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    Great Unexpectations Chapter 4

    Story written on July 7, 2007 by redhorse.
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    Bette and Tina read the Bible all night long. not.

    After several more minutes of Tina’s attentions she gently urged her to her side. "Come here T", she pleaded.

    Tina reluctantly left her post and rose up beside Bette. She was greeted by a soft but deep kiss. "You are fantastic, T. I’d almost forgotten how good it is with you."

    Tina’s eyes clouded over. "I’ve never forgotten, Bette. Not once. I’m so sorry for ever thinking anybody could make me as happy as you do. Thank you for giving me another chance."

    "Thank you for asking, Tina." Bette pulled her close and squeezed. She couldn’t hold her close enough. There was no such thing as ‘close enough’ to when it came to Tina Kennard. "Now, take off that damn dress." she ordered.

    Tina stood up and walked about 4 paces away from Bette and then seductively grinned as she turned around so that Bette could see the whole show. She began to slowly unbutton the front of the dress, teasing Bette with the slight progression of revealed skin that each button offered. After the fifth button Tina could see that Bette’s face was crimsoned and her eyes were transfixed. Her mouth was suddenly as dry as the Sahara and she was trying in vain to moisten her lips. Tina went to the sixth button which was more than midway down her torso, just inches above her navel. As she unbuttoned it Bette’s jaw slackened slightly as she kept her eyes on the striptease. The dress now hung loosely and hints of breasts and abdomen abounded. Tina unfastened the last button and turned around to face the hallway. She slowly began walking toward the bedroom as she eased the dress off her shoulders. With each step the dress slid slowly down her body until at last Tina had stepped neatly out of it, without breaking her sultry stride. Bette gasped as she watched Tina’s naked body walking away from her. "Damn", she finally managed and quickly got to her feet.

    When she reached the bedroom Tina was waiting for her on the bed. She was lying on her side with her head propped up by her hand wearing nothing but a smile. Tina had enjoyed this little act, stripping in front of Bette and teasing her down the hallway. But when she appeared in the doorway Tina quickly realized that Bette held all the cards. Any control she thought she’d had was promptly acquiesced. Tina left the bed to join Bette in the doorway. Tina’s eyes soaked in the sight of her caramel skinned lover. She lifted her hands to caress the long, dark, luscious curls that hung freely. She let her hands travel from Bette’s hair to her shoulders and softly down her arms. "God, Bette. You are so beautiful."

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    5. That Bible reference?? You must mean that they got to “know” each other in the biblical sense, right??Very delicious. It would be difficult to make love so passionately and completely w/someone you despised. PPS. Let the healing begin.

    6. God I love this story!!!!If only it really came true!!!Hmmmm reading the bible can be really fun!Great Chappy Red, look foward to some more B&T lovin!!!!!!

    8. If only the episode “Long Time Coming” had contained that sizzling scene! I like that you’re making them work at resolving their problems: a quick fix would not be convincing. J’adore Mr. Moore. Hope he shows up.

    9. Hi everyone. Red here. Glad you liked this chapter. Love all the bible comments. lol. Rufus, I know what you mean. It was no accident that Tina said “that was a long time coming.” My own little dig at IC I guess. See Ilene, that’s what long time coming means!! It’s not like we were all sitting around saying, “oh, thank god, Bette finally drove that tractor to jodi.” Am I right ladies?Re: michael moore. I’m sure he will be there. As the organizer he’s been there the last two years, just not sure if the volunteers get to meet him or not. even if i don’t though, it will be so cool just to be there. Bye all. I will to post the next chapter in a few days. I’m trying to stay a couple of chapters ahead so that in case i get seriously blocked, I’ll have a little slack time to work it out without you having to wait too long. I’m finishing up chapter 6 right now. –RH

    10. Love it…love it. Can’t say that I was one of those disappointed with them not talking out their problems… plenty of time for that… hot chapter. Exciting with the film festival.

    13. OMG! This was great! Hey, I’m first. I am so supposed to be working and well I looked, and then I read a little and then I had to read the entire chapter. They can’t work it all out by talking it to death…they ahve to have some of the physical passion as that was a huge problem before. Now they can talk a little , before more ….making up. Looking forward to more. PPS.

    14. WOW!Great chapter Red.They so needed to reconnect. Your writing is awesome. I felt the love,tenderness and care they took with each other such raw emotion. I felt like I was there but that could the voyuer in me. My Mother always tells I should read the bible more Somehow I don’t think this is what she means. Keep it coming. pps

    15. Red, I finally caught up with this story. I’m loving it. You are amazing and I am so glad you came back to us so quickly. I know they need to talk, but if you want to delay it with chapters like this, you have my total and complete support :). If only IC could stumble upon your story. I really like how you are having Bette struggle with her fear, but also acknowledging her contributions to the catastrophe their relationship became. Sometimes I think Tina gets an unfair share of the blame because she cheated with a man rather than another woman. Thank you so much for posting. Please post again soon. Its still early, they have the whole night ahead of them :)

    16. well, maybe now that they got this frustration and passion out of their system, they can work on rebuilding their trust. Tina seems so sure of what she wants, she will have to convince Bette that this time it’s for the long run, first, last and forever again. Bette seems to still have some questions about Tina’s recent choices. Thank you for another great chapter.

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