Alice: Wellurmno, but you didnt see himso much blood Alice began to weep again and her body started to shake. She felt panicked and she thought she was going to pass out. Bette helped Tina catch her, and they walked her over and set her in a chair. Tina held her tight and nodded toward Bette. Immediately Bette understood and stood up to find a doctor or nurse so that she could find out exactly what was going on.
Bette: Excuse meumNurse? Bette walked up the receptionist. She explained what she knew about the accident to her and asked if the guy was still alive. The nurse held her finger up annoyed.
Nurse: Look if you aint got a name than I cant help youcan I? The nurse chided Bette, and turned back to the ***** novel she was reading.
Bette started to really lay into her, when a young doctor with long blond hair stepped into the waiting room. Her green scrubs showed a small splatter of blood across her shoulder. She cursed herself for not changing it before coming out here.
Doctor: Alice Pi the doctor struggled with the last name. Alice quickly stood up and raised her hand stepping up to the doctor. She couldnt speak and was very pale. Im Dr. Allen. Your friendshes in surgery. Its a good thing you found her; someone really took a ball bat to her. The doctor grimaced at remembering the bruising of the words Louisville backwards across the womans small chest. Her brother had a Louisville Slugger as a kid, and she immediately recognized the writing. Shes in surgeryand in critical condition, not out of the woods yetHer left leg is broken in three places, both her femur and tibiaher left wrist is shattered as well as her fingers. She has three broken ribs various cuts and bruises up and down her body. She has some internal bleeding, and one of the ribs punctured her left lungIm afraid her nose and collar bone are both broken as wellshe lost a lot of blood, and we are continuing to replenish itshe didnt have any I.D. so I was hoping you could give me her name. The doctor watched Alice face, and it registered nothing but shock. She fell into the chair directly behind her.
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Wow! Great beginning. Please continue.
Awww how sweet. Really nice start. Please do continue.
Awesome start!! I love it..please keep going =)
I mos def liked the ending
Im glad I took a gamble to read this story. I cant wait to read on.Thanks
Wonderful, wonderful, wonderful. Please continue. Very creative!!!
Jennifer Bealser. Hee hee. Cute.
GREAT START POST SOON
OMG! This is great!