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Future Perfect 11
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“There are seeds so be careful,” she said as she handed one to each of Bette and Angelica. “Ready?”
They both nodded, and in unison they all took a bite of grape.
The slightly sour taste took Angelica by surprise as she wrinkled her nose up in response. She quickly grew accustomed to the flavour and savoured the rest of it as she ate, meticulously removing the seeds.
“Can we plant another one with the seeds?” she asked.
“Let’s try that,” Tina agreed. She reached for a small shovel and dug a hole beside the original vine. “Put your seeds in there sweetie.”
Tina covered the seeds with soil and watered it carefully.
“Thanks Tina, it’s beautiful,” Bette said as she reached across with her right hand and squeezed Tina’s left
“You’re welcome.”
“Are you gonna kiss or something,” Angelica asked, unable to hide the confusion in her voice.
“No sweetie, I was just thanking your mommy for the present.”
“Is it your birthday?”
“No, it’s not,” Tina replied. “I just wanted to do something nice for your mom. She let go of Bette’s hand. It was seeming less and less likely they would have any time to talk tonight. “Is it pool time now?”
“Yay!” Angelica sprung up and then remembered the rule of not running by the pool.
“Okay go ahead,” Bette gave the final permission. “But we’re going to watch from the side instead of getting in with you, okay?”
“I’ll be fine mom,” Angelica replied over her shoulder as she walked briskly toward the water. She sat on the top step and dipped her feet in. Slowly she moved down, acclimatizing to the temperature, her back to her parents.
Bette turned to Tina and leaned towards her.
“Thank you,” she whispered, before kissing her directly on the lips. She moved away just as quickly and they both turned their attention to Angelica.
They silently rose and walked over to sit on the lounge chairs.
“Do you want one of the floating mattresses?” Tina asked.
“How can I swim if I’m on a mattress?” Angelica asked.
“You are your mother’s daughter,” Tina laughed.
They watched silently, discussing not much of importance, while their daughter played the rest of the afternoon away.
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Loved it. Angelica is too cute “Are you two going to kiss”, they should have said yes. They have a lot to put behind them, but I know they have enough love to get past it. It might be a little bumpy along the way, but they can do it.
Wow, that was good. Thanks!
Loved it JKS.Always wonderful.Soo sweet and warm. So much love, but there’s also so much Hurt to get over. I’m glad they’re talking about some of their heavier problems. Angelica is sooo cute. Just adorable. I want them to be a family again, i think Angie wants it more than us. Happy to have you hack from Vacat. Post soon!
Nicely done! It’s good to see they haven’t been completely thrown by the uh, morning’s activities. Hey, whose fabulous idea was that, anyway?
Glad you are back. Absolutely love this story. Can’t wait for more.
My favourite time of the day is to have B and T play with A…..luv it….
So nice to come back and read your writing again. Kudos!
“What was your favourite part of today?”…clearly, it was seeing a posting from you, Fins. Hope you enjoyed your holiday. Looking forward to your next post.
so good! thanks for the post!
Thanks JKS for an update hope they will be alright
[“We can’t keep trading hurt to make us even…” ] Very wise words; let’s hope they are put into practice. Wise writing!!
Yes indeed, progress is being made. Got to tackle the tough stuff. Not easy, but it must be done if anything worth having is to be achieved.
Great as always. Hope we would see a new chapter very soon. :P
oh yes your back, i missed this story. Thanks for posting.
jks…Yea! you’re back. I love this story and your writing. Please post as soon as you can. I loved the game they played before tucking in for the night. So sweet.
Thanks for the update. Angelica is so funny! I’m glad Bette and Tina are finally talking through some of their problems. There is hope for them yet.
It was a happy dance in Columbus, OH. You and Jwet in one sitting…thank you for this wonderful update
I loved this line: “They sat for a few minutes, guardians of her happiness, both quietly hopeful that there were more such days in their future together.” Thanks for continuing this wonderful story.
Swimmie, that was great, WOW. You make me feel everything that they are feeling. I read this chapter at work thi smorning and could not comment at the time. Angel is just darling, so grownup nd childlike at the same time. And knows just how to work her mother’s. Thank you for usch a tender and loving story and yes I know they will make the reconciliation work, it has to for Angel and for each of them because they belong together. Thank God for fanfiction writers like you that love our girls and want to keep them together. Thank you again.
This is great and can’t wait to see more about them talking. Ok post soon please, thanks!
Thank you for the update. They really do love one another if they can even stand to be in the same room after all that they have done to one another. I am glad that they still can share so much passion and love for each other that they can begin to try and reconnect.
Great Update!!! Thank you
“Are you two going to kiss?” Even Angelica can feel the love and passion her Moms have for each other. Thanks for posting JKS.
Ohhhhhh….you should let me give you an ‘A’, 5 stars!!!! …Going directly from SNS to your story, I marvel at the range of voices on this site. The characters names the same, but their tones are so different. It’s like what Zora Neale Hurston’s character Phoeby said about love, …”Love is lak de sea. It’s uh movin’ thing, but still and all, it takes its shape from de shore it meets, and it’s different with every shore.”…Thank you, immensely!
those issues will be there but talking is good and forgiveness is good…angie is cute and i hope their little family will be whole soon
YAYYYYYY!!! You’re back. Thanks for the update.
Welcome back and I’m sorry you’ve so much work….just quit your job and write all day LOL. Loved this post, great that they are communicating. Post as soon as possible please….
great they’re talking…and Angelica’s going to get them there…PPS
Now, that’s a really great update, JKS ! As usual, I must add. Pleeeease post ASAP !
just love it as always. glad your back. thanks.
just SO good — sigh
“What was your favourite part of today?” Bette asked. It was a game they played whenever she was tucking her in. “Me and Mommy came over to play,” Angelica replied, as she drifted off. She forced herself awake to finish the game. “What was your best part Mom?” “You and Mommy came over to play,” Bette replied quietly. AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW! :) Man I had to go back and see what happened in the last chapter after the mention of finding something a lot more fun. I was thinking, “We didn’t get an NC-17 so it wasn’t sex.” WRONG! lol
Hey JKS, More delight and then a little heartache. The naturalistic and open dislogue between Bette, Tina and Angelica was priceless. The ease was there as was the love and adoration. Angel certainly has the wisdon of a child with ther “Are you two going to kiss?” comment. You had me falling off my chair. It was pleasing to see both gals attempt to clear the past from their minds and gain some form of closure from past difficulties and memories. At least they are talking them through now. The rawness of this scene was poignant. Thank you so much for this latest magnificent update. Your Loyal Fan.
Thanks for the Update – looking forward to more JKS!
Glad to see you back! I’ve been reading your wanted story in the mean while. It’s a great one too. The two alphas make a very sexy couple. =)
Just another reader wanting you to know that I’m reading and love’n it…tks JKS
Great as always. Seeing a posting from you after all this time sure picked up my day! I’m glad that they’re together and relatively happy, working through things together, rather then just ignoring them or, well, being apart… Sorry, I’m not very coherent today. Fantastic. ‘Nough said. :)
Thank you for posting. They have alot to work out and I am glad you aren’t rushing it. I am glad one or both of them didn’t run away when the convo got rough. Please post soon.
Exquisite!