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God she’s beautiful chpt 13.
Bette: I’m not much of a cooker. But I am a big eater
Tina: I don’t doubt you. If anything I with you on that one
Bette: Yeah you eat alot too?
Tina: Yes. But sometimes though. How long have you lived here?
Bette: I’ve been here for about 3 years so far. I bought it 6 months after I first came to L.A.
Tina: Did the pool come with it?
Bette: Oh no. I had the pool built. I paid a contractor to do it. I always wanted my own pool but now since I had it for so long I really don’t use it
Tina: Oh well I guess tonight you two will be aquainted again
Bette: You mean all three of us
Tina smiles
Tina: That’s right
The water begins to boli and Tina adds the rice…She opens the can of greenbeans and puts them in the already warm pot…She checks on the chicken…
Tina: It’s amost done in like 10 more mintutes
Bette: I’m in no rush
Tina makes the gravy…She brings it to a boil…She adds mushrooms and lets it simmmer some more…The alarm beeps on the oven…Tina opens the door and adds the the gravy and the smothered mushrooms…She lets it bake for 10 minutes more…The rice is done and so is the green beans…She has to wait on the chicken
Tina: The chicken will be done in a few minutes
Bette: I can’t wait. It smells wonderful Tina
Tina: Thanks just wait until you taste
Tina takes the chicken out of the oven…She places it on the table…She gets the rice and green beans as well
Tina: Hot! Whoa boy that baby’s cooking
They both watch as the steam rose from the chicken
Tina: Bette where are you plates and silverware?
Bette: You’ve done enough. Why don’t you have a seat and I’ll get them
Tina: Thank you
Tina sits down at the table…Bette comes back with the plates and silverware and a lighter too…She lights the candles after she places the items on the table
Tina: I’ve never had dinner by candlelight
Bette looks at Tina
Bette: Where have you been? He’s never done this for you?
Tina: No
Bette: Never
Tina: Never
Bette: It’s a shame he’s wasting his time and energy into the wrong thing
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Ahhhhh! No you did not stop there! LOL Yes, I want more, please. I am SO enjoying this stroyline.
Jesus that was mean! lol leaving us like that ofcourse we want more…. and soon lovin it!
There is no need to be rude and just stop like that. Yes, more please.
That was SOOOOOOOOO not right…i clicked next page a few times before i realized it was actually the end….totally missed the tbc… and um YES more! plz
You cannot end with “anything you want to do, thats if” and just leave us there. The torment, the pain, your killin us. Of course we want more.
Want more? you love to tease us don’t you…please give us more…soon
I LIKE SOME MORE PLEASE……
No more, I’m full, thanks…ARE YOU ON CRACK?! As if you need to ask! Please continue…like NOW!…………please????
Do you even have to ask? Yes I want more and ASAP. Good Job.
You can NOT stop there. Love it, can’t wait for more.
That was kind of mean! Of course we want more. This is an excellent story! Kiitos!
moonshadow – thanks for that. just spewed my drink all over my monitor.
yes you must be on crack. so , yes we want more.
Oh my God! Do we want more? Ugh!!! Hurry up, you’re killing me here.
Stop playing.u kno we like it..Hell yes we want more & the sooner..the better..Post so0n..
No thanks, you can stop the story here. Are you kidding me, of course we want more, as a matter of fact you can end the “G” rating material from here on out. Live it, love it and want more of it. Thanks.
Noooooo ! More please !!!
That was CRUEL!! more please!
Oh come on, there should be some kind of law against doing that to loyal readers! Not fair mate and you better post soon!
aggh wtf you cant stop there thats unhuman!!!! ugghghhh continue continue pleeeeaaaase pleeaase !!!?!?! lol ok well please post soon thanx byeness<3389735892375983
you and your cliffhangers are killing me!!!! hahaha loving it.
yes more and soon please….
alright that was just mean…keep it going!!!
OMG u left u hanging there. u are so evil. of course we want more and more and more lmao
you are such a TEASE! tbc? of course continue……soon
what’s up i don’t think u need 2 ask that, everybody else seems to answer the ? 4 me but just in case heck yes i want more. thanx 4 the post.
stop that the cliff hangers!!!!!!!!!!!!! post now
What with the Teasing. Yes we would very much like to have more. We know you are now LYAO at us. thanks
EVIL!!!!!
oh my please continue don’t leave us hanging
that is so evil..SO DAMN EVIL..Pls dun keep us hangin inthere..I am waitin with burnin eyes to read the next one an its post midnight at my end ..
do u have to ask, of course we want more
Oh man you can’t leave us like this, you not nice, please post soon can’t wait to see what’s next. Thanks! Oh of couse I wanted more!
OMG! Bring it on LOL! OK! Please Thanks for posted again I can’t wait to read more Please!!
Hmm.Can you say friends with benefits.Can’t wait for more.
What kind of idiotic question is that?! Do we want more? Hell yes we want more!