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    Great Unexpectations Chapter 34

    Story written on February 2, 2008 by redhorse.
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    Season 5ish… “Bette. Hold on to something. You’re gonna need to brace yourself.” Bette dutifully slid her arms around Tina’s waist. “Like this?”, she smiled, genuinely this time. Tina flushed at the tender yet firm embrace. “Yeah”, she said softly. “That’ll work.” Tina pulled Bette closer and brought her lips to Bette’s ear and whispered carefully. “We’ve found her.”

    Moments later, joining Tina in the kitchen, Bette looked around and asked, "Is there anything I can do to help?" A strand of Tina’s hair hung in her face while she was preparing the vegetables. "Um yeah", she said. "Could you get the chicken and start on that?" The mocha beauty searched her mental files for exactly how one Bette Porter would go about accomplishing that feat. Tina chuckled. "Didn’t think so." Bette crimsoned and poked Tina gently in the ribs. "You’d better stop teasing me", she said. "But it’s so fun, babe", Tina smirked. "Don’t worry Bette. I think I’ve got it under control. Can you check the table setting, though?"

    "Sure. Table for three. Right?"

    "Bette-"

    "I know, I know. She might recognize me. It’s better if I stay out of sight at first. Doesn’t mean I have to like it."

    "Well", Tina sighed. "I don’t like it either. I really wish you were there. I’m so nervous."

    "Don’t be. You’ll do fine. And if you get in a spot, just excuse yourself and come see me. I’ll be watching everything."

    Tina smiled and leaned in to a soft kiss. "Mmm", she hummed. "I kind of like that. The idea of you watching over me. Making sure I’m ok." Bette kissed the supple lips offered to her. "I’ll always be watching over you, Tina."

    Richard bounded into the kitchen. "Everything’s set with the cameras", he said. Bette and Tina held their close embrace and gazed into each other’s eyes. Smiling, they knew their alone time was over and released each other reluctantly. "Thank you Richard", Bette said.

    "Do you want me to show you how everything works?"

    Bette didn’t. She really didn’t. But she knew that what she wanted didn’t really hold much weight. For the next few hours anyway. She exhaled and extended her right arm. "Lead the way", she sighed. She turned back one last time to find Tina encouraging her with a wink and a smile.

    Richard showed Bette the set-up, which was basically a small desk with an opened laptop computer. He pushed some buttons and the screen came alive. "Here it is", he said as they looked at the black and white digital image. The living room. Empty. Bette had to hand it to Richard, and she really hated doing that, but his camera angle was superb. Bette could see everything from the front door through the entire room. "That’s camera one", he said. "And all you have to do is push the ‘1′ on the keyboard to get camera one. Next, the dining room is camera two."

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    3. I’m sorry you’re bringing “Great Unexpectations” to a close, but I love how you’re going about it. The Betsy/Albert ruse was a hoot. It figures Richard would try to take advantage. Good thing Tina’s so handy with a fork.

    4. Sorry to see this story come to an end but so happy they found her. Hopefully when she wakes, she will listen to them and take their advice, comfort and the protection they offer. This has been a very interesting story from the start, and believe me I had my doubts, as you well remember from my comments early on, that Faye was being honest and genuine. I believe I offered an apology somewhere in there for my comments but, if I did not, please accept my apologies now, I was wrong. You’ve done a wonderful job with this story. Please post soon.

    5. I dunno what upsets me more, that this story is coming to an end or that Cora missed her mom by a few days. *sigh* I hope Cora stays, and lets them all help her. “Bet” let “Albert” off too lightly, with only a fork jab. That doesn’t matter though, once she sees to Cora, I think Bette is going to give Richard a thorough pummeling. Or at least I hope so. I take it Kit and T have something really good worked out (I have an idea what it is), I’ll be waiting to see. Great chapter, red, post when you can. Thanks!

    7. Hopefully Cora will forgive her Mother,and can peacefully morn her passing. Now it up to Bette and Tina to protct her from other evil thing that is lurking in the background. thanks so much for posting

    8. shit, i’m kinda afraid to have dinner with you. stabbed in the leg? if i pass the salt instead of the peeper do i get a bread knife in the eye? another great update red but you and your damn cliffhangers. i’m curious where you’re going with this and don’t worry ladies, red is such a stickler for details that she’s got a long way to go before she can wrap all of this up. oh, she’ll threaten us and swear it’s almost the last one but it will drive her nuts to finish hap hazardly so don’t worry there is plenty of story left! lol. ok, red post when you can and you better have an even better story to tell after tonight…

    10. They finally find her and now they have to tell her that her mother is gone. It sounds like Cora really did love her mother but was unable to live with all that had happened to her in her life. I hope that she allows Bette and Tina into her life. It would be nice to see her around the gang. I hate to see this end and I hope that you will continue to write after you have finished this story.

    11. Brilliant, as always, red. This continues to be one of my favorite stories. Emotional as it was, this chapter also had me cracking up… Betsy and Albert, lovely couple! I wouldn’t have guessed at the onset that I would have felt sad that Faye didn’t have the opportunity to right things with her daughter. Look foward to reading Cora reaction to their story. Thanks for such a wonderful read!

    12. This is so freaking good and we all waiting for this moment, so emotional and hope Caro will let B&T and R to help her and get her life safe. Please post more, thanks!

    14. As usual you’ve outdone yourself. However, the cliffhangers are killers. :) I am glad Cora didn’t take off before they could start to talk to her. I feel so bad for her and hope she will let them help her.

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