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    Great Unexpectations Chapter 1

    Story written on June 24, 2007 by redhorse.
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    Season 5ish. “Bette moaned…”

    "So how’s it…", Bette began, before spotting the red pen Tina was still holding. "Oh, I remember those. Pretty bad huh?"

    "Want a stock tip? Bic. Red ink division." Tina said rolling her eyes at the so-called script on her desk. Bette smiled. She loved the easy banter that they had been able to fall into lately. There was a time when civil words between the two of them were not a possibility. She was so thankful that they were past that now.

    "So, where’s Jodi?" Tina said, hoping she sounded even remotely sincere in her inquiry.

    "She’s staying about another week. They’re not quite finished with the project yet", Bette said flatly. She was a little surprised by how much she did not want to talk about Jodi.

    Looking to change the subject, Tina asked, "Well, would you like to see your daughter?"

    "Thought you’d never ask", Bette smiled widely.

    Tina followed Bette as she quietly opened the door and peeked in at her little Boo. As she inched near her sleeping daughter tears began to well in her eyes. "I’ve missed you sweetie. Your Mama B loves you so much." She gently leaned down and softly kissed her head. She stood over her just soaking up the sight of her sweet little Angel.

    Tina slowly took Bette’s hand. "I’ll bring her over first thing in the morning. I know you two have a lot of catching up to do."

    Bette turned her teary eyes to Tina. "Thanks T." Then, clearing her throat, "Is it okay if I use your restroom?"

    "Sure. Would you like some wine?"

    "When have I ever turned down that offer?"

    While Tina was in the kitchen selecting a wine Bette was washing her hands in the lavatory. She glanced over at the bathtub which had Tina’s various toiletry items arranged neatly. Bette walked over to the shampoo bottle and picked it up. She stared at the label, remembering the cute little shop where they had found this brand. It cost thirty-five dollars a bottle, but it was so worth it. It left Tina’s hair so soft and luxurious. And it smelled wonderful. Impossibly delicious. It’s part of what made her so irresistible. Just one of the many, many parts. Bette slowly unscrewed the cap and took a gentle whiff. She closed her eyes as she allowed her olfactory senses to be invaded by this divine scent. She was snapped out of her daze by a sudden knock. "Bette, are you okay? It’s been, like, 10 minutes." She quickly replaced the cap on the shampoo and checked herself in the mirror before quickly opening the door. "Yep, fine", she said as she avoided Tina’s gaze and walked past her.

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    5. Great start. You must continue.I do believe this is a little how it’s going to end up.. although not so quickly. I think that either Jodi will realise that B&T still have intense emotion for each other and force Bette into going back to her. OR B&T will move on, and finally close the chapter on their relationship.. giving them both a chance to move on – Bette with Jodi and Tina with someone new. I do believe that if the latter happens IC will have them dicuss the end of thier relationship. That’s how I see it in my head, although I could be completely wrong :) Anyway, post more! Soon!

    11. I like this Bette who catches the subtle nuances of what is happening around her – it shows how she has changed while still remaining the same, if that makes sense. Looking forward to where you’re headed with this. Great job on your first efforts!! PPS

    21. Awesome start. Bette will be shocked, but lets see if she’s willing to face her true feelings. I mean, she’s making love with Jodi but thinking its Tina. Hello, big sign, far bigger and more of a statement than 17 Reasons.

    26. Lovely start. I really like the scene with the shampoo and familiar scents. Please all powerful writer, do not dash our hopes against the rocks. Help Tina and Bette find their way back to each other…More , please, soon?

    29. Yes a happy story is what is needed. I like how you have Tina finally verbalizing what she should have said all along. Now let’s see what Bette’s response will be.

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