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Future Perfect 8
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“Good morning,” Tina answered. She noted the caller ID before taking the call.
“You are relentless,” Bette started. “Did you leave the perfume strips this morning or last night?”
“I’m glad you’re appreciating all my hard work!” Tina laughed. “But I told you…”
“I know, ‘all’s fair in love and war’,” Bette finished Tina’s sentence. “Just one question though… How did you manage to change the elevator music in my building?”
“You’re kidding?”
“Not kidding,” Bette replied.
“Well, I guess the Gods are on my side, because I had nothing to do with that one.”
“And just how much did that dedication cost you? We have a child to put through college you know.”
“Good news there, I donated two escorted visits to an in production movie set for the radio station to auction off at their annual fundraiser.”
“Can I expect more surprises over the course of the day?” Bette asked.
“Count on it.”
“Care to offer any hints?”
“Now that would take away some of the fun, wouldn’t it?” Tina replied mischievously.
“I have a low tolerance level for surprises,” Bette commented dryly.
“No surprises. Just…” Tina considered her next word very carefully. “Reminders.”
“If you know me so well, I’m sure you know where my mind has been for approximately the last 30 minutes,” Bette said quietly.
“I hope you’ve been thinking about the day we spent in Malibu,” Tina replied with a smile. “Followed by the night we spent together.”
“The music. The perfume you wore that day. How can I think of anything else?”
“I’ve been thinking of that day and so many others for three months so I thought it was your turn.”
“I’ve spent a long time trying to forget some of those days,” Bette said seriously. “I thought they were all in the past.”
“Those days are in the past,” Tina was equal to her demeanour. “But nothing’s stopping us from having days that rich in our future. I’m simply trying to get you to recognize the possibility of what we can have again.”
“Duly noted,” Bette replied. “It would seem as though I have a formidable adversary.”
“If such memories didn’t move you, there wouldn’t be any point would there? Tina asked.
“Again, an excellent point,” Bette admitted. “Your demonstration was much more effective than any argument.”
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1st……BRB
awesome
swim, how are you? Just logged in and presto, new chapter! Big smile, as always, for your stories:) I must admit that I have absolutely no idea how long you intend to drag this one out….how long can Bette hold out on Tina at this rate???? Loving your writing, as always….keep up the great work! Enjoy your weekend!
I’m speechless….you are one romantic soul. This chapter was breathtakingly beautiful and sensual. You had me from the time Bette turned on the radio. Such a creative opening.I hope you have a special someone that can partake in your intimate thoughts and imagination. How fortunate that person would be!
WOW!!! JUST AS GREAT AS EVER!!!!! THANK YOU PPS
That’s right Tina…work for it…take us on your journey. I am so enjoying this. Please post soon.
It’s good to see Bette being wooed… by Tina. =P
Its so nice to work so hard for something and when you get it its your.because you did work for it Go Tina. thanks
I’m with missyang. Enjoying Tina being the chaser!! She’s sure as hell dragged up some beautiful memories in Bette. Now, how is Bette going to focus on her date tonight?! Looking forward to the next chapter and enjoy your weekend too!
Swimmie, as always, excellent writing, superb in its ability to tantalize the reader. Boy, I sincerely hope you have someone in your life with whom to share this marvelous romanticism. Is the email from Tina or is she gonna walk in Bette’s office and surprise her again. I actually thought you might have had her sitting there in just a raincoat waiting for Bette, especially with the perfume. Just wonderful. Thanks.
Well, if you’re going to spend the day waiting for the other shoe to drop, one should hope it’ll be the dainty slipper Bette awaits.
Swim, you are too much. As missyang said, “it’s good to see Bette being wooed.” I love that simply because its always been Bette going after Tina. Wow, are you this romantic in your personal life? If so, someone is extremely blessed to have you!!
delicious.
hmmmmmmmmmmm let me guess Tina sent the email………
Damn thats hot and can’t wait to see they see each other again. OK post soon please, thanks!
I am not sure how I can put into words the emotions that this story and chapter have stirred inside of me. As a B&T fan this story has brightened the shadow that was cast on this couple by season 3. Thank you for lifting the spirits of this Tibette heart.
waooo! it was amazing! Tina know how to keep Bette thinking in her! excellente chapter!
I have to wonder if there is more than just perfume you buy in the shop on those strips. ;)
I love the way Tina is FIGHTING for her Bette! And those memories, oh so sexy!
i bet the message was from Tina LOL…anyway, i love Vivaldi but my favorite is Allegro from Winter concerto…because it’s gets so intense…i love story, Tina’s not going to give up and i hope Bette will soon
surprises surprises
Another wonderful chapter Swimmmie. So sensual, and absolutely beautiful. .I’m loving it. I don’t care how long it takes, just as long as you keep writing,i’ll be reading. Tina is trying so hard to get her love back! Wish Bette would’ve done the same after Candace. But i love the romantic side of Tina so i can’t stop. Post soon!
Good to have you back. Great writing.
Well Tina is certainly making sure that Bette will be thinking of her while on her date!!!…and have too say the music you`ve picked is one of my favorites pieces…Nice one…look forward to more soon!
Date tonight… what date tonight… she better tell tara to call and cancel for her… love this…
Well, well, well… what a wonderful way to end the day! :)
WOW I absolutely loves how you’re taking your time with our girls, the pace is soooo slow, but it’s REEEEALLY great, beautiful, romantic and amazing….I’m sure it will make it all more sweet in the end :o)) I’m totally addicted Swimmie, like I’m with all your writing. Looking forward to what Tina has in store for Bette for the rest of the day :o))
HEy JKS, That was truly scrumptious! The walk down memory lane is a fasinating journey as Tina using every sound and smeel to evoke their happiness and contentment. This reverie into their first time was glorious as Tina forced the issue and then allow Bette to lead the way and then prove to be an apt pupil as she returned the delight. This story is wondrous; full and overflowing with romance and magic. Tina is on a mission here and hopefully winning Bette over in the process. Awesome!!! More please as soon as you can because this type of hopefulness is inspirational and a pleasure to read. Thank you so much for showing that there may be a way back for these gals. Your Loyal Fan.
I am enjoying this tale quite a bit. : )
Wow! That chapter rocked! More please!
I love this story!!! Keep up the awesome work!!!
JKS…have I mentioned it is so wonderful to you back with this story. Lovin’ it.
This was scrumptious! More please! I can’t wait to see what Ms.Tina has in store for Bette!
I love your writing! You are so creative. Tina leaving a trail of memories for Bette is so romantic. I can’t wait to read about what Tina still has in store for Bette’s “reminders.”
ah swimmie what a way to go to bed. hmmmm wonderful sensations. love the pursuit of bette. thanks.
Wow, another great chapter. Thanks! Tina is relentless i see. Let’s see how she continues … :)
All I can say is, WOMAN, YOU CAN WRITE!!!! Thank you.
okay, so obviously i’m a little late on this one…however. great chapter (duh!) and “care to fool around” is totally my next pick-up line! bonus points for using ubiquitous.