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    Great Unexpectations Chapter 3

    Story written on July 4, 2007 by redhorse.
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    Season 5ish. Tina awaits Bette’s decision.

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    Later that Same Day. Early Evening. Bette’s House.

    She was working in the kitchen. The main course was not within the scope of her capabilities, but preparing a salad? There wasn’t a head of lettuce out there that scared Bette Porter. She was carefully chopping tomatoes, peppers, and various other garden goodies when she heard the doorbell ring. She smiled. "The cavalry has arrived", she joked softly to herself as she looked at the dinner ingredients that were scattered on the counter. Bette couldn’t swear to it, but it almost appeared as though the groceries themselves were happy to be rescued from their otherwise char broiled fate.

    She answered the door and was rewarded by the sight of a blonde goddess. Bette had been awestruck by the sight of Tina on many occasions but at this precise moment she could not recall a single one. She couldn’t remember their first kiss. Their first date. Their first morning after. All she could think of was how much she wanted to take Tina in her arms right then and there and let dinner worry about itself.

    Tina was wearing a simple yet stylish light linen dress. The color was a faded sage which complimented her hazel eyes perfectly. The open neckline showed just enough cleavage to pique interest, but not so much that you didn’t appreciate everything else there was to offer. The bodice fit Tina’s curves expertly. She finished off the look with a modest sterling silver bracelet and matching necklace. Her hair was down with soft flowing curls that were gently swaying with the soft breeze. Tina waited patiently for permission to enter while holding an arrangement of white lilies in one hand and a bottle of wine in the other. Bette smiled adoringly at her as she absently dropped the dish cloth she had been wiping her hands with.

    "I take it that means I look ok?" Tina smirked.

    "Hmm?" Bette mustered.

    Tina glanced down to the floor which now had custody of the cloth.

    Bette followed Tina’s glance and found the dish cloth, full of betrayal that it was, looking up at her smugly. Bette quickly picked it up and silently admonished herself for being such an easy pawn to her own inner turmoil. The two warring emotions, Desire and Fear, were in the thick of the fight and taking prisoners. If pressed she would have to admit that although she enjoyed the furnishings of Camp Desire immensely she was a more willing captive of Camp Fear.

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    2. “Bette followed Tina’s glance and found the dish cloth, full of betrayal that it was, looking up at her smugly.” I love your writing!! Please continue soon!

    4. How many cold showers must they endure? The slow build makes total sense given all their baggage (Henry!), but in the end they should heed Janis’s advice.

    6. Hey Red great post! I think Tina knows what’s going on with Bette. Bette shouldn’t be afraid to tell Tina what’s going on, and Tina shouldn’t shut down on Bette. They have to be able to talk to each other about their fears and other bad feelings as well as their good feelings. I loved your take off of Willow and Tara’s conversation (from Buffy the Vampire Slayer) there at the end Red! Sweet! I’m lovin’ it! More please!

    11. Yeah, that Henry thing would be difficult to hack through. Bette never doubted her own sexuality as an adult. She’s nervous that Tina will have another itch? PPS.

    13. It feels right that they would have to rebuild their relationship slowly to be solid again, and learn to be together again. And I love to read your description of this seduction game, it’s slow sweet torture, it’s pleasure!

    14. bette was right, they both went through a lot and tina also needs to forget a lot, so maybe skipping it and go back to kissing is the best idea, they can talk between kisses

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