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Half Bliss- Chapter 15
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“Do you need any help? I mean I’d love to help…”
“Sure. Why don’t I call you about it tomorrow and we can go over the details over ice cream.”
“Mmmmm, bribery already?”
“I need to. You’re such a pretty help. Not to mention free…” They chuckled in amusement. The day grew darker and it was almost sun set when Bette realized the lack of interruption from her cellphone. She checked the small device and found it dead. Obviously she had forgotten to charge it this morning. She looked upon it with a frown, both wondering and dreading who had already been frantically calling her. No doubt, Tina and Kit would be worried mad by now for the lack of news.
“Can I borrow you cell? My battery is dead.”
“Yeah, of course. Go ahead.” She smiled with gratitude at the offering of this chic mobile.
“Hey…”
“Bette? Is that you?”
“Yeah, I went to the beach with a friend and my battery died.”
“Thank goodness you’re ok. We’ve been trying to find you.”
“I’m sorry… I’ll be back soon, ok?”
“Yeah… See you soon. I love you.”
“Yeah. Me too. Bye…”
“Thanks…”
“No problem. Ready to go?”
“Yeah, just after this.” Bette indicated the sun in motion to disappear for the night to come. Both of them shifted to sit more comfortably and watch the slow descending sun.
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“I had a great time today.”
“Me too. I’m glad you called.”
“So… Thank you. I’ll talk to you soon?”
“Soon.” They sat awkwardly in the car seats. Both were puzzled. They had a great time and it felt like the best date ever but didn’t they just agree upon friendship?
“I should go now. Call me about the ice cream and info. Bye…” Bette leaned anyway and landed a quick peck on her cheek. Helena tried to fight the blush threatening to make an appearance. She thanked the general darkness of the night that helped concealed her flustered features.
“Bye…” She watched the other brunette sway her way into the house. Helena her eyes as Bette closed the door and took a deep breath to calm her heartbeat. It was like a disco and she felt really warm all of a sudden. A smile made its way to her lips as she thought of Bette again…
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i’m with ash. B and H all the wayyyyyyy. I just saw this story so gotta catch up. Haha. Will leave you a proper comment the next chapter. Keeeeeep writing!
Awesome update. What’s going to happen now? Can’t wait. Thank you :)
Yeeeeeeeeeeesss you were right I loved it specially the second part lol. Just hope that Tina will now take the lead to help Bette through what she went through hey. Bette, Tina and Angelice have already hads enough drama, it i time for loving period. PPVS
I’m liking it better, had my doubts for the fist part!
wow! really enjoyed that! even though i don’t mind the “friendship” of Bette and Helena i do hope thats what it stays at cos i’m a true tibetter – so i very much enjoyed the ending!! pps!
So it’s Bette’s therapist Helena’s ex then? That would be a bit too coincidental, wouldn’t it? And what was it that Tina wanted to tell Bette? They seem to have gotten derailed a bit… Thanks for the post.
well, you know what side of the fence I sit on, but I don’t mind any good story where Bette wins lol…this line struck me as uniquely true: “Couples go to therapy, thinking that by paying another person to inspect their relationship or the dynamics of it, they could salvage years of commitment made.” But little do they know that couples counseling is only a little over 30% effective..people only pay others to analyze why they should break up, not why they should stay together….
you say drama, i say mystery LOL i got a feeling that Helena has some agenda…is she really into pregnant women as they tried to make it seem in season 2? still, i don’t really like where that friendship might go…i don’t like drama, it makes my heart heavy and i’m already 30 pounds overweight LOL like the desperate sex though, really intense … also, i re-read the little tidbit at the beginning, you’re talking about separation, letting go..i hope it’s not your hint for the ending
I certainly liked the last page. The comment about couples therapy is interesting but there are some expert therapists of excellent character who can actually help couples eith reunite effectively or separate without too much drama. The individuals have to make up their minds and then the therapist can help them but if they are undecided or one has a different agenda then it becomes very difficult for them and easy to blame the therapist if one person does not get his or her own way. I have some experience. My mom went to a psychiatrist to get advice on how to reverse my sexuality. When the psychiatrist told her she needed to change ‘her attitude’ she got mad & blamed the psychiatrist. This was all done behind my back and I was told by her later. She does not to this day get it: I do not want to change my sexuality.
I certainly liked the last page. The comment about couples therapy is interesting but there are some expert therapists of excellent character who can actually help couples eith reunite effectively or separate without too much drama. The individuals have to make up their minds and then the therapist can help them but if they are undecided or one has a different agenda then it becomes very difficult for them and easy to blame the therapist if one person does not get his or her own way. I have some experience. My mom went to a psychiatrist to get advice on how to reverse my sexuality. When the psychiatrist told her she needed to change ‘her attitude’ she got mad & blamed the psychiatrist. This was all done behind my back and I was told by her later. She does not to this day get it: I do not want to change my sexuality.
Loved the update! I’m getting the chance to read the emotions each character is going through. Now I will admit I’m a Belena at heart and I too will be on that other side of the fence with a certain few cheering for this pairing. But if you choose to go the other way I will still read it. It’s a good story.
Love this story. Will take more any time you can update. PPVVS