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God she’s beautiful chpt. 16
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Tina pulls Bette into her…They both began kissing and hugging and tugging at one another’s clothing…Tina releases the kiss…
Tina: Your hit
She takes off running…Bette turns and looks at her…She takes off running after Tina…
Bette: Ready or not here I come
Tina runs down the bank screaming…She runs into the cool water until she can no longer feel the floor and the water is up to her face…Bette comes swimming after her…She grabs her by the waist and holds her…
Bette: Gotta cha
Tina: Yeah you did
She turns towards Bette
Tina: So is there anything that you want to know about me?
Bette: Well how many men have you been with?
Tina: Just two
Bette: That’s it
Tina: Yup. I was never really into boys that much. I loved school if anything
Bette: Wow I wish I thought like that back then. I was pretty young
Tina: Well we all were. Just as long as you can promise me that you’ll never change you will never have to worry about losing me
Bette: I’ll keep that in mind
Bette and Tina continue to play before leaving the beach a couple of hours later…They both change into their dry clothes…They both make their way to the car…Bette and Tina hop in…Bette jumps on the express way on the way back…She arrives at Tina’s in about 10 minutes flat…She pulls up front…She shuts the car off…
Bette: I really had fun T
Tina: Me too. Maybe we can catch a movie tomorrow if you like
Bette: Ok tomorrow we’ll have dinner and a movie
Tina: I like the sound of that. You wanna do lunch?
Bette: Good idea maybe you can pick the place
Tina: I’d love that.
Tina opens the door…
Bette: T?
Tina turns back around
Bette: Come here for a second
Tina closes the car door and leans into Bette…The brunette kisses her passionately…
Bette: Have a nice night T
Tina: You too. Why don’t you call me sometime. Maybe we can do something over the weekend
Bette: Ok
Tina: You have the number right?
Bette: I do
Tina: Then use it
Bette smiles
Bette: I will
Tina leans into her and kisses her another time before she exits the vehicle…
Tina: Good night Bette
Bette: Good night T
Tina closes the car door and heads up the walkway…She enters the house and closes the door…Bette pulls off into the moonlight…
TBC…How am I doing now????
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Im hooked on your story keep them coming, every chapter is better
well to answer your question your doing pretty darn good, I normally don’t comment but I do occasionally with the stories I enjoy a lot and yours is one of them so keep the chapters coming.
such a sweet moment of evenin to spend. Tina gotta tell Eric…goodbye.
I love the way Bette and Tina’s relationship is progressing. I can’t wait for Tina to tell Eric to kiss off.
You are doing beautifully. Please give us more
You doing great and please continue. Good chapter, what a beautiful surprise Tina give Bette and they are have a good time together and can’t wait to see what’s next, oh when Eric is gone, I think the sooner the better. Post soon please, thanks!
You are doing just fine….tou will do even better when you manage to get rid of Eric….for good. I have a feeling that B&T are not going to have that “consumate moment” until Eric is out of the picture. The build up is nerve racking! Five sparklers for you!
youre doing great no need to rush.. Bette can take some cold shower for a little bit more..lol..great chapter post soon thanks V
Hey I’m just catching up Whoa! It’s just really great I Love it Please continue post soon Thanks!!
Your doing great, love this story. Tina needs to end it with Eric so that she and Bette and really move on. Bette’s not gonna share. There so cute and romantic, oooooooooooooooooh I get goose bumps with those two. Keep it coming.
I like Tina’s assertiveness. Let’s see Bette in action too? Would be great if Tina walked in and Eric’s things were gone from the apartment.
You are doing great Bette and Tina seems so happy together. Now lets get rid of Eric. thanks
SWT piece of literature ‘Im luvin it’…it’s tempting, addictive, & delicious…Now lets kill the love triangle&jus ditch Eric shall we…PLEASE Post s0oN…
You’re doing good but Bette is too Type A to let her woman be shacking up with someone else. She’s like the King of the Jungle and Tina literally is her pride. It’s a little odd that she’s this understanding. Bette’s not into sharing anything that’s hers…especially anything to do with Tina, the one she loves. So it’s time to either have Bette put her foot down or have Tina kick eric to the curb!
just caught up. you are doing great. love this B&T beginning they are so sweet together
You are doing wonderfully. Love this story. Post soon please.
Absolutely – Positively – Great !
Thanks for writing – Love This.
You’re doing great! I like this playful Bette and Tina, too much stress is not good for anyone! I would like to see Tina come clean w/ Eric and move things along w/ Bette. We know there’s chemistry between the two of them, now lets see that ignite.
Keep up the great work!
Good Stuff. Keep it going.
This chapter was very, very good. Vakkav, I just love this new begining for Bette and Tina, it is soooo cute and I love that they are spending a lot of time together. I hope that the opening of Bette’s Gallery will not ruin anything with them. Great chapter and I can’t wait for the next chapter girl. Buh-bye. :-)
this was just plain fun and sweet. they are so cute together. love the way your writing this. keep up the great work.
When.I tell you this is a good fucking story, omg I’m so.in love with Tina right now she is just awesome, so carefree and the way you write her…in intrigued to the max