her see the effect they were having on her. This stab of sorrow she is feeling is close
to bringing her to tears and she is not about to give
Taking a deep breath and trying to appear unaffected “Well
Helena what a pleasant surprise. I’m
just sorry that Tina couldn’t have been with me to see your creation here.”
Bette says as she is regrouping and gaining her bearings.
“OH Bette, these are not my creations. Oh no, Tina and I just provided the
inspiration. You could say that our
passion was the muse that Richard needed to get his creative juices flowing.”
Trying to buy some time to calm the pounding that was
hammering in her ears Bette moves forward as if to examine the pictures. She starts with the last image of Tina and
Helena in the delivery room. This
picture shows a Tina who is well along in the delivery process. Bette looks closer, Tina is very pale and
sweating profusely. The picture shows a
lot of graphic detail of Tina with her knees up which Bette feels violates
Tina’s privacy on many levels. This view
is so much closer than the view that Bette herself had from the back of the delivery
room. Bette is fascinated with Tina’s
face as she thinks how she would have loved to had been this close during the
delivery. As Bette is looking at the
picture with these thoughts running through her mind it hits her that something
is not right about this picture. Taking
a step back, Bette now genuinely looks at the image before her.
is projected as being a true partner to Tina as Tina is obviously pushing. This image of
actively participating in the birth which is not anywhere near the way that
Bette remembered the event. Slowly a
smile begins to cross Bette’s face as she realizes that
better depict her imagination of the event.
With this realization Bette now understands that all the pictures are
probably altered.
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Hey Jwet WHOA! what can I say Wonderful and Beautiful Story yes that’s really sad for Tina to see her self in that picture yes Helena she have right to take that picture but she don’t have right to put display or anything with out Tina information she still can SUE! her yes Tina signed that hospital paper but that’s not mean to display or anything so maybe she still can Sue Helena Ass OMG! Hey Jwet Whoa! it’s getting interesting I Love it Jwet Thanks still Beautiful Story Please continue Post SOON.
What a great chapter, I wonder if Tina looks, at the picture where she is giving birth and sees Bette in the background. Hope Bette knocks Helena’s block off or even Tina for that matter, please post your new chapter soon, keep up the wonderful writing.
great chapter as always. . . Love the drama and especially LOVE that Bette didn’t fly off the handle.
K
Excellent chapter. I can’t believe H would show those pics. I hope B kicks her ass. Love it.
hey Jwet, I hope your trip is more pleasure than work. This was a great posts. As much I’m intrigued by Helena, she is certainly a tortured soul. Poor thing, she needs a hug — right after Bette kick her ass. Oh I can’t wait for the next post. I’m so happy to see mature Bette not overreacting and let Helena get to her. I guess Winnie was right after all, the best way to get Helena is to ignore her; but it seems only her mother will be able to stop her entirely. Eagerly anticipating Tina and Bette’s conversation at Mario’s.
THis was great bette need to kick helena’s ass then tina needs to kick her ass some more I HATE HER MORE THAN ALICE NOW
Go for the throat Bette, straight for the throat!
YOUR RIGHT MUZZLE THAT BITCH…….I HOPE BETTE RIPPS THAT BITCH A NEW ONE….GREAT CHAPTER..I AM SURE THAT BETTE &TINA WILL DECIDE TO USE THE INFORMATION THAT ALICE GAVE THEM ON HELENA..Great job on this chapter..please post as soon as you can……….THANK YOU……
you are so lucky that you have someone posting for you or i dont think you could have any fun. too many emails, yelling at you while you were gone. thanks for thinking of us. thanks for your address. i was picking my jaw up off the floor on this one, girl. truly where do these ideas originate in you writers. nothing like that is ever going off in my head. please let bette do something, anything to hellno. i think i need some satisfaction. shes been a pain in my ass far to long. lol. you have a good time, whatever your doing and know we will look forward to you coming back to us. this was awesome.
