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Great Unexpectations Chapter 31
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They met later that evening as planned. The turnabout in Faye’s appearance prompted wild, but unspoken, assumptions regarding the exact source of Faye’s pain medication. She looked to be in great spirits. She even appeared to have a healthy glow about her.
The plan was that they would canvas the streets every day until they found her. Casually stroll through each shop, restaurant, and anywhere else a young woman might be known to frequent. They’d hang out at the beach. They’d go to the mall. In a town this size, they were bound to bump into her eventually. That was the hope anyway. And of course, they would have flyers handy to ask store clerks if she looked familiar. They’d have to have plenty of hundred dollar bills on hand for that part. Memory always improved in the company of dead presidents.
A morning routine quickly developed in which Richard and Tina would meet for a working breakfast while separately Bette and Faye would meet for a stroll. On this particular day they were near the bay. Along the bay was a jogging path. Along the path were assorted park benches. On one of those benches sat Bette and Faye. They sat admiring the water, as was their daily tradition. Over the last few days they’d become quite accustomed to drinking coffee and eating bagels under the warmth of the late morning sun. They enjoyed their food and drink over suppressed giggles.
"Ok", Faye chortled. "How about him?", she asked. She pointed to a man who looked to be in his early 30′s. He was jogging down the path toward them. Close cropped hair adorned his head. No shirt adorned his chest. His six pack abs on display for all the world to see. He sported the perfect tan. Not too dark, just dark enough. He was listening to his iPod and oblivious to the two women on the bench sizing up his good points. Faye had thus begun that days edition of ‘Who Can be Turned?’ It was a friendly contest they’d begun on the first of their morning walks. Each side knew that the other could never truly ‘be turned’, but they took great delight in teasing each other. "Hmm", Bette smiled and lifted her eyebrows pretending to be almost swayed by the passing jogger. "He is attractive. But…no. Sorry."
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Well… I guess Bette did what she thought was kindest. There was a lot of humor this chapter… it balanced how it ended nicely. But I’ll admit, I’d hoped that there would be some last-minute miracle towards the end. I’m very glad to see you back with such a good chapter red… but… poor Faye. :( (Did I just type that?!) Great chapter, and p.s. the only eggs I have will be used for early nog. Cheers for the post red
No worries about the hiatus. I’m just grateful for the update. What an emotional rollercoaster. I loved the laugh-out-loud humor of Alice’s death-defying gamble with Bette’s car and the embarrassing revelation of Bette’s ABBA fixation. At the other extreme, of course, was Faye’s death. And here Bette took a gamble because what if Faye had lingered on? Bette clearly sensed the end was imminent and her assurances about Cora were an act of kindness. I expect Bette and Tina will work extra hard to make those assurances a reality.
Glad that you are back. It is okay to be a slacker. Sometimes you just have to do it. I loved the banter between the gang and of course Angie’s stubbornness (just like her mother Bette). Bette did what she thought was right and for Faye it was. I hope that Bette is going to be okay.
Owwww, very painful
Red, One off your best chapter by far!!!!! I did hope that they would find Cora befor Faye died, but please let then find her. Thank you PPS
Wow, redhorse I don’t think that there’s a dry eye left in the house. I never thought I’d feel this for Faye Buckley! Can’t wait for your next update to this story.
Hey Red, Welcome Back and you came back with one heck of a chapter, eh? **The Eh is for our neighbors to the North*** The first chapter of this story I wanted Tina to kick Faye’s ass until she had her in tears & now….I have tears in my eyes at the compassion & kindness Bette showed Faye at the end. Your story telling is descriptive and brilliant. On a side note, thanks for mentioning Traverse City. When people think of MI they only think of the negative stereotype that is associated with Detroit. They don’t realize how many beautiful cities we have across the state. And Traverse City is absolutley lovely. PS.
Red, you are too kind but as we both know, it was and is all you baby! I have to admit, I wasn’t going to read the whole chapter but I just couldn’t stop myself. Excellent as always, although I think you are channeling your inner IC with this turn of events. Where have all of the happy endings gone? LOL. Now, post again!!
Red, you are a very talented writer! This chpater and the whole story are brillant! Great humor and lightness well balanced with the drama. I think many of us would act like Bette did, what do you call it, a kind lie? And hopefully it’s not a lie, just a matter of time before the exact same result… Shame that Faye couldn’t see her daughter one last time… I agree with jb621, Detroit and Michigan are a very beautiful place. I was there a few years back and was amazed by how nice it is! Thanks for mentionning it. Can’t wait to see what will happen now. Please post soon. And thanks!
HEy red, That was awesome. Sometimes doing the worng thing for the right reason is the best that you have to offer. I do believe that giving Faye hope in her final few moments was the proper response from Bette. Sweet to see that Tina was there as Bette’s tower of strength. As for the gang and the car and puppy debacle, how hysterical was it. Just the perfect light relief against the darkness and sorrow to follow. As for Richard’s lashing out, it just showed his frustration at all that was going on. I do hope that the gals will complete their quest and find Cora. More please whenever you get the chance. This tale is an emotional rollercoster ride and so worthwhile. Please continue soon. Many, many thansk from Your Loyal Fan.
wow that was so intense at the end…thx for posting, very moving tale…balanced by humour…get ange the dog…
I write this with tears in my eyes…..so sad. I was hoping Faye would live to see her daughter. Bette did a good thing. She’s so much more a softie than she lets on. Great chapter! PPS!!
Incredible! Strong,emotional,humourous – wow, what a rollercoaster. Will wait patiently for the next chapter of this wonderful story – whenever you’re ready.
Damn this is sad!