Fan Fiction
This story has been set to a rating of PG-13. Age verification is required to proceed.
Future Perfect 10
Login to add story to favorites
(4 votes, average: 5.00 out of 5)You need to be a registered member to rate this post.
Loading ...
“And if I invited you over?” Bette patted the couch and tilted her head slightly.
Tina took a long drink of her mineral water before she set it down and stood. Her feet felt rooted to the floor, but eventually she took the first step and made her way over. She tucked one leg under her as she moved to sit sideways on the couch, facing Bette.
“I thought you could come over tomorrow about three o’clock,” Bette suggested. “That’ll give me a good chunk of the day to get some work done.”
“Do you still have a lot of gardening tools, or should I bring a few things over to help with the vine?”
“I think I have everything you need,” Bette concluded, after pondering the question for a moment.
‘Fuck do you ever,’ Tina thought silently. She gathered herself to speak.
“Do you have any plans tomorrow night?” Tina asked. “I mean, we’re not doing anything for dinner and if you’d like maybe we could all have something together.”
“I’d like that,” Bette agreed. “If we’re going to date, sometimes it will be in the context of family, instead of just the two of us.”
“I’ll bring a few things to cook then?” Tina suggested.
Bette nodded. She reached out and touched the side of Tina’s face with the palm of her hand.
“We do have a very special connection,” Bette said quietly. “I just don’t want anyone to get hurt.”
Tina swallowed hard.
“That’s the last thing I want,” she said quietly. “I knew I had to be sure before I pursued anything with you for that very reason.”
“I should go,” Bette’s hand dropped from Tina’s face to rest on her own lap.
Tina reached for her hand, intertwining her fingers with Bette’s.
“No you shouldn’t,” Tina said. “Angelica’s sleeping.”
“And…”
“And we’re adults, who care about each other…” Tina started. “Come on Bette, don’t make me spell it out.”
“It’s not that I don’t want you,” Bette said. “I have reservations about getting carried away too soon…before we’ve really talked much.”
“There is that pattern with us,” Tina admitted. She decided on a different tack. “So what would you like to talk about?”
She kept touching Bette’s hand as she asked the question, playfully running her fingers over the webbing and palm of it. She let her fingertips lightly touch Bette’s inner forearm before returning her attention to the hand again.
Comments
Leave a Reply
You must be logged in to post a comment.
Got to admire that steely resolve! I’m sure it’s good for something. I’m sure that lack of it in the daylight was way more satisfying. Hope we get another before you go, but if not, bon voyage.
I’m a bit nervous about how “easy” Bette was with Tina. Like many of us, I love Tina but don’t trust her a whit–even though YOUR Tina seems more stable and honorable–it’s hard to forget those “other” Tinas from S3. I feel a wee sense of forboding.
JKS this was perfect. Glad Bette’s head has caught up with her heart. It’s not easy to resist someone that has such an affect on you…I’m suprised Bette made it through the night. It’s hilarious how you turned the tables and had Tina telling Bette to back off! That was probably the deciding factor for Bette – knowing that Tina would wait for her. And Bette knew it wasn’t going to happen until she made it happen. Now they need to continue talking so they can fully connect emotionally (and physically); and hopefully grow into a loving family. I love your story and your writing. Hope you have a nice rest of the summer too!
wow now im totally in love with bette( especially her alpha side) but i have to admit i like this tina
That was lovely. Love your very elegant writing.
Wow…that snuck up and bit me. What is this about a vacation? September is a long ways away in fan fiction life. I had kinda hoped Bette would hold out…but when she agreed to spend the night I knew you would be able to smell sex in the air before she went back home. I hope you can post a chapter before you go.
Wow that was some chapter and it wasn’t even NC-17. Love the story, can’t wait for more.
The water is just fine! Let them go out for a dip. Keep going. ;)
hee hee, well done!
My Tibette heart is once again fuzzy *sigh*
I’m doing my happy dance! Then again NOT because you’ll be away for so long. We shall be awaiting your return. Have a wonderful holiday. By the way “some semblance of normalcy” is right! I wasn’t expecting them to make love since the rating was PG-13. But you did it beautifully. I guess you decided to throw us a bone since we won’t see another chappy until Sept, huh? THANKS!
Fins, you naughty girl…I see where lack of will power leads…hopefully to another chapter from you! Thanks for the great read!
Hurry home!
Wow you really took me by surprise with them making love in a PG-13 post, so brilliant :o)) And who can blame Bette for not sticking to her resolve, with a hot girl like Tina around LOL. But I don’t hope that Bette will give totally in because of this….let Tina continue to pursue and woo Bette. I hope they will stick to the plan of dating, and not just jump into a relationship!!!!! I hope you’ve a great vacation and I’m really looking forward to September and the next post :o))
Fantastic – wake me up before september ends with the next chapter!
well you definately left us in quite a state to have to wait until september! I’m so very glad I managed to wait this long til I read the chapter! DAMN! amazingly writen!
Bravo Bravo I devoured this entire story at one sitting. I remember you wrote a Helena and Bette pairing that I didn’t think could ever be surpassed. You have amazed me. You should be squirted with bubbly champagne and surrounded by beautiful women throwing rose petals at your feet.
Your writing is always excellent and never disappoints. I have a very happy smile on my face. Thank you for sharing and have a wonderful holiday. Looking forward to more in Sept.
excellent, they are so sweet together!
beautiful chapter! thanks! =) i hope we can get another chapter before u leave for ur vacation!!! if not, i wish you the very best holiday! =)
I am really loving this story. I hope Bette won’t regret their decision to have sex so early in their reconciliation. You will be missed, but have a wonderful vacation. *fingers crossed we’ll get another chapter before you go*
I knew it, I knew it, I knew it! …Is it gravity, or is it Memorex? Thanks!
