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    Great Unexpectations Chapter 28

    Story written on October 12, 2007 by redhorse.
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    Season 5ish. Some headway. A tearful goodbye. Hitting the road.

    The day was busy. Calls were put in to their respective offices explaining the need for a little personal time without going into too much detail. They promised to be constantly available via cell phone and email. While Tina went grocery shopping Bette packed for the both of them. Reaching into the closet her eye caught something old and familiar. Not too old, but very familiar. She recalled Tina’s fondness for the power suits and smiled as she placed it into her garment bag.

    That evening the house was crowded with family and luggage. Kit and Angus were going over Tina’s meticulous list of Angie’s sleeping and eating habits. Angus was already well versed in Angelica’s itinerary but 

    listened quietly as Tina went through each item one by one. He understood that this was the only control Tina had in this moment and that the separation anxiety was at it’s peak. Bette spoke softly to Alice, Shane, and Helena. She fought the tears as she held Angie in her lap. "We’re really counting on you guys. Kit and Angus will need help. And so will Angie."

    "Bette, don’t worry", Alice said. "We love this little munchkin. She’ll be fine. You’re looking at a whole houseful of people that love her more than anything." Alice transformed the concerned, compassionate look in her eyes to sparkles of joy and delight as she turned to Angie. "We’re gonna have fun, aren’t we girl!!" Angie giggled and reached for her Aunt Alice. Bette reluctantly released her into Alice’s arms. As sad as she was to let go of her, she loved the sound of a happy Angie.

    Shane played with Angie and Alice allowing Helena to sidle up to Bette.

    "I know it’s hard, Bette", she said warmly. " Believe me, I do. But keep good thoughts. You’ll be back home before you know it. And when Angelica is old enough to understand, she’ll be so proud of you both."

    Bette bowed her head momentarily. "Thank you Helena. I hope you’re right." Helena put her arm around Bette to comfort her. Bette offered no resistance.

    Ten minutes later the door bell rang and the bustling sounds of the house came to a halt. Tina glanced at the clock on the wall and knew it was Richard and Faye, waiting to take them to the airport. With a sinking heart Bette walked to the door and opened it. Richard stood on the doorstep with Faye at his side. "Please come in", Bette said.

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    Comments

    1. oh wow am I 1st??? Not that it bothers me. Great, great, great, so sweet the good-byes and that final comment about would it have hurt for Ange to shed a few tears, love it. More when u can. Thx.

    3. Sweet. But sad. Damn, that goodbye was pretty sad. And the Jodi reminder was awful. Hope they find what they are looking for and aren’t in too much danger. PPS.

    4. Angelica may not have cried, but you had me a little choked up. Loved the chapter and that last comment. This story has been such a delightful read. Heartfelt congrats on you nomination!

    8. Could Angie be any cuter? I hope this trip is short yet fruitful. And I love that last line. Great chapter, thanks for the update, red. (And congrats on your wholly-deserved noms. Your writing’s fantastic.)

    9. That was heart warming even though a little sad. I hope that Faye will have a heart warming period with her daughter. I know I am a wus but I love happy stories.

    11. Hey, hey, Red, thanks so much for the update, I know how pre-occupied you are with dinner these days! LOL. Isn’t little O just the best thing ever? Her momma’s better be comin home in one piece or else you’re going to have a little revolution on your hands! PPS

    12. You are doing such a great job with this story and making me cry too many times. Bring them home safely to their baby and the rest of the family. The baby is so sweet and very intuitive, as most babies are. Let them find Cora soon and make her come home with them to see her mother one last time and understand that her mother could do nothing about what was happening to them. Maybe she can forgive her mother before she leaves this world. Hopefully she is not so bitter that she can understand. Post when you can.`

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