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    Go Ahead, I Don’t Need You _ Chapter Seven

    Story written on May 28, 2005 by Soseover.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=54237
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    Bette… Will you marry me?

    Alice : Yeah, I know. She sounds happy. You know what this means right?

    Dana : Yeah, Bette is a pimp. It our first day here, and shes already getting some. (mumble) Unlike me.

    Alice : (playfully punch Dana on her arm) Hey, I heard that. (she smiles) Its not my fault, its not like I planned for it to come , today.

    Dana : (hugs her girlfriend) Im just kidding baby. So, what were you saying?

    Alice : Well, now, we can tell Bette about Laurel. It sounds like she may have gotten over Laurel, after all.

    Dana : (smiles) Yeah, you right. I wonder who this woman is, though?

    Alice : I dont know, but I have a feeling that Bette will introduce her to us.

    Dana : Yeah, I know.

    Alice : Come on, lets go.

    Dana : Yeah. (takes her girlfriends hand, and walk to their room, which is next Bette)

    ————–

    Back in the room. The fight had ended, no winner was declared. The two women are sprawl on the bed. Their legs entwine, and like little children, playing footsey. They laugh. They talk.

    Tina : So, how long are you staying?

    Bette : For two weeks, I just got here today. And you ?

    Tina : Ive been here for a week, Im also leaving in two weeks.

    Bette : (smiles) Thats great, you should show me around, since youve been here a week now.

    Tina : I can, if you want me to.

    Bette : I want. (takes Tinas hand, looks at Tina) So, this trip, business or pleasure.

    Tina : Pleasure, we all need time to relax from all the dramas, right?

    Bette : Yeah, I know, what you mean. (she smiles) Now, tell me, where are heading to, after your trip is over.

    Tina : Home. California. West Hollywood, to be exact.

    Bette : No way. What a coincidence.

    Tina : (chuckles) Yeah?

    The two women talk continue talking for hours, about their careers, about their hobbies. There was not a moment of awkwardness between them. They talked, like theyve known each other forever.

    Tina : (turn to look at Bette) Bette?

    Bette : (still staring at the ceiling) Yes?

    Tina : (inhale a deep breath) Will you marry me?

    Bette : (whip her head so fast, you could hear it cracking, to look at Tina) What?!

    ……..TBC…….. (Eh, soon, maybe, I dont know. Depends…)

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    1. The story itself is good but you have way too much of this statment included “The beautiful blonde” I thought there were 3 people in that instead of just Bette and Tina. Nonetheless I was interested and still am……I’m looking forward to more.

    3. Attention everyone, I will no longer use the words “the beautiful blonde” in this story ever again. I think I over used it, since chapter two. (Truth be told, I, myself, was getting sick of it, but I’m very anal. And once I set myself up to do things a certain way, I’ll keep doing it.) So, I had them, finally introducing themselves, so there’s no more reason for me to use “the beautiful blonde” anymore. And Thank God! If, it bothered you, think of me. I had to write it over and over, again.

    4. I´ve to choose…hmm that´s really not easy :-) so I really love this story too but the other one is just my favourite one. So please post a chapter of “You will pay for this” first :-) But I´m also looking forward for the next chap of this great story.

    5. Hey girl….great chapter….you make me laugh so much! and like them indroducing themselves to each other….very good. thanks for entertaining us and please more soon. catch you later i hope.

    6. You really are something Sam. And I enjoyed hearing the beautiful blonde since I am one. :) Seriously tho, I am speechless. I am not sure what I’m trying to say about this story but something about it reached up to Smacked me. LMAO…. J/K.. It was really really NICE..

    8. WTF. Tina, bambino, slow down, one step at a time. Tina is just off the hook in this story. But I love it. She must be Italian in this one. One min shes hitting, spitting (triflin’) or biting Bette the next shes kissing her, then asks her to marry her. Its a good thing I’m a fan of heavy drama or I would have a headache. I must admit though your response to my comment made me just a tad nervous. But you know I’m here right along with this story 100%. Do your thing babygurl, and tell your story.

    10. hi Soseover! Just as Atg11 your my fav writer! I love both of your storys! So post soon!(That also goes for “You will pay for this”) And again 5 stars;)

    15. Good chapter. Bette and Tina so cute and glad they introducing themselves. Damn Tina is Black belt in Teakwondo and Karate, wow she can kick Bette’s ass anytime she want huh. Ok now she ask Bette to marry her ok what’s going here, well I guess we have to wait for the next one. Post soon, thanks!

    16. WHOA, is tina a stalker??? So you have not told us how she knows bette. And by the time they leave that room every one on the island is going to think they are into some heavy S&M shit they must look like they just got out of the boxing ring. Great job keep it up!!

    17. A couple of comments. 1. I trulty like your story You really got me laughing in this rollercoaster ride. Our dear Bette may seem to been in trouble way over her head with this aggressive Tina. Very good since Bette always have been the aggressor, it´s nice to see her on uncommon ground. I am also excited to see where wé will be headed next.

    18. OK Sose, slow down a bit….marriage. Holy shit that was fast. Is Tina in a hurry or am I jumping to conclusions.
      The sweater is finished if you have the next chapter ready girl. Really execellent story. Keep it up and post soon

    20. Hey Thank you for posted again I love
      it I’m still reading I just missed a lot of reading I just 3 days NO Acces in the Site at all so I’m still reading keep it going Please.

    22. Ladies do not sweat, they glow. Neither do they hit, bite, pinch or kick.
      I think pillow fighting is A-okay, though. As long as it’s not with those tempurpedic ones – they are heavy as hell!
      I’m with Tina, might as well forgo formalities and cut to the chase! They could be on their honeymoon for the next two weeks right there in the hotel!
      P.S.: I wish my screenname was Momo. I like that name.

    23. well….I try to read all the stories here, but sometime work gets in the way of my reading!

      Great story…I like how Tina is so confident. And I like the throwback line by Alice to Dana…..hee.hee.

      btw: do you live in Hawaii or you just been here?

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