Bette made it clear to Alice that she will not allow any one to hurt her family so if I was Helena I would run. Amazing chapter as always and awaiting the next installement.
Jwet, Jwet, Jwet, you know how to dig deep and get us don’t you. I never saw this one comming. I agree with ChakaSB, at least now Tina will know what actually happen during Anna’s birth. I would think that Tina could sue to get the release resended, since Helena was not firth comming with what she was signing (I mean she was in LABOR), and Helena has had the photo altered. Please post again soon. This story just continue to get better by the chapter.
You can bring the drama, girl!! Waiting for Bette’s anwer to Helena’s invasive acts – oh boy getting ready for the fur to fly or will Bette continue to be the model of restraint and then pull Helena down legally and financially – ah yes alice has provide the goods. Keep going Jwet you absolutely rock as a story teller.
Ms. Peabody has just made a big mistake..If Tina was under any drug in the delivery roon. Helena is in a world of trouble. Bette will get her by hook or crock. I believe they both has had enough of Ms peabody. thanks
Yeah, Helena – what fuckin planet are you on!!!!!!!!!!!
Coz be damned sure if it was this one I’d be kicking your damn head by now!!! I’d chop it off, peel all the hair and skin off, pop your eyes out, roll them along the floor for the cats to play with, scoop your mindless little brain out with a teaspoon, dip your skull in bleach and then I think I’d let Emily’s hamster use your empty skull for its ball to run around in! Ah, there…. I feel BETTEr now.
Oh BTW, Super Assertive – “Get your hands off my wife” ahhhhhhh, she’s a walking goddess.
ok i know Helena is a perfect vessel in which te create drama but cant all fanfic writers using this character just kill her already…One big fanfic massacre….. I am so tired of her, really tired….good drama btw
Oh yes Bette. Sometimes you kill me with your story and I love it so much.
Great as always. Damn. Bette will protect Tina, but Tina needs to be the one to tell Helena where she can go and how fast. This is gonna be good I just know it.
Oh the drama! Yes MORE MORE MORE!!!
Storm Warnings, indeed!
Jwet – I have been following your story from the beginning. So it took so long to comment. This story is soooo good. Thanks for sharing your gift. Congradulations on your award. Please post as soon as you get back. :p
wow, you completely took me by surprise with these pics. I’m so glad that Bette catch on to Helena’s machinating. thanks for not leaving us without chapters for next week! hope it’s holiday, not buisness tripp.cheers!
Wiw! Now it’s time for Bette to pull out her bag of tricks and make Helen’s look like a real asshole that she is….Bette I hope will tell Tina she was there for the birth of there daughter I think Tina will be veryy happy she didn’t miss that very important moment.. Post soon you are so good girl…
oh yeah this is going to be good, I cant wait for Bette to lay the smackdown on helena…
When I read this I wanted to jump through the computer screen and throttle her myself.
Hey Jwet totally AWESOME us usual. I am so tickled about this chpater and those to come. I just can’t wait. Thanks babe.
OMG that was fucking amazing..Helena is pathetic a cruel and sad womam..i hope Bette and Tina have class enough to just leave Helena talking alone or if this is impossible i hope Bette just KICK her ass..amazing chapter wow..thanks :o)
Helena… step out your…. huh… Jwet, you go girl! It’s time to kick some *** lolol
Jwet you are briliant.I loved the last line.”Take your hand off my wife”.I am glad that you will have someone post for you.
“Take your hand off my wife!” Indeed. Will somone please introduce Helena to Gabby? I think they’d probably have a wonderful time making each other miserable and that would give Bette and Tina some peace at last ;-) Love it!
Kick her ass! Someone needs to. love it all Jwet.
Bette go kick Helena’s ass!
Jwet you are the bomb! I have been waiting for Tina to find out that Bette was in the delivery room. I thought perhaps you have forgotten. More please..
