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    Great Unexpectations Chapter 35

    Story written on February 18, 2008 by redhorse.
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    Season 5ish…Cora is devastated. Richard is touchy feely. Bette is pissed.

    CLAP!!!! Richard’s hand met harshly inches from Cora’s face.

    "Cora!" Richard said loudly. Nothing. Bette and Tina stood by the sofa where Cora lay. Richard brought his hands together again. Trying to rouse her with the harsh snap of his clap. "Please sweetie. Please wake up", Tina pleaded. Bette ran to the kitchen and soaked a dish towel in cold water under the tap. She wrung the excess from it quickly and ran back to the sofa. "Here. Maybe this will help." Tina folded it lengthwise and placed it on Cora’s forehead.

    CLAP!!!! Again.

    Cora’s head drifted slowly from left to right. Her dry lips parted to the faintest extent. A dim moan escaped. Bette and Tina breathed a collective sigh of relief as Cora began to come to. Richard, who had been stooping over the young woman in heated anticipation of her elusive stirring, fell back on his rump and silently thanked the god he didn’t necessarily believe in.

    The words came softly and almost discernably from her mouth. The trio of onlookers eyed each other questionably. "What did she say?", Tina asked. Bette shook her head. Richard smiled. "Ball three", he whispered. Tina began to ask what that meant but was cut short by the louder groans coming from Cora. "Shh. Shh", Tina soothed, stroking the hair on the young woman’s head. "It’s ok. You’re ok." Tina was overcome with guilt at those words. Cora was not ok. She was a little girl lost. Practically living on the streets. With a twisted father. A dead mother. And complete strangers now as her only source of comfort.

    Cora’s eyes opened hazily. Her field of vision was taken up by three worried faces looking expectantly at her. "What happened?", she asked. "Where am I?" She tried to sit up but was at once urged back down by Bette. "No sweetie. Just, just lay down. Don’t move too quickly." The pounding in Cora’s head agreed with Bette’s words and she lay back down. Her mind, still foggy, was overwhelmed with questions. In the orating of them they could be summed in two ways. "Who are you? What the hell is going on?"

    Tina handed a glass of water to Cora and gently urged her to a half seated/half laying position. "My name is Tina. Tina Kennard. And this is-"

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    2. Oooh, Richard so had that coming. He’s been taking way too many liberties, and that should put him right, the idiot. I really like how well Tina did with Cora. Bette’s right to be proud. Thanks for the post + have fun in the sun, red. cheers!

    3. Wonderful chapter and so happy Tina was able to comfort Cora to some extent, just hope she does not run away from them before hearing everything. So glad that Bette helped Richard learn to keep his damned mits off Tina. She is totally and completely off limits t him and anyone else. No matter how justified and innocent he thinks his actions are. I’m sure Tina will also break his left testicle when she gets the opportunity as well. As grown up as Cora thinks she is she still needs to listen to them and take their advice about protecting her from all the dangerous people looking for her. Have a great time in Florida and come back with reneewed vigor and we wait with great anticipation for the next chapters. Post when you can.

    7. Have fun in the sunny state of Florida, just hope those tornados stay away. The Tigers look ready to go. Bette sure let Richard know that Tina was off limits to him. He is lucky that Bette did not remove his eyes or cut off his hand.

    8. I am so glad that Tina was able to reach Cora. I hope that Bette and Tina can help her through the rough time ahead. Richard had every bit of Bette’s punishment to him coming and probably then some. I hope he realizes that is actually a small price to pay for the disrespect he showed both Tina and Bette. Fantastic chapter!

    10. “The pain was just a bonus.” Love that! Can’t blame Richard for his attraction to Tina, but gotta love Bette for showing her kick-ass side. Powerful emotions with another wonderful chapter. Enjoy your time in Florida. I don’t know where the Tigers train, but I’m in Naples and the weather could not be better! Look forward to seeing where you take Cora and the story.

    13. I tell ya…don’t mess with Bette! I guess Richard had to learn the hard way. Glad to see that Tina was able to give Cora some comfort. Let’s just hope she sticks around long enough to talk to them. Great chapter.

    16. You go Bette let Rich know who in is charge. Hopefully Tina comforting Cora will make her feel safe enough to stick around long enough to hear everything she need to about her mom and the danger from her father. Please let her feel the love and trust B&T to help her get out of the world she has been living in. I hope Richard learned his lesson and gets back to business before he lets her fathers people get the chance to find Cora.

    19. Another fantastic chapter Red! I love this story and can’t wait until you get back so you can send us some more! Loved the line about the pain just being a bonus – Richard should know better than to get touchy feely with Bette’s woman! Mooooore please please please???!!!!

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