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    Going Brit

    Story written on February 20, 2007 by DarkAngel452.
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    BeLena Chapter 7

     

     

    “I can’t believe this, Alice why can’t you see that this is obviously a cry for help by Bette, I mean she completely loathed the woman… it just doesn’t make sense”

     

     

    “God Tina would you listen to yourself, you’re going on like a broken record, change the tune already!  Bette’s a big girl with a good head on her shoulders, she’s not crazy and she’s perfectly capable of deciding who she should and shouldn’t marry.  And really, Shane’s right what business is it of yours anyway?

     

     

    “I was with her for eight years Alice, I care for her well being”

     

     

    “Oh. My. Fucking. God!!! Are you kidding me?!  Tina, you took her daughter away from her, she was the centre of her world and you just ripped her away from her.  Bette was distraught, a damn near broken woman, she didn’t eat, she didn’t sleep, she barely spoke to anyone, she must have lost half her body mass, and you’ve got the nerve to stand there and say you care for her well being?!” Alice practically screamed at Tina, with what could be described as no less than a truly terrifying expression on her face.

     

     

    “I… I…” Tina stammered unable to formulate a response to the now frantic Alice

     

     

    “The Peabody’s however, actually do seem to care for her well-being.  Peggy offered her a job and gave her the opportunity to create a new life for herself after you practically destroyed it, and it would appear Helena’s given her a new lease for love, she’s managed to re-assemble the once broken woman… so now would you like to explain to me just how it is you think this is a cry for help on Bette’s part?”  Alice stood with her hands on her hips looking expectantly at Tina.

     

     

    “Well she…”  Tina began but was again cut off

     

     

    “And please don’t say because she hated her, because really Tina that’s just old.”

     

     

    “I didn’t know you felt this way…  I never wanted her to leave you know, I just wanted to punish her for a while… I didn’t actually think she’d leave”

     

     

    “Well what did you think Tina?  That she was going to hang around while you flaunted her daughter in her face? To be so close to the love of her life and not even able to hold her, to watch her being held in the arms of a man pretending to be her daddy? … You wanted to punish her? Well I think you managed to do that very well!  Of course she was going to fucking leave.  And the reason you didn’t know I felt this way is because I didn’t have the fucking nerve to say anything in case you decided to stop what little contact the rest of us have with Angelica because we all know that would be a dream come true for her ‘daddy’  ”

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    1. aweeee…i’m almost tempted to feel sympathy for tina–NOT!!! really liked the conversation between alice and tina…it felt real. okay, so what’s the next move for tina, you’re not gonna have her appear in the UK are you…well if you do, please allow b&h to treat her much better than she treated b…anyway, i can’t wait for your next post….ciao!

    2. As always an excellent job. It’s about time Tina take a look at herself. Damage was done on both sides in their relationship. You can only kick a person for so long before they have had enough, and in this case Bette had. So all in all who did Tina really punish other than herself and their child. Revenge may feel good in the beginning, but in the end it will just eat you up. Please post soon!

    3. Ah there you are! finally! :D And whaddya mean you weren’t happy with this? I think you did a brilliant job with this! you handled Tina and her reaction really well, Darkie. I’m glad you had Alice and Tina talk about it, and kiss n make up too **nodding** Now that THAT’s sorted, may we see our girls now, please? :) so do post soon, babe, and I’ll do the same ;)

    5. Tina got what she asked for, sometime you wait to long to decides that you aRE THE WRONG ONE, AND YOU HAVE WRONGED THE ONE YOU LOVE THE MOST. She made her bed and Bette is in someone elses bed. thanks

    6. Tina got what she asked for, sometime you wait to long to decides that you aRE THE WRONG ONE, AND YOU HAVE WRONGED THE ONE YOU LOVE THE MOST. She made her bed and Bette is in someone elses bed. thanks

    7. Well ‘ello there stranger!! Thank you so much for the update. Just between you and I, what is T gonna do? Come on, I won’t tell. Ok…ok, I’ll wait until your next post in what??? 2 days? Awww….*rubbin’ my hands together* Cool, I can’t wait!!! hehehe…Seriously, PPS

    9. She did it, she did it… happy dance… And I’m with Master V, why don’t you like it ?? It’s got everything I hoped for and more… I know how you feel about Tina, believe me ! Those passages with her in are hard to write for me too, but, girl, you’re doing great. Can’t wait to read what’ll happen next. No pressure, but PPP – aka please post pronto ;-)

    12. Oh no look who’s back. mmmm wait is this really you? I know I didn’t havemuch sleep last night so I must be dreaming right? Nope I’m not and sooo happy to see you back in BeLenaland. You weren’t hapy with this chapter you said? mmm makes me wonder why cuz it was just great dear. I could so see Alice and Tina in fornt of me and the convo was so real. You really did a good job but please promise me you are not gonna let the witch of WeHo go to the UK ok? Keep her in the states and far away from us Europeans right? Thanks a lot for posting babe so tag I guess I’m it now lol.

    13. Brilliant! Seriously great update. I’m with Shane though. I wouldn’t have been able to just bite my tongue if Tina started acting that way after all she did to Bette. It’s like she seriously didn’t realize what she did to Bette.

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