Go Bette, go fight for your woman! Both Bette and Tina knew those pictures were doctored.
Tina will remember that she “felt” Bette’s presence during Anna’s birth; didn’t she yell “Bette” during the delivery? I may just have to do research!
Great chapter. I hope your week is play time and not work!
I always have a nice little smile after reading your story. Thanks!
No need to freak. It’s just sincere praise for a worthy author.
Your accomplished writing skills are what made me realize that that HAD to continue to read your story. The Alice that you have fleshed out, although annoying to me at times (ok, a lot of the time)is what makes this so real. She’s fiction come to life! So, yes…I will most certainly continue to read.
Bette surveying the exhibit – You can take the girl out of the gallery, but you can’t take the gallery out of the girl. That was exactly what I would expect to have done, even if going for just relaxation.
Helena and her delusions. Putting her fantazied reality on display. Showcasing her insecurities for all to see with the stamp of the Peabody Foundation. That woman truly is skating on the lunatic fringe.
I felt like Helena was a Cobra snake, slithering around until she found her prey. Coiling back ready to strike, but Bette calm voice and cool demeanor were enough to make hypnotize her long enough to make her back off. Tina on the otherhand, was a Mongoose ready to take her down at any moment.
This pitiful display from Helena will hopefully come back to bite her. Bette was there in the delivery room. She now has the opportunity to come clean with Tina, making their bond stronger and giving Tina the ammunition she needs to blown Helena away for good. But for a moment or two there, it felt like they were dancing with the Devil himself.
Helena is a scared child. She bullies those around her trying to win their love through fear or intimidation. Hurricane Helena in the end, nothing more than a bunch of hot air.
Your story is like music to my ears. I hear different harmonies with each chapter. They compliment each other beautifully, yet allow the overall melody to shine trough with each installment. Never a flat note. Wonderful.
Jwet: oh i think i just broken my mirror for wanting to punch Hyena Hell-ana….but the feeling is so good. Let get B & T sue the pants off her and give her a broken body as well. Ok ok – enuff of the violence (never like violence – neve believe it will solved anything) – i would think the best way to get back at Hyena Hell-ana is to humilate her in public and branding her as an insane woman who does not deserve any sympathy coz she has no HEART! :d YEAH way to go :D
Man have I missed this story??!! My internet has been playing up for a couple of weeks so I’ve had a lot of catching up to do.
Jwet, you are amazing…the chapter where Bette bears her soul and exposes her endearing vulnerability (I think it was the one before moving in) was simply perfect! The drama, love, tenderness and fantastic writing are once again on my screen! WOOHOO!
Oh Helena.. the kind of women you just want to reach out and grab – and not in a kind way. Poor Tina, but now she will find out what really happened at Anna’s birth ;)
I felt like crawling into my screen and knocking Helena senseless. Argh!!! Am so glad that Bette has seen through Helena though – now to set the record straight. Once again, friggin awesome update :)
YOU GI GIRL!!! Bette has to save her woman from the evilness known as Helena. Have a good week, and I’m glad that we will be able to enjoy your story while you are gone.
Oooooooooooooh, I love the drama. Hell is so going to get hers…right? I can’t wait to hear the dialogue between Bette and Tina once they are alone. Will Tina ever find out that Bette was in the delivery room?
OMG…if this is the prelude, what have you got lined up for us in the next chapters, Jwet this was fantastic….my god Helena was horrible, ok worse than horrible, can’t think of another word at this moment!!! and throwing
the paper down on the floor, that was mean.
Now i hope it is Bette’s time to step up and sort Helena out once and for all.
Thanks for the update J.
OH SHIT!! Yea Bette!!! Fuck her up!!! Cant wait for the next post.
Helena is sick. I hope Bette and Tina use those files they got from Alice.
Go Bette – beat Helena’s ass. Great chapter JWet. I though for sure you would have been able to see Bette in the background of on of those pictures. Specifically the delievery one.