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Going Brit
PREVIOUSLY
“Bloo-dy hell Helena you call this a roof?!! This is amazing!”
“Well obviously I’ve made it my own over the years, made certain changes and what no. When I first came up here, it was completely bare and rather tortured looking, I lay in the middle of the floor and just looked up, out into the night sky, It’s like I could relate to the emptiness that emanated from the building and I knew I’d found my comfort. I went and sat on the ledge and just watched the world go by, I felt a sense of calm rush over me and after a couple of hours I was ready to go back and face reality… would you like me to show you around?"
“Please do”
“Right then… over under the sheltered sector we have the ‘Recreation realm’, as you can see it consists of a punch bag, the double bed, a selection of my favourite books shelved to the side of the bed and a small pool table towards the centre…”
“I didn’t know you played pool”
“I love the game, and I like to think I play with quite a dexterous flair. I had initially decided not to bring the table up here because I knew I wouldn’t have anyone up to have a game with but I find it calms my nerves to just shoot the balls around so I eventually had it brought up.”
“And it would also appear that you now do have someone to play with”
“Indeed I do, just as long as you give me a game of pool after we’re done… playing” Helena replied with a sexy smile
“And you say I have a one-track mind”
“Are you denying that you do?”
“No, I’m just saying I’m not the only one”
“And what a stroke of luck that is… come on let me show you the rest before I have my way with you”
CHAPTER 4
***flashback continued***
Helena led Bette across to the other side of the roof, passing the bar area, which was located against the raised ledge between the two obvious sectors. They stopped in front of a curtained off section that rose slightly above their heads. Helena went around the side and flicked a switch, before walking back to Bette
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(73 votes, average: 3.95 out of 5)
aw i loved it!! you had the perfect mix of love and sex in that scene..*sigh* quick post the next chapter and let us see them kiss and make up! :) awesome stuff babe, thanks, can’t wait for more!
Beautiful!! Simply beautiful. She should have had the camera. Great chapter. I love it. You’re good at this
oh waw Darkie this was really worth the wait. it was so beautiful, never ever dare say you can’t write babe cause you sure CAN !!!! Post soon please
hey that was great i hope they can make up in the next chapter. I wish Helena wouldve had her camera to because that would have been a great pic i know
Never thought I would be saying this…but please let them make up. I love your writing…you have a Tibetter wanting a Belena makeup. Damn!
okay, that was fantastic, but uhh, how can you leave us hanging like that? thanks for the post. PLEASE post soon!
I am a TiBette fan like skycaptain. And like her, I love this story. I find myself wanting a happy Belena story. I can’t believe I am even writing this. Damn, your good Dark Angel!! LOL
OMBG babes! What a HOT HOT HOT chapter!!! That’s definately cold shower material!!! BIG TIME!!! Everyone’s tying for this BELENA LOVING TROPHY!!! That was absolutely HOT! Definately glad that you’re back! ;) POst soon!
This story gets better with each post. Very lovely story
who knew pool could be so fun…LOL. “As you wish” great line!
I only have three words to say….SIMPLY THE BEST!
Wow that was awesome!!!!!!
Very good DA; verrrrrrry good!!! What I thought was extremely imaginative of you was the way you had Helena’s pictures displayed – a timeline of her life, and moments captured it in. QQ’g 4wrd 2 the next 1….
Ok, I am getting a better feel for the roof top get away. Left brained Helena, cool. Soon enough? Hey, I am just glad you came back. Well, since you asked…. the only thing that would have been better is a mini-marathon post. Feel up to it? Enjoying your story. Please come back soon.
pwahaha I totally forgot Bette was upset with those flashbacks of yours…but now that I remember they do…next post…