Dually; emotive and creatively breathtaking. A sparkling example of how good you can be, very classy.An absolute pleasure to read, thank you.
Why do I have the feeling that was way too easy? Awesome yes but I highly doubt this means they are back together.
Score! I don’t know how either lady made it through the night but they did and boy were they rewarded the next morning. Great Chapter and way to sneek in a sexy/steamy love scene in a pg-13 chapter. Hope to read another chapter by wednesday.
hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm………..fffffffffinally………………
JKS, thanks for sharing this awesome story with us, We’ll miss you while you’re on break…have a great time, and we’ll be anxiously awaiting your return.
that was just lovely. you captured the desire and apprehension from the previous night to full on beauty of the morning pleasures. hopefully another before you leave, BUT the wait will be worth it. thanks
Yea!!!
Wonderful! Hardly dared breathe during the reading of this chapter and what a sigh of relief at the outcome. I do hope this is a building block to their eventual reconnection. Have a great holiday (and if you do have time to post before you go, that will be splendid)!
Have just read the chapter again – able to breathe this time! Just perfect – loved the gentle banter between them. Thanks so much. Happy hols.
Oh, Swimmie, thanks for that. Dont know if it is too soon or what but thanks. They know they need each other. Get on with it. Let them talk, resolve their differences and get on with the relationship. they can’t be with anyone else but each other, EVER.
JKS–I’m hoping that we will get another chappy before you go. I love this story. I just hope Bette doesn’t regret doing the deed.
Wow, I was expectiong Bette to hold out longer, but was most pleased with the result. It’ll be interesting to see what unfolds. Have a great vacay.
HOTT AS HELL!!!! but was kinda hoping they won’t have sex yet, the build up was intense. it would’ve been nice to see them part after such a horny ass morning!!!!
I had to re-read this chapter at least 3x in a row because it is sooooo good. I Can’t get enough of this excellent fic swimmie. I hope you post again before your vacation. I can’t wait til september. I need more please. I think Bette held out as long as she could(which was pretty long if you ask me). Tina has been sweeping her of her feet for a while now,so it was only a matter of time before she fell.They were both taunting each other, and playing these teasing games. Good morning loving was soo HOT. I need more loving in the fic please.
Oh wow, that was awesomely written! Thanks jks. But i think it’s a little too soon for them to be together. Hope that you’ll be able to post another before wednesday… :) Enjoy your holiday!!
Only you could find a way for them to make love in a PG-13 chapter. I thought / hoped Bette would stick to her resolve. I didn’t want her to give in to her desires this soon; let Tina pursue her just a little while longer. Now that’s all shot to hell! Now that they have done the deed, does this mean they are in a full relationship or is Bette still thinking they are going to just “date?”
Stories like these are the best, well written, you leave us begging for more, panting at the finish line…regardless of the rating, pg or nc…all I want is more, more and then some more, oh, god pls post another by wednesday!!!
brilliant as always. Thanks for the post, but now we have to wait to long. Have a great break
Wow, you didn’t tease us too much this time. Thank you! Although I like the tease too, but we’ve waited too long for T&B to be together again. Hopefully this doesn’t bring second thoughts to either one of them. Very nice job on the writing. I can’t wait for the next chapter.
honda90 said it all. You’re so skillful in your writing that a PG-rated chapter played out as a NC-17 chapter in my mind. If you could post another before your holiday, it would be great. Are they going to regret collapsing into their desires before the painful and hard conversations? How can a couple that is so attuned to one another sexually, eff up their relationship in other matters? Tis a conundrum, JKS.
i hope we’ll get another chapter before you leave…i actually read this one holding my breath the whole time, i was expecting something to happen and it did…i think sometimes our hearts win over our minds and this little morning interlude could only reinforce their decision to date before getting together permanently…wonderful chapter, i need more too
1st……..BRB
thank goodness, i thought you were gonna tease…see you when u get back, have a fabulous holiday…
Yeah, I was definately with Tina on that one, especially since I know what a few glasses of wine does to me. ;) Thank god. If they had held off, well, I might have expired. So many are keeping B&T apart recently. Thanks, as always, for making them happy, and have a great holiday. Impatiently awaiting your triumphant return!
Ha, Bette can’t resist Tina for too long. But if I were Bette, I’d be afraid to have intimacy with Tina. Just look back at OMFG. It was a bliss then, but now it looks like a jinx or curse. :S
Hey JKS, That was wonderful. The gentleness awakening of Bette’s love for Tina was evident in every sentence. Tina’s strategy was inspired as she tenderly reminder Bette of all of the good things about their relationship. It is very pleasing the see that Tina can be the predator and win Bette over. Having the gals try to deny their growing attraction or maybe that should be renewing attraction was delightful. The dialogue sparked and dazzled as they both wanted more but were initially unsure about the speed of their reunion. The temptation proved to much and resulted in a perfect morning. Only where will the day take them? Thank you for this fabulous fan fiction. It puts a big smile on my face as your skill and talents shine through. It clearly shows the depth of emotions between Bette and Tina as well as a way home. I so hope Season 4 follows your perfect example of how to make it so. Mucho thanks, Your Loyal Fan.
Wow amazing chapter. They are wonderful and sweet, love them. OK post soon please, thanks!