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Goodbye my lover. Chapter 1
Goodbye my lover.
Bette opened her closet and grabbed all the clothes that were hanging in it. She walked over to her bed and put the clothes she was holding into the suitcase that was lying on the bed. She walked back to the closet and opened the drawers, grabbed everything that was in it and also put it in her suitcase. When se was packed, she grabbed the suitcase of the bed and walked with it into the living room.
She went to Angelica’s crib and picked her up. “Come on sweetie.” Bette said as she grabbed her and Angelica’s jacket. She put Angelica in her high chair that was standing in the living room and quickly put her suitcase into the trunk of her blue Saab. She enters the house and as she is about to put on Angelica’s jacket someone knocks on the door.
“Shit!” Bette thought. “Who could it be?”
She walked to the door and opened it. “Hi baby sis.” Kit said. She walked past Bette into the house. “Hi Kit. What are you doing here?” Bette asked clearly annoyed. “Just checking up on you. I’m concerned about you Bette!” Kit said as she sat down on the couch. “Well everything is fine as you can see!” “Are you sure Bette? Come on talk to me!” “Look Kit, everything’s fine. And I don’t want to talk!” “Ok, sorry Bette. Look do you mind if I use your bathroom? Then I’ll be on my way.” “Sure go ahead.” Bette said.
She saw this as a great opportunity to get away. She picked Angelica out of her high chair, put on her jacket and walked out the door. She strapped Angelica in the baby seat and got in on her side. She looked back one time at the house that used to be her home. She started the car and took off.
As Kit got out of the bathroom she heard a car pull off. “Bette?” Kit yelled. No answer. “Oh no, don’t tell me that was her!” Kit said out loud. She ran into the living room and saw that Bette was gone. “Shit!” Kit said. She grabbed her cell phone and called Shane. “Shane, we have a problem!” was all she said and waited for Shane to come over.
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(56 votes, average: 3.96 out of 5)
Continue only if Bette’s just went around the block!!! lol Too much heartache for this poor couple. this story breaks my heart! so sad. well written, but sad.
please do continue, i dont think tina should have it so easy getting bette back after everything she’s put her through. would love to see what bette does next.
please do continue, i dont think tina should have it so easy getting bette back after everything she’s put her through. would love to see what bette does next.
Well if your going to continue and i hope you do..then You`ve got to make Tina fight for her woman ..im not sure how but i dont think i can take another heartbreaking story where they keep on killing each other a little at a time!!!So yeah Bette needs to get some space but not too far away…and Tina needs to work on getting her woman back…or did she push her too far…Thats down to you if your willing to continue this it was excellent thanks.
whoa thats extreme theres no way she leaving for good rite bg!
PLEASE CONTINUE!! Great start need more please
Sad…very sad and poignant…please continue.
Hehe, you should definitely check out this MV (http://www.majesticwolf.net/too_hot/season2/videos/ShanesTie_goodbye_0007.wmv). It’s not only for TiBette and made by a Sharmen fan. Absolutely brilliant and moving. Enjoy~
Well, IF they break up for good I hoe Bette goes out on top…..Tina has made her pay for too long for something she has made amends for. I don’t understand why IC has chosen to make Tina a bitch for the entire season….I have enjoyed most of the rest of the season but I miss Bette and Tina.I like your story!
You have to continue and give tina a bit of a hard time. She deserves is, but do get them together again! Any time soon….
Please continue…they belong together! Please fix this!!
badgirl…I hope you continue and bring them together. Don’t make it easy on either one..but please bring them together.
yes, continue if only bette comes back to her family…this is really sad and i just read like 3 or 4 stories with this theme today, can’t take it anymore…it well written though so please continue and make B&T happy
okay, how weird is this! I was just watching James Blunt sing this song on Oprah as I saw the title of your story. I was like OMG no way did she write a story with this song in mind. I’m reading and listening to him sing this song and I just busted out crying. Please continue this story!!!
Great chapter…Please post soon…
Damn this is fucking sad and broke my heart!!!!!!!!!
please continue…tina should fight for Bette…great start…and the song is really wonderful, sad but wonderful…
pls continue! i cannot take much more heart break!
pls continue! i cannot take much more heart break!
Please continue, Bette is gone but not for long. she just need to find herself. thanks
pls continue! i cannot take much more heart break!
I love me some Blunt ;-) this song is beautiful and seriously if this was not the realm of fantasy I think everyone would do the same thing after having experienced what this character has been through over the last 3 years. Drive away Bette be free; I won’t hate you.