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Great Unexpectations Chapter 31
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"Michigan!?!?", Kit’s voice boomed. Even over the speaker phone her voice had the power to convey the image of the vein that was beginning to throb on her forehead. "Why in the hell do you have to go all the way to East Jesus!!?"
"Kit calm down." Bette tried to reason with her big sister. "It’s not that far away. And this is a pretty good lead. We might actually find her and put an end to this whole thing."
"Well, I’m behind ya Bette", Alice piped up. "Do what you gotta do. Don’t worry about us. Angie and I are having a ball. Shane and I took her to the park in your car and-"
"You did what?", Bette asked.
There was an awkward moment of silence as Alice realized she’d accidentally admitted to breaking the cardinal rule of Bette’s car. That being- Don’t Touch It. "Um…", she stammered. Stalling for time.
"You did what?", Bette repeated. A rising anger beginning to sound.
Standing next to Bette and understanding that the subject needed to be changed, and quick, Tina spoke up. "Hey Alice, it’s me. How’s Angie?"
"Um…" Stymied by her own inability to process any thought beyond ‘Oh shit, Bette’s gonna kill me’ , Alice’s voice fluttered about like a young bird trying to find wind for it’s first flight. Helena was unable to stifle her laughter at Alice’s discomfort.
"You did what?", Bette asked again, before yielding. "No. Answer Tina’s question first."
"Um ok", Alice said. The fear and confusion in her voice were battling it out for supremacy. "Angie’s great. We went to the park…-"
"Why did you need to take my car, Alice?", Bette interrupted. Tina hid a small smirk, knowing how temperamental Bette was when it came to her car. Alice, now remembering that Bette was thousands of miles away and could not inflict any physical harm on her at that moment, grew courage. "Your daughter insisted", Alice cried out.
Bette’s heart softened slightly at that statement. "Go on", she said begrudgingly. Alice, beginning to sense a little bit of light of the end of the tunnel, went on. "She kept saying ‘Mama B, Mama B’ and pointing to your car. When it was time to go to the park she practically threw a hissy fit and refused to get into my car. That’s one stubborn kid you’ve got, Bette." Bette and Tina smiled at each other and rolled their eyes. There was no denying that one. "Uh huh", Bette said, clearing her throat to disguise her chuckle. "So we took your precious car", Alice said. Her courage was now taking on a dangerous level of sarcasm. "But it’s ok. No major accidents to report."
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Well… I guess Bette did what she thought was kindest. There was a lot of humor this chapter… it balanced how it ended nicely. But I’ll admit, I’d hoped that there would be some last-minute miracle towards the end. I’m very glad to see you back with such a good chapter red… but… poor Faye. :( (Did I just type that?!) Great chapter, and p.s. the only eggs I have will be used for early nog. Cheers for the post red
No worries about the hiatus. I’m just grateful for the update. What an emotional rollercoaster. I loved the laugh-out-loud humor of Alice’s death-defying gamble with Bette’s car and the embarrassing revelation of Bette’s ABBA fixation. At the other extreme, of course, was Faye’s death. And here Bette took a gamble because what if Faye had lingered on? Bette clearly sensed the end was imminent and her assurances about Cora were an act of kindness. I expect Bette and Tina will work extra hard to make those assurances a reality.
Glad that you are back. It is okay to be a slacker. Sometimes you just have to do it. I loved the banter between the gang and of course Angie’s stubbornness (just like her mother Bette). Bette did what she thought was right and for Faye it was. I hope that Bette is going to be okay.
Owwww, very painful
Red, One off your best chapter by far!!!!! I did hope that they would find Cora befor Faye died, but please let then find her. Thank you PPS
Wow, redhorse I don’t think that there’s a dry eye left in the house. I never thought I’d feel this for Faye Buckley! Can’t wait for your next update to this story.
Hey Red, Welcome Back and you came back with one heck of a chapter, eh? **The Eh is for our neighbors to the North*** The first chapter of this story I wanted Tina to kick Faye’s ass until she had her in tears & now….I have tears in my eyes at the compassion & kindness Bette showed Faye at the end. Your story telling is descriptive and brilliant. On a side note, thanks for mentioning Traverse City. When people think of MI they only think of the negative stereotype that is associated with Detroit. They don’t realize how many beautiful cities we have across the state. And Traverse City is absolutley lovely. PS.
Red, you are too kind but as we both know, it was and is all you baby! I have to admit, I wasn’t going to read the whole chapter but I just couldn’t stop myself. Excellent as always, although I think you are channeling your inner IC with this turn of events. Where have all of the happy endings gone? LOL. Now, post again!!
Red, you are a very talented writer! This chpater and the whole story are brillant! Great humor and lightness well balanced with the drama. I think many of us would act like Bette did, what do you call it, a kind lie? And hopefully it’s not a lie, just a matter of time before the exact same result… Shame that Faye couldn’t see her daughter one last time… I agree with jb621, Detroit and Michigan are a very beautiful place. I was there a few years back and was amazed by how nice it is! Thanks for mentionning it. Can’t wait to see what will happen now. Please post soon. And thanks!
HEy red, That was awesome. Sometimes doing the worng thing for the right reason is the best that you have to offer. I do believe that giving Faye hope in her final few moments was the proper response from Bette. Sweet to see that Tina was there as Bette’s tower of strength. As for the gang and the car and puppy debacle, how hysterical was it. Just the perfect light relief against the darkness and sorrow to follow. As for Richard’s lashing out, it just showed his frustration at all that was going on. I do hope that the gals will complete their quest and find Cora. More please whenever you get the chance. This tale is an emotional rollercoster ride and so worthwhile. Please continue soon. Many, many thansk from Your Loyal Fan.
wow that was so intense at the end…thx for posting, very moving tale…balanced by humour…get ange the dog…
I write this with tears in my eyes…..so sad. I was hoping Faye would live to see her daughter. Bette did a good thing. She’s so much more a softie than she lets on. Great chapter! PPS!!
Incredible! Strong,emotional,humourous – wow, what a rollercoaster. Will wait patiently for the next chapter of this wonderful story – whenever you’re ready.
Damn this is sad!