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Great Unexpectations Chapter 23
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"Well, let’s put it this way. It’s ok if I’m late for work this morning, because there’s no place for me to sit."
Bette’s lips could not contain her sublime smile. "Well, T. I just hope you remember this the next time I mess up."
"And when will that be, exactly?", Tina teased.
"Anyway…", Bette dodged, still smiling and reaching for her phone. She scrolled through the numbers stored in the memory and hit ‘call’ when she found the florist. While it rang, she rolled her eyes at her own forgetfulness. "Hello. This is Bette Porter and-. Yes, the ‘thirty-minute’ lady." This exchange caused Tina to nearly guffaw. Bette’s new nickname. Bette went on to request the cancellation of the previous day’s order and to thank them for their prompt deliveries. "Yes. Of course, I will remember you for all of my floral needs. Thank you."
She flipped the phone closed. "Ok. That’s one fire out for the day. What else ya got, Kennard?"
"I’m good. Nothing else for now. But you know, Bette. This will work out quite nicely. Now I know what everybody’s getting for Christmas. Potpourri." The humor of the moment was so thick, that even Angie began to laugh at her silly mamas.
After their laughter subsided, they found themselves both looking at Angie. The child still bubbly from the laughter, but also distracted by her food. They sat on either side of her and looked into each other’s eyes. Tina was the first to speak. "Bette. Is it okay if we talk about Faye now?"
"Of course, Tina", Bette said, trying to hide her nervousness. She sensed that Tina had made her decision and an anxiety mixed with a tiny nibble of dread began to take hold. This could end up being one of those discussions that prompted another immediate call to the florist, or it could be one that would strengthen their already tight bond.
"I’m just gonna go ahead and say it. I think we should help Faye. How can we not?"
Bette looked at Tina with wide eyes. Surprised eyes. Warm, moist eyes. Recalling Tina’s reactions to Faye since that meeting at The Planet, she had not exactly expected her to agree to help Faye with anything. She’d hoped for it, but not expected it. Her eyes smiled at Tina and she spoke softly, as that was about all she could handle at the moment. "Tina. You amaze me. Constantly. I was hoping you’d say that. Are you sure you want to do this? I would understand if you want to-"
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When does the other shoe drop?
Red, honey, you are doing a fabulous job with this story. With the last bit of info from Faye it makes me a bit leary for the girls and Angie. That bastard would stop at nothing to stop anyone from doing anything to help Faye and Cora. However, he does need to be exposed and arrested. This is a mighty subject now with the possibility that the girls could be hurt. We don’t want that, now do we. Politics makes strange bedfellows has never been more true. PPS
WOW!!!! I do hope that nothing happens to B&T and there family. Thanks PPS
I’m glad they’re helping Faye and all, but still, I worry. B&T are ace, and so is this story. And lol @ the potpourri! I got that for Christmas once. It’s amazing how well I was able to fake that grateful smile. (Though I’m sure the 2 or so glasses of wine I had with Christmas lunch helped immensely.) I still have that potpourri, it sits, unused, on a closet shelf. One day, I’m sure I’ll have a potpourri-based emergency, and then…! That grateful smile will be real! Ah well, I’ll keep reaching for that particular star. I will say though that I am honestly grateful for your post, red, cos I love this story. Post soon, and thanks!
Mostly loved the morning scene. The Bette and Tina goodness..and playing with their little girl. Hope this Faye recon mission won’t be too taxing on their relationship and family life.. PPS.
I loved the morning scene too. As you (so beautifully) write them, Tina is truly the yin to Bette’s yang. Like others, I’m worried that the morally bankrupt would-be senator will screw things up for them.
Let’s rock and roll!
Expertly written; I stand in awe of your skill with the English language. Plz keep B, T and Angie safe. PPS
Scary and dangerous coming!
Well this has the possibilities of a great big mess. Lot’s of drama ahead. Love how the story is moving along. Hope Richard has his own “cleaners” available. Thanks for the post.
This is getting a little scary! B&T are so in tune with each other. I love it! PPS!!
Your writing is so descriptive that it captures me and helps me to visualize the scene. Brilliant. B & T are going to love their enemy, huh? That is such a strong verse from the bible and one that is difficult to abide by. I hope that they will be successful in their attempt to help Cora. In doing so, they need to keep their family safe and Mr. Buckley sounds like a sleaze. Any father that would put their own best interest before their own child is **and I quote*** “An obstacle that needs to be removed.” Make sure he is dealt with, will ya Red? PS.