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God’s Gift- Pt 21
I wanted to talk with Tina before we had dinner so she followed me to the bedroom. I rest my bag down and sat on the edge of the bed and the tears began to flow. She came to me and cradled my head on her stomach. “I never forgave myself for what I put you through. I thought that if I put it behind me and if you forgave me it would make it easier. But now its like bringing up a part of my life I wished I could have erased and I have to explain something I am ashamed of, something I don’t even have a reason for doing. I am afraid that if I tell Annie what I did, she would hate me and I cant handle disappointing her like that too.”
“I’m sorry I brought it up with Annie. We were talking and”
“What exactly did you tell her?” I interrupted.
“I told her that I know how it feels to be hurt by someone you love and I would hate for her to experience that.”
“Oh.”
“Bette, she sees how much we love each other now, that’s the important thing.”
“I guess.”
“Maybe she’ll forget.”
“Its Annie you’re talking about.” I tried to smile and she caressed my face.
“I love you so much.”
“I love you too.” I dried my face of any evidence of tears, “Aiden told me he helped cook?” I asked as we left the room.
“Yeah, they did dinner for us. God help us.”
“Good maybe we’ll die then we wont have to tell her.” That got me a smack on the butt.
***Angelica***
We had dinner. And which I might add was surprisingly delicious. Its not my mom’s cooking but we were close enough. I noticed Bette was a bit preoccupied over dinner and Tina kept watching her closely like she was expecting something. I asked her if everything was ok and she assured that all was well. So in light of that I felt that I could bring up the subject. I waited for Renee and Aiden to leave before bringing it up. They asked me to join them in the bedroom to which I complied.
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(36 votes, average: 3.83 out of 5)
I love this, well written, it has brought a tear to my eye too!!!!
be careful what you ask for you just might get it. will you like it??
Don’t push to hard ,the ending might not be what you want to hear. Well writte.and understandable good. A 16yr old could under it. I hope.
oh my that was tough remember the past when you dont even know that to expect to the other person..i hope Angie be able to understand and forgive Bette great chapter post soon please cant wait for more :o)
GREAT chapter..please post soon .,.
That was so good. Its hard to talk to teenagers but usually if your just straight with them there pretty cool. They just want the truth like most of us. Nice ending.
K
Wonderful chapter. Can’t wait for more.
BnTfan,
Bloody marvellous!
Finding out that your parents are humans with frailties and failing is a very tough pill to swallow however it is not healthy to idolized them either.
The openness and honesty displayed in this story is what helps get you through. The truth will set you free.
Finding out about Bette’s affair, Tina’s relationship with Helena and the miscarriage shows Angelica that you can fail but by following your true desires with a determination to succeed you can move on and build something stronger.
Thank you for keeping it real.
Please post soon as I am completely addicted to this fabulous fan fic.
Your Loyal fan
Very good chapter. I agree with techgal, I don’t think that it is up to Angelica to forgive Bette or not. What happened between Bette and Tina before she was born is thier business and Angelica should not have a say in it. She does not have a right to question thier love for each other.
well not as bad as it could of have been.
Good job and I would have expected them to both have a ultrasound pic.
That is so cute and sad all at the same time! I can understand why Angie is upset, I would be to but I hope she can get over it coz Bette’s hurting enough as it is!
I’m of the opinion that intimate parts of the parents’ marriage belong only to the parents. They don’t owe their children an explanation for the intimate details, failings or betrayals, of their relationship. Are they good parents to the child? Are they providing a good, stable home? Yes? Then what occured in the past is none of the child’s business.
However, this is your story. Please continue!