Alice: Heyyou! Alice came in to the room and slumped in the seat by the bed. You wont believe the day I had at workfucking awful! Alice started to chat away at the girl immediately, as if she had known her all her life. She held her hand, and squeezed occasionally out of habit. The Doctor had finished the process of bringing her out of her coma, but the girl was still unconscious. Most of the tubes had been removed, but the respirator was still there, helping her injured lung heal. The bruises that were once black with various cuts in them were healing, and had turned a light shade of green.
Alice looked down at the girl. What happened to youwho did thiswhy? Alice asked the same question everyday, always bringing fresh tears to her eyes. She wiped them away with the back of her hand, and started to tell her about her awful day at work.
After awhile Alice felt herself drift off to sleep, she fell into the same nightmare that had plagued her since the accident. ~~~ Her pulsed raced as she drove in her car, her windshield wipers on full blast. Everything around her was moving in slow motion in black and white except for the rain, which fell crimson red from the sky. She would roll down her window, after her wipers would quit on her, and reach out to push them up, always glancing up in time to see the young woman roll on her hood and grab Alices arm harshly~~~At this point Alice would wake up shaking and crying.
Slowly Alices breathing returned to normal, and she turned to look at the beautiful girl on the bed. The young woman had dark brown hair, quickly growing out of its boyish cut. Her lips seemed full, but it was hard to tell because of the tube. Her nose no longer had anything on it, and Alice was impressed at how straight it was considering what it had looked like that night.
Alice: Damn these doctors do nice workmaybe I should look in to getting my own nose done? She squeezed the hand again on instinct, and was surprised when it squeezed back. What the Alice looked down and saw the girl struggling to open her eyes.
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Wow! Great beginning. Please continue.
Awww how sweet. Really nice start. Please do continue.
Awesome start!! I love it..please keep going =)
I mos def liked the ending
Im glad I took a gamble to read this story. I cant wait to read on.Thanks
Wonderful, wonderful, wonderful. Please continue. Very creative!!!
Jennifer Bealser. Hee hee. Cute.
GREAT START POST SOON
OMG! This